Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing us as usual because typing is quick while handwriting is. Tired me.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because my job is back office to marketing online.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
The first time I learn to type on keyboard is when I was in elementary school. The teacher taught me how to type quickly and I am I was prepared it.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
In order to improve typing quicker, it is quite important to practice reputation, because reputation is to become accustomed.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答は主題に直接触れていますが、文法ミスと不自然な表現が目立ちます。語順や冗長表現を修正し、最大5文以内で自然に述べる練習をしてください。具体的には「as usual」は不必要、"while handwriting is. Tired me"の代わりに理由を完全な文で述べるべきです。接続詞(because, since, while)を正しく使い、理由を1〜2具体例で補強しましょう。発音で伝わりにくい部分は短い明瞭な文で解決します。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is much faster than handwriting. Typing also reduces fatigue when I need to write a lot, so I can work more efficiently.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で目的に触れていますが、語順や語彙の選択が不自然です("back office to marketing online"は誤り)。職務内容を明確にし、接続詞で理由をつなぎ、簡潔に説明しましょう。また一文で終わらせると良いですが、必要なら1文追加して具体例を述べてください。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually type on a desktop keyboard because I work in online marketing support. For example, I prepare reports and update product listings every day.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 文法(時制と助動詞)と冗長な表現を直す必要があります。過去の出来事なので過去形を使い、不要な語句("I am I was prepared it")は削除してください。主題文で時期を述べ、その後でどのように学んだかを具体的に説明すると良いです。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. My teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practiced typing games to improve speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 語彙の誤用("reputation"→"repetition/practice")と不自然な文構造を修正してください。目的と方法を明確にし、具体的な練習方法(タイピングソフト、毎日何分など)を挙げると説得力が増します。接続詞で論理的に繋げ、簡潔な文で述べてください。
Ví dụ: To improve my typing speed, I practice every day using online typing exercises for about 20 minutes. Regular repetition helps me become more accurate and faster.
× I prefer typing us as usual because typing is quick while handwriting is. Tired me.
✓ I prefer typing as usual because typing is quick while handwriting makes me tired.
The original contains extra word 'us' and fragments without a main verb ('Tired me'). This is a sentence structure error. Combine ideas into one complete sentence and use a verb phrase 'makes me tired' to show cause and effect. Remove 'us' which is incorrect here and use 'as usual' after 'typing'.
× Yes, I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because my job is back office to marketing online.
✓ Yes, I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because my job is in back-office online marketing.
The phrase 'is back office to marketing online' is ungrammatical. This is a sentence structure error. Use the preposition 'in' and the compound noun 'back-office' and reorder words to 'online marketing' to express the intended meaning clearly.
× The first time I learn to type on keyboard is when I was in elementary school.
✓ The first time I learned to type on a keyboard was when I was in elementary school.
Tense is inconsistent: 'learn' should be past 'learned' because the event occurred in the past; 'is' should be 'was' to match past tense. Also add the article 'a' before 'keyboard'.
× The teacher taught me how to type quickly and I am I was prepared it.
✓ The teacher taught me how to type quickly, and I was prepared.
The original has redundant 'I am I was' and an unnecessary object 'it', causing sentence structure errors. Keep past tense 'was' to match 'taught' and remove extra words. Use a comma before 'and' to join clauses.
× In order to improve typing quicker, it is quite important to practice reputation, because reputation is to become accustomed.
✓ In order to improve typing quickly, it is important to practice regularly, because repetition helps you become accustomed to it.
Several issues: 'quicker' is comparative but 'quickly' adverb is appropriate here. 'practice reputation' is incorrect; the intended word is 'practice regularly' or 'repetition'. 'reputation' is wrong word choice. 'because reputation is to become accustomed' is ungrammatical; use 'repetition helps you become accustomed to it.' This fixes verb + -ing and word choice problems.