Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because typing is very convenient for me. I'm used, I'm get too used to use the electronic devices every day. So for me I have more opportunity to time not only on the cell phone, iPad and laptop and those kind of devices are. MMM.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I tap on laptop keyboard everyday because laptop it's portable and I can take it wherever I want. So I have a lot of homework during these days so I need to finish on the laptop. Say for example yesterday I was type on the subways when I tried to finish my work.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I remember it was in my middle high school period. I remember the time we do have computer classes and the teacher told us how to type on the keyboard and we need to pass those kind of examination because they believe it's helpful our further education and our career.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I never thought about those kind of question because I never tried to improve my tapping skills because I think it's just a normal thing for us. If you're doing every day, you don't even think about it. You just typing on the computer and do your homework and your items stuff on the computer. I never thought about improve it.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持句子简洁,避免重复和语法错误。可以先给出明确立场,然后用1-2个具体原因支撑(如方便、速度、易于编辑),并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。另外注意时态和词汇搭配(例如 “used to” 与 “get too used to” 用法不当)。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents easily and use different devices like my laptop or phone. As a result, I usually finish tasks more quickly than when I write by hand.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好但需改进语法和词汇准确性,避免口语填充词。第一句应简洁明确,随后用1-2个具体原因和一个简短例子支持。注意冠词、动词形式和单词选择(例如 “tap” 应为 “type”,“the subway” 单数形式)。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. I often do my homework on it, and yesterday I finished an assignment on the subway while commuting to school.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 需要用更自然的时间表达并减少重复(不要两次说“I remember”)。用一两句话说明时间和学习方式,补充具体细节(如课程内容或考试类型)。注意句子结构和词序(例如 “helpful for our future education and career”)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in middle school during computer classes. Our teacher taught touch-typing and we had to pass a practical exam because they believed these skills would be useful for our future studies and careers.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复且语法错误较多。应先直接回答(例如“I haven't actively improved it”),然后补充原因并可提出将来打算。尽量使用简洁句子,避免冗长重复,并纠正动词短语(例如 “improve my typing”)。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I haven't actively tried to improve my typing because I use it every day and it feels natural. However, I might try online typing practice or lessons in the future to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing because typing is very convenient for me.
✓ I prefer typing because it is very convenient for me.
原句中重复使用“typing”显得冗余,且主语与从句主语不清晰。将第二个“typing”改为代词“it”可以避免重复并使句子更自然。建议用代词替代已提到的名词以提高连贯性。
× I'm used, I'm get too used to use the electronic devices every day.
✓ I'm used to using electronic devices every day.
这是现在时态和动词搭配问题。短语“used to”后面跟动词时应使用动名词(-ing)。不能说“I'm get”或“to use”;正确结构为“I am used to using...”。建议记住固定结构“be used to + ving”。
× So for me I have more opportunity to time not only on the cell phone, iPad and laptop and those kind of devices are. MMM.
✓ So for me I have more opportunities to spend time on my cell phone, iPad, laptop and those kinds of devices.
原句存在介词和名词复数问题:表示“花时间”应使用短语“spend time on”;“opportunity”应为复数“opportunities”更符合语境;“those kind of”应为“those kinds of”或“that kind of”。同时去掉多余的“are”。建议学习常用短语“spend time on”和名词单复数一致。
× I tap on laptop keyboard everyday because laptop it's portable and I can take it wherever I want.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because a laptop is portable and I can take it wherever I want.
存在第三人称单数和动词选择问题:动词“tap”不如“type”准确;“everyday”作形容词,作副词应为“every day”;在陈述单数名词时需要冠词“a”;主语为“laptop”时第三人称单数动词应为“is”,不能写“laptop it's”。建议区分“everyday”(日常的)和“every day”(每天),并注意主谓一致与冠词用法。
× So I have a lot of homework during these days so I need to finish on the laptop.
✓ I have a lot of homework these days, so I need to finish it on the laptop.
时态和代词使用问题:“during these days”不如“these days”自然;“finish”需要宾语,这里应加“it”;句子间用逗号连接更自然。建议注意及物动词需要宾语,并用惯用表达“these days”。
× Say for example yesterday I was type on the subways when I tried to finish my work.
✓ For example, yesterday I was typing on the subway when I tried to finish my work.
过去进行时与动名词形式错误:应使用过去进行时“was typing”,而不是“was type”;“subways”在此应为单数“subway”或去复数视具体情况(搭乘单次地铁通常用单数);另外“Say for example”不自然,改为“For example”。建议掌握过去进行时的结构“was/were + -ing”。
× I remember it was in my middle high school period.
✓ I remember it was during my middle and high school period.
时态与短语搭配问题:使用“during”更合适来表示在某一时期;“middle high school”不标准,应分为“middle and high school”或“middle school”/“high school”。建议使用标准教育阶段表达并用“during”表示时间段。
× I remember the time we do have computer classes and the teacher told us how to type on the keyboard and we need to pass those kind of examination because they believe it's helpful our further education and our career.
✓ I remember the time we had computer classes, and the teacher taught us how to type on the keyboard. We needed to pass those kinds of examinations because they believed it would help our further education and careers.
时态和名词及冠词错误:讲述过去经历应使用过去时(had, taught, needed, believed);“those kind of examination”应为“those kinds of examinations”(名词与修饰一致并用复数);“it's helpful our further education and our career”需改为“it would help our further education and careers”(语序与动词形式更自然)。建议统一使用过去时讲述过去事件,并注意数的一致与时态匹配。
× To be honest, I never thought about those kind of question because I never tried to improve my tapping skills because I think it's just a normal thing for us.
✓ To be honest, I never thought about those kinds of questions because I never tried to improve my typing skills; I think it's just a normal thing for us.
句子结构与名词形式错误:“those kind of question”应为“those kinds of questions”;“tapping”应为“typing”;句子中重复使用“because”使结构笨拙,改为分号或重组句子更清晰。建议注意名词复数和用词选择,并避免重复连词导致句子冗长。
× If you're doing every day, you don't even think about it.
✓ If you do it every day, you don't even think about it.
动词+ -ing形式使用问题:条件句中表达习惯应使用一般现在时“do”,而不是现在进行时“you're doing”,且省略不必要副词顺序,“every day”放在动词后。建议在条件句中使用正确时态表达习惯动作。
× You just typing on the computer and do your homework and your items stuff on the computer.
✓ You just type on the computer and do your homework and other stuff on the computer.
主谓一致与词汇选择问题:“You just typing”缺少助动词或应改为一般现在时“you just type”;“your items stuff”不自然,改为“other stuff”。建议保持主谓一致并使用自然搭配如“do your homework”/“other stuff”。
× I never thought about improve it.
✓ I never thought about improving it.
时态和动名词结构错误:“think about”后应接动名词“improving”,不能直接接不定式或动词原形。建议记住“think about + -ing”的固定搭配。