Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because since I graduate from high school I don't use much pens or to write.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because I do some work on my laptop so I use it almost every day.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I think that was very early, yes, almost nine years old.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I don't force myself to, uh, practice my typing. Just do my uh, assignments or my homework or check my e-mail while I will practice my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并直接回应问题,句子结构需要更准确,避免语法错误和多余词。建议:1) 开头给出明确的主题句,例如“I prefer typing.” 2) 用一到两句简洁的理由,注意时态和介词(例如“since graduating high school”或“after high school”)。3) 可以补充具体情况或例子让内容更具体。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing. Since graduating from high school, I rarely use pens because most of my work and communication are digital, so typing is faster and more convenient.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,直接且自然,但可以更紧凑并加入细节以提高信息量。建议:1) 直接指出设备(laptop),然后给出频率和原因。2) 使用连接词使句子更连贯,例如“so”或“therefore”。3) 如能提供具体用途(学习、工作、emails)更佳。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because I do most of my work and coursework on it, so I use the built-in keyboard almost daily.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然的表达和准确的时间点,避免犹豫语气。建议:1) 直接给出年龄或时间,例如“I learned to type when I was about nine.” 2) 可以补充学习方式或场景(在学校或自学)来增加细节。3) 删除不必要的填充词如“I think”或“yes”。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about nine years old, mostly at school during computer lessons.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够精炼且有许多口头禅,语法也需改进。建议:1) 开头用清晰句子说明是否有刻意练习,例如“No, I don't practice deliberately.” 2) 用一两句说明日常如何通过实际使用提升(doing assignments, emails),用连词连接想法。3) 避免填充词“uh”,并注意时态一致。
Ví dụ: I don't practice typing deliberately; I improve it naturally by doing assignments and checking emails on my laptop, which helps me get faster and more accurate over time.
× I prefer typing because since I graduate from high school I don't use much pens or to write.
✓ I prefer typing because since I graduated from high school I haven't used many pens or written much.
错误类型:时态与句子结构混乱(对应列表中第5、6、26项,但主要为过去时与现在完成时使用错误)。解释:原句中使用了 since 引导的时间状语,表示从过去某一时间点持续到现在,应使用过去式或现在完成时“graduated”和“haven't used”。另外,“much pens”不符合可数名词用量词,应使用“many pens”;“or to write”结构不自然,应改为过去分词/不定式的正确形式或被动结构,此处用“written much”更简洁。建议:当使用 since 表示从过去延续到现在时,用过去完成或现在完成时态(例如:since I graduated ... I haven't used ...)。可数名词用 many,写作相关动作用 have/has + past participle(written)。
× Yes, of course, because I do some work on my laptop so I use it almost every day.
✓ Yes, of course. I do some work on my laptop, so I use it almost every day.
错误类型:句子结构与衔接(对应列表第26项和第16项)。解释:原句中连词“because”与句首“Yes, of course”重复因果关系,造成冗余并影响流畅。把句子分为两句或用恰当连词更自然;同时在复合句中需要逗号分隔主句与从句。建议:表肯定时可先简短回答“Yes, of course.”随后用独立句说明原因或用逗号加连词连接。
× I think that was very early, yes, almost nine years old.
✓ I think that was very early — I was almost nine years old.
错误类型:过去时态与主语省略(对应列表第5与第23项)。解释:原句缺少主语“I”与适当的人称动词,应为“I was almost nine years old”。另外,句子中用逗号断开不自然,改为破折号或句号更清晰。建议:表达年龄时使用主语+be动词的过去式(I was ...)。
× I don't force myself to, uh, practice my typing. Just do my uh, assignments or my homework or check my e-mail while I will practice my typing.
✓ I don't force myself to practice my typing. I just do my assignments or homework or check my e-mail, and that helps me practice my typing.
错误类型:情态/时态与动词用法混乱(对应列表第4、6、8、26项)。解释:原句中断续词太多且“while I will practice my typing”时态错误。不会用“will”表达将来发生的常规同时行为;此外“Just do my... ”缺少主语。更自然的表达是用独立句并说明这些活动如何帮助练习,例如用“that helps me practice...”或使用现在进行/一般现在时表示习惯。建议:保持句子主语一致,使用一般现在时描述习惯(I do ... which helps me ...),不要在从句中滥用 will。