Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 많이 중복되고 문법 오류(예: prefer typing than → prefer typing to, more easier → easier)와 어휘 선택 문제가 있습니다. 답변 구조가 불분명하고 이유 설명이 중복되어 전달력이 떨어집니다. 개선을 위해서는 (1) 주제 문장을 명확히 말하고, (2) 이유를 1~2개만 간결하게 제시하며, (3) 연결어(for example, because)를 적절히 사용하고, (4) 문법적 표현( prefer A to B, easier than)을 바로잡으세요. 또한 문장 수는 3문장 내외로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for coding and essay writing. For example, typing lets me edit and format my work quickly, which saves time. Because of that, I find typing much more efficient than handwriting.

Gợi ý: 중복된 단어(예: I I, it it)와 어순 오류(computer science) 및 부정확한 표현(a desktop or laptop keyboard)를 고쳐야 합니다. 답변은 직접적으로 ‘Which one?’에 답하고 간단한 이유와 예시를 덧붙이는 구조가 좋습니다. 연결어(so, because)를 적절히 사용하고 문장을 2~3개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I use both desktop and laptop keyboards every day because my major is computer science and I often code and attend team meetings. For example, I use a desktop for heavy development work and my laptop when I’m in meetings or on the go. This routine makes typing a natural part of my day.

Gợi ý: 문장 구조가 어색하고 시제 및 어순 오류가 있습니다(learned how to type, in elementary school, first grade). 정보가 중복되고 불필요하게 긴 문장이 많습니다. 개선하려면 연대기 순으로 간결하게 말하고, 나이나 학년 같은 구체적 정보를 정확한 문장으로 제시하세요. 연결어로 when나 because를 사용해 명확히 설명하세요.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in first grade at elementary school, around eight years old. At that time, basic computer and coding lessons were part of our curriculum, so typing quickly became an essential skill for me.

Gợi ý: 표현이 반복되고 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다(keyboard ability, typing keyword). 문장을 현재 습관과 과거 경험으로 나누어 명확히 말하세요. 방법(methods)을 구체적으로 제시하고 기간·결과(three months, improved)를 자연스럽게 연결하는 표현을 쓰세요.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day and taking a typing class to learn proper technique. At first it was difficult, but after practicing for three months I became much faster and more accurate.

× I prefer typing than handwriting because typing is more easier for me to do a coding or writing the essays.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is easier for me to do coding or write essays.

'Prefer' is followed by 'to' not 'than'. 'More easier' is incorrect; use either 'more' or the comparative form 'easier' alone. Use uncountable or general forms: 'do coding' (or 'code') and 'write essays' rather than 'writing the essays'. Suggestion: learn collocations with 'prefer' and use correct comparative forms.

× So and then typing is much easier to to receive to give my energy because typing is more harder than writing.

✓ Typing is also much easier for me than handwriting because writing is harder.

The sentence contains redundant conjunctions ('so and then') and repeated words ('to to'). 'Much easier to receive to give my energy' is unclear and ungrammatical; simplify to compare ease. 'More harder' is incorrect because 'harder' already is comparative. Suggestion: remove redundant fillers and express one clear idea per sentence.

× Writing is a little bit difficult for me.

✓ Writing is a little difficult for me.

'A little bit difficult' is conversationally acceptable but 'a little difficult' is slightly more natural in written English. Keep determiners consistent. Suggestion: prefer 'a little difficult' or 'a bit difficult' depending on formality.

× So that's the reason why.

✓ That's the reason.

'That's the reason why' is redundant; use 'That's the reason' or 'That's why' but not both. Suggestion: choose the shorter clear expression.

× Yes, I always type a desktop or laptop keyboard everyday because my major is compare science so I have to I I always have to code about my project and then have the meeting with my team members.

✓ Yes, I always type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because my major is computer science, so I always have to code for my projects and have meetings with my team members.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'type on a keyboard'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'Compare science' is incorrect; correct term is 'computer science'. 'Code about my project' should be 'code for my projects'. Include plural 'projects' or keep singular consistently. Suggestion: check fixed phrases (type on, every day) and correct field names.

× So I always type in the keyboard. But it it is easy for me so I really like that.

✓ So I always type on the keyboard. It is easy for me, so I really like it.

Use 'on the keyboard' not 'in the keyboard'. Remove duplicated 'it'. Use 'like it' instead of 'like that' for clarity. Suggestion: practice common prepositions with devices and avoid duplicate words.

× I learned how to type the keyboard is when I was elementary school, like first grade because many people are trying to do the coding at that moment.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in elementary school, around first grade, because many people were starting to learn coding then.

Use past tense 'were starting' or 'were trying' to match 'learned'. Include preposition 'in' with 'elementary school' and 'on the keyboard'. 'At that moment' is awkward; use 'then'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct prepositions.

× So it's our essential course to type the code. So I was 8 years old.

✓ So it was an essential course to learn coding. I was eight years old.

Use past tense 'was' to match earlier context. 'Our essential course' is odd; 'an essential course' or 'a required course' is better. Write numbers under ten in words in formal writing: 'eight'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past narrative and choose appropriate articles.

× I it's my first time to type on laptop.

✓ It was my first time typing on a laptop.

Use 'It was my first time' with gerund 'typing' rather than 'to type'. Include article 'a' before 'laptop'. Suggestion: use 'first time' + gerund structure and include articles.

× I always practice how to type and then where is the keyboard every day.

✓ I always practice typing and finding the keys on the keyboard every day.

After 'practice' use gerund 'typing' not 'how to type'. 'Where is the keyboard' is a question form; instead use 'finding the keys' or 'knowing where the keys are'. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'practice' and correct word order for statements.

× So I I took the class how to type the keyword well.

✓ So I took a class on how to type the keys well.

Use 'took a class' with article 'a'. Use 'on how to' to indicate the topic. 'Keyword' is incorrect; use 'keys' or 'keyboard'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and include articles.

× So at the first time I was really hard to type, but after three months I improved my typing keyword ability.

✓ At first it was really hard to type, but after three months I improved my typing ability.

Use 'At first' instead of 'at the first time'. 'I was really hard' should be 'it was really hard'. Remove 'keyword' which is incorrect in this context; use 'typing ability'. Maintain past tense consistency. Suggestion: use standard phrases 'At first' and 'typing ability'.