Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は正直で内容も明確ですが、言い淀みや繰り返しが多く、構造も不十分です。まず主題文で明確に答え（I prefer handwriting.）、次に理由を一つか二つの具体例で述べ、最後にまとめる流れを意識してください。不要な「uh」「I, I」のフィラーを減らし、語順と文法を整える練習をしましょう。例：短い関連語句（memorize better, focus more）や接続語（because, for example, so）を使って論理的に話すと自然に聞こえます。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because I remember information better when I write notes by hand. For example, when I study vocabulary, writing the words and sentences helps me recall them later. So I usually take handwritten notes during classes.

Gợi ý: 答えは必要な情報を含んでいますが、文法ミス（現在進行形/現在形の混同）と繰り返しが目立ちます。まず短い主文でYes + 簡潔な説明（Yes, I do. I work as a marketing manager at a manufacturing company.）を述べ、その後職務内容を具体的に付け加えましょう。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って理由を自然につなげ、二重動詞や不要な反復を避ける練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I work as a marketing manager at a manufacturing company, and my main responsibility is overseas sales. Because of that, I write reports and emails every day to communicate with clients and colleagues.

Gợi ý: この回答は意味がやや不明瞭で、発話の途切れや重複が多いです。まず「いつ習ったか」に直接答えること（I started learning to type at university. など）を心がけ、その後で状況説明（we had to use laptops for classes and exams）を簡潔に付け加えてください。あいまい表現（I have never run run about typing）は避け、正確な動詞や時制を使う練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at university because we had to use laptops for classes and exams. Practicing during lectures and assignments helped me get more comfortable with typing.

Gợi ý: 答えは内容が単純で、一文だけの説明に終始しています。改善方法を具体的に挙げ（practice regularly, use typing software, focus on accuracy）つつ、接続語で論理をつなげると良いです。例えば短期的な練習方法と長期的な成果を分けて述べると説得力が増します。また過去形と現在形の使い分けに注意してください。

Ví dụ: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I typed notes every day, used online typing exercises to increase my speed, and focused on accuracy by correcting mistakes, so my typing gradually got better.

× I prefer handwriting over typing cause, uh, what? Yeah.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember better.

The informal 'cause' should be 'because' in formal responses and the structure 'prefer X over Y' is acceptable but 'prefer X to Y' is more standard. Remove filler words ('uh', 'what? yeah') and make the sentence complete and clear. Use 'helps me remember better' to explain the reason.

× For for example, uh, when I study, uh, I, I can, I can memorize more, uh, by handwriting.

✓ For example, when I study, I can memorize more by handwriting.

Remove duplicated words and filler sounds. 'For example' is the correct phrase. 'By handwriting' is acceptable to indicate the method; keep the verb tense consistent and concise.

× Yes, I do because currently, uh, I'm work, I'm work for, uh, manufacturing company as marketing manager.

✓ Yes, I do because currently I work for a manufacturing company as a marketing manager.

Use the correct present simple form 'I work' instead of 'I'm work'. Also add articles: 'a manufacturing company' and 'a marketing manager'. Remove filler words.

× My responsibility is uh, overseas sales.

✓ My responsibility is overseas sales.

Remove filler 'uh'. The sentence is acceptable, but for clarity you could say 'My responsibility is overseas sales' or 'I am responsible for overseas sales'. No article is needed before 'overseas sales'.

× Uh, that's why I, I have to make a report and I have to, I have to make e-mail and so on.

✓ That's why I have to write reports and send emails, and so on.

Reduce repetition and use plural 'reports' and 'emails' for general duties. Use verbs 'write' and 'send' which are more natural collocations. Remove filler repetitions.

× It to be honest, I have never, I have never run run about typing.

✓ To be honest, I have never practiced typing seriously.

Start with 'To be honest' and use a clear verb 'practiced' instead of 'run run about'. 'Practiced typing seriously' conveys intended meaning and removes repetition and filler.

× Uh, but let's uh, when I was in university, uh, we, we have to, we have to use, uh, laptop, uh, to take lesson, take class uh, and during the class uh, for exam we have.

✓ When I was at university, we had to use laptops to attend classes, and we had exams during class.

Use past tense 'had to' to match 'when I was at university'. Use plural 'laptops' and natural verbs 'attend classes'. Reorder phrases for clarity: 'we had exams during class'. Remove filler words.

× It just experience, uh, I mean, uh, through, through accumulated experience of typing, uh, my typing skill, uh, was improving.

✓ Just through experience, my typing skill has improved.

Use present perfect 'has improved' to indicate a change up to now. 'Through experience' is the correct phrase; 'accumulated experience of typing' is wordy. Remove fillers and make sentence concise and natural.