Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Personally, I prefer handwriting because it's more flexible. Although I know that typing is a more efficient way to deliver information, is lack of impressive handwriting. UMM is a more lively way to help me memorize and I can add some stretches.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, almost every day because my major is business analytics. All I need to process my study like typing some codes and do some programming and typing documents on my laptop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
In my primary school, I guess there were computer lessons. We started from learning to type a single word and then connect several words into a sentence. The teacher told us to use some applications to had some trainings.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Actually just repeat practicing typing on the keyboard. I think you need to be very familiar with the keyboard so that you can you know where the character you need without any thinking and checking.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更流利和条理清晰。注意语法错误(如“is lack of impressive handwriting”应改为“my handwriting is not impressive”),避免填充语(如“UMM”),并在主题句后用一到两个连词短语补充具体原因或例子。控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can draw small diagrams and highlight key points, which makes review easier later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并改进句子结构。避免重复(如两次提到“typing”),并用连词使句子更自然。补充一两个具体细节说明为什么用笔记本而非台式机。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop almost every day because my course in business analytics requires coding and writing reports. Since I often work in different buildings, a laptop is more convenient than a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更确定且语法正确。避免不必要的犹豫词(如“I guess”),把过去发生的事情用过去时清楚表达,并修正动词形式(如“had some trainings”应为“do some training”或“have some practice”)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school during computer lessons. We began with single words and gradually moved on to sentences, and the teacher assigned typing practice software for homework.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更丰富且语法准确。避免口语填充(如“you know”),用一两个连贯的句子说明具体方法(例如使用练习软件、盲打练习、设置定时练习等),并说明效果。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by doing daily drills on a typing website and practicing touch typing for 20 minutes a day. This helps me type faster without looking at the keys and reduces mistakes.
× Although I know that typing is a more efficient way to deliver information, is lack of impressive handwriting.
✓ Although I know that typing is a more efficient way to deliver information, I lack impressive handwriting.
句中缺少主语与动词搭配。原句用“is lack of impressive handwriting”不符合英语语法,正确应使用主语“I”加动词“lack”。建议记住“lack”作动词时后面直接接宾语或用“lack of”作名词短语。
× UMM is a more lively way to help me memorize and I can add some stretches.
✓ Handwriting is a more lively way to help me memorize things, and I can add some sketches.
原句“UMM”不明确,应改为指代前文的手写(handwriting)。且“stretches”与语境不符,应该是“sketches”(草图)或“annotations”(注释)。句子也缺少宾语“things”。建议确保代词或插入语明确,并使用与语境匹配的词。
× All I need to process my study like typing some codes and do some programming and typing documents on my laptop.
✓ All I need for my studies is to type some code, do some programming, and type documents on my laptop.
原句结构混乱,缺少系动词和不定式的一致性。应使用“All I need ... is to + 动词”结构,并注意“code”作为不可数名词通常不用复数形式。建议复习“All ... is to do ...”句型及不可数名词用法。
× In my primary school, I guess there were computer lessons.
✓ In my primary school, I guess there were computer lessons.
句子本身语法无误,保持原样。这里使用“there were”表达过去存在某物,符合There be 用法。提示:若不认为有错误,可保留原句。
× The teacher told us to use some applications to had some trainings.
✓ The teacher told us to use some applications to have some training.
原句将不定式后使用了过去式“had”,不符合英语结构,应使用动词原形“have”构成不定式“to have”。此外“training”通常为不可数名词,不要用复数“trainings”。建议记住“不定式to 后接动词原形”。
× Yes, almost every day because my major is business analytics. All I need to process my study like typing some codes and do some programming and typing documents on my laptop.
✓ Yes, almost every day because my major is business analytics. All I need for my studies is to type some code, do some programming, and type documents on my laptop.
原句时态与结构需一致。第一句现在时正确,但第二句应使用一般现在时和不定式结构表达习惯性动作;并注意“study”应用复数“studies”或用“my study”改为“my studies”。同时“codes”改为“code”。建议统一使用一般现在时描述日常活动,并注意名词单复数规则。
× Actually just repeat practicing typing on the keyboard.
✓ Actually, I just repeatedly practice typing on the keyboard.
原句“repeat practicing”结构不自然,动词重复且缺主语。应使用“I ... practice”或“keep practicing”。如果使用动名词,可说“Just keep practicing typing on the keyboard.”建议学习动词搭配:动词后接动名词或不定式时要注意常见固定搭配。
× I think you need to be very familiar with the keyboard so that you can you know where the character you need without any thinking and checking.
✓ I think you need to be very familiar with the keyboard so that you know where the characters you need are without any thinking or checking.
原句中副词短语和代词位置混乱,重复了“you”。“where the character you need”缺少谓语位置,正确应为“where the characters you need are”。并用“or”连接两个并列的名词短语。建议注意从句中动词位置,避免重复代词,并把副词短语放在合适位置。