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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer typing because in today's societies the technology or information is the developing and everyone will use their phones or their computers to help them typing, but handwriting is very time consuming.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

I type on a laptop keyboard every days because I have my assignments in. This assignment is usually finished online, so I need to type the each homework.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

Maybe when I started the universities because before I am become adults in my Senior High School or primary schools, the teacher teaches us how to handwriting but he didn't told us to use the phones or the other ignored electronic advices.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

I think the efficient way to improve my typing is to use it on typing every day. Because only you pay, the efforts in your typing ability can be improved. For example, before I became an adult because I can't use a electronic device, so I didn't have the opportunities to help me typing.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。开头先给出明确立场,然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免语法错误和冗长表述。注意时态与单复数(e.g. "society" 而非 "societies"),以及更地道的短语(e.g. "time-consuming")。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting. It’s faster and more convenient because I can edit and share documents easily on my computer or phone.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接并注意语法(单复数、冠词和词序)。用一两句说明原因,避免重复。可以用具体频率词和清晰的短语来增强表达。

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because most of my assignments are submitted online, so I usually write and edit my homework on my laptop.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 44.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并使用正确时态。先给出明确时间点,然后解释背景。避免不自然的词组(如 "become adults"、"ignored electronic advices"),用更地道的表达。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I started university. At school we mostly practiced handwriting, so I didn't have many opportunities to use computers until then.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要简洁明确,提供具体方法和有逻辑的支持句。避免模糊或错误的句子结构(如 "only you pay")。可以列举练习方法和频率,使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day, using online typing lessons and timed tests. For example, I do 15 minutes of typing drills daily to increase speed and accuracy.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× I prefer typing because in today's societies the technology or information is the developing and everyone will use their phones or their computers to help them typing, but handwriting is very time consuming.

I prefer typing because in today's society technology and information are developing, and everyone uses their phones or computers to help them type, but handwriting is very time-consuming.

句子中时态与主谓一致问题:使用一般现在时描述事实或习惯,应使用复数谓语(are, develop)和第三人称单数形式(uses)。另外,“help them typing”结构应为“help them + base verb(type)”。“time consuming”作形容词应连字符“time-consuming”。建议:用一般现在时(are, uses),将动词改回原形(help them type),在复合形容词处加连字符。

Singular and plural issue

× I type on a laptop keyboard every days because I have my assignments in.

I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have my assignments to do.

“every day”(每天)中day为单数,不能用复数形式days。原句“have my assignments in”不地道,正确表达是“have assignments to do”或“have my assignments due”。建议:使用固定短语“every day”,并用不定式结构表示要做的作业。

Article errors

× This assignment is usually finished online, so I need to type the each homework.

This assignment is usually finished online, so I need to type each homework.

“the each homework”中错误地在不定量词each前使用定冠词the。each后接单数可数名词,正确用法为“each homework”或更自然地“each piece of homework”/“each assignment”。建议:去掉定冠词,或改为更自然的表达。

Past tense issue

× Maybe when I started the universities because before I am become adults in my Senior High School or primary schools, the teacher teaches us how to handwriting but he didn't told us to use the phones or the other ignored electronic advices.

Maybe when I started university, because before I became an adult in senior high school or primary school, the teacher taught us how to handwrite, but he didn't tell us to use phones or other electronic devices.

该句存在多处时态和形式错误:1) “started the universities”应为“started university”或“started university studies”;2) “before I am become adults”应为过去时“before I became an adult”;3) 教师的动作应使用过去时“taught”,不是现在时“teaches”;4) “handwriting”名词误用,应该用动词短语“how to handwrite”;5) “didn't told”是助动词did后应接动词原形“tell”;6) “ignored electronic advices”不自然,正确为“electronic devices”。建议:整句使用过去时态,修正动词形式与名词搭配,使用常见词汇。

Verb + -ing form

× I think the efficient way to improve my typing is to use it on typing every day.

I think the most efficient way to improve my typing is to practice typing every day.

“use it on typing”搭配错误,动名词用法不当。应使用动词短语“practice typing”或“use it by typing”。另外形容词级别应用最高级“most efficient”来表示最佳方式。建议:用固定搭配“practice typing”并使用“most efficient”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Because only you pay, the efforts in your typing ability can be improved.

Because only by practising can your typing ability improve.

原句代词和结构混乱:“only you pay”不符合语义,可能想表达“只有通过练习”。主语和代词指代不清,应使用被动或倒装结构强调方式。建议:用“only by practising”引出方式,保持主语和动词一致,并直接表达能力提升(improve)。

Past tense issue

× For example, before I became an adult because I can't use a electronic device, so I didn't have the opportunities to help me typing.

For example, before I became an adult, because I couldn't use electronic devices, I didn't have the opportunity to practise typing.

时态和动词形式需一致:既然是过去,应使用过去时“couldn't”。“a electronic device”中冠词与辅音发音不符,应为“an electronic device”或复数“electronic devices”。“opportunities to help me typing”结构错误,应为“opportunity to practise typing”或“opportunities to practise typing”。建议:保持过去时态,修正冠词及固定搭配(practice typing)。

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