Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer writing things down by my hand, it makes me feel more focused and help me remember the content better so. So sometime I use keyboard type. I always feel so comfortable, but sometimes I write things by my hand I will feel.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Uh, I take on my laptop keyboard every day because I'm a designer student. I usually use it to take notes and keep track of my study tasks or make my study picture. Uh, like teachers, uh, do it on the laptop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to tap on a keyboard when I was in primary school. My mom taught me the basic skills back on them. From that I can use the keyboard on the laptop to type things.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Umm. In my view, I think the only way is to protect more and more. Everyone has their own typing habits and their own, uh, protector skills, so advice from others don't help me much. So I think protect is important.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更直接和有条理。开头用一句主题句直接回答问题,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支撑,同时避免重复和语法错误。注意动词时态与主谓一致,减少不必要的犹豫语。可以用连接词(for example, because, however)让句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand in lectures, I retain key points longer and review them more effectively. However, I sometimes type when I need to write quickly or share notes with classmates.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰并用更准确的词汇描述原因。先直接回答用哪种设备,然后给出具体用途和简单例子。避免填充词(uh, like)和不准确的短语(make my study picture)。用连接词(because, so)提高流畅度。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I am a design student. I use it to take notes, manage my study tasks, and create design sketches using software. Because the laptop is portable, I can work anywhere on campus.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答应更自然并注意时态与表达准确。先给出时间点(when),然后说明谁教的和学到的具体技能,最后可加一句现在的影响。用连接词(when, so, since)保持逻辑。避免不自然的短语(back on them)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. My mother taught me the basic skills, such as touch-typing and finger placement, and since then I have been comfortable typing on laptops for schoolwork.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰且有词汇错误(protect/protector应为practice/practice-related)。需要直接回答方法(例如练习、使用打字软件、正确姿势),并给出具体步骤或实例。减少犹豫和重复,用连接词(for example, by doing, so)增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises and practice for 20 minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy. I also pay attention to proper finger placement and posture to avoid mistakes and fatigue.
× I prefer writing things down by my hand, it makes me feel more focused and help me remember the content better so.
✓ I prefer writing things down by hand; it makes me feel more focused and helps me remember the content better.
问题类型:动词+ -ing 以及主谓一致。句中“by my hand”不自然,应为“by hand”。句子为复合句,主句主语是“It”,谓语应为“helps”,不是“help”。此外两个独立分句应用分号或句号分开,或用连词。建议多注意固定短语(by hand)和主谓一致。
× So sometime I use keyboard type.
✓ So sometimes I use a keyboard to type.
问题类型:句子结构错误和冠词使用。原句中“sometime”应为副词复数“sometimes”;“keyboard type”词序错误且缺冠词,应为“use a keyboard to type”。建议注意副词复数形式和动词不定式结构。
× I always feel so comfortable, but sometimes I write things by my hand I will feel.
✓ I always feel comfortable, but sometimes when I write things by hand I feel differently.
问题类型:句子结构错误和固定短语使用。原句重复且语序混乱,“by my hand”应为“by hand”;结尾的“I will feel”不完整需说明感觉如何,用“feel differently”更自然。建议学习常见短语和完整表达感觉的句型。
× Uh, I take on my laptop keyboard every day because I'm a designer student.
✓ Uh, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I'm a design student.
问题类型:介词使用错误和词类错误。动词“take on”用法不当,应为“use”;“designer student”搭配不自然,应为“design student”或“I am a designer”。建议注意常见动词搭配和名词短语形式。
× I usually use it to take notes and keep track of my study tasks or make my study picture.
✓ I usually use it to take notes, keep track of my study tasks, or make study-related images.
问题类型:冠词使用和词汇搭配不当。原句“make my study picture”不自然,应改为“make study-related images”或“create study materials”。建议学习名词搭配及使用冠词时机。
× I learned how to tap on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
问题类型:过去时使用合适,但动词选择错误。“tap on a keyboard”不如“type on a keyboard”自然。建议记住标准表达“learn to type/type on a keyboard”。
× My mom taught me the basic skills back on them.
✓ My mom taught me the basic skills back then.
问题类型:代词使用错误。短语应为“back then”(那时候),而非“back on them”。建议记忆时间副词短语的固定用法。
× From that I can use the keyboard on the laptop to type things.
✓ Since then I have been able to use the laptop keyboard to type.
问题类型:句子结构与时态。原句“From that”不自然,应为“Since then”;根据时间点到现在可用现在完成时“have been able to”更合适。建议注意表示从过去某时持续到现在的时态。
× Umm. In my view, I think the only way is to protect more and more.
✓ Umm. In my view, I think the only way is to practice more and more.
问题类型:量词/词汇使用错误。原句中“protect”显然误用,语境应为“practice”(练习)。建议区分相近单词并根据语境选择正确词汇。
× Everyone has their own typing habits and their own, uh, protector skills, so advice from others don't help me much.
✓ Everyone has their own typing habits and their own practice skills, so advice from others doesn't help me much.
问题类型:代词和数一致问题。原句“protector skills”应为“practice skills”;“advice”作为不可数名词用第三人称单数谓语,故用“doesn't”而不是“don't”。建议注意不可数名词的谓语形式和词汇选择。
× So I think protect is important.
✓ So I think practice is important.
问题类型:动词+ -ing 及词汇选择错误。原句“protect”错误,应为“practice”;如果用动名词也可说“I think practicing is important.”建议根据语境使用正确名词或动名词形式以表达“练习”。