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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

It depends. When I chat with my friends online or use my I prefer typing. But if I, uh, reading some book on my leisure time, I may choose handwriting.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Actually I use the laptop every day because now I'm at home and studies and laptop is convenient to move to everywhere.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

Actually, I don't remember the actual time since I was in the high school and I have my own mobile and I always, uh, type on the keyboard with my friends online and I think at the time I was, uh, learned it.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Maybe I have my own mobile phone and I usually check on my friends, chat with my friends online and every single day I use my mobile to to screw to chatting to, uh, searching for something and at that time.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 答案要更直接并保持自然流畅。避免频繁的停顿和语无伦次,句子不宜过长或重复。应先给出明确立场(例如:I prefer typing),然后用一到两句具体理由支持(比如速度、方便、或笔记更有助记忆)。注意“reading some book”应改为“when I take notes from a book”或“when I write for leisure”。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient for chatting and online work. However, I sometimes choose handwriting when I want to take notes from a book or write more thoughtfully, as it helps me remember better.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁并修正语法错误。先直接回答(I use a laptop every day),然后用一两句说明原因(便携、在家学习更方便)。避免不必要的词语(如“to everywhere”应改为“to move around”或“to take with me”)。

Ví dụ: I use a laptop every day because I study at home and it's portable, so I can move it around the house or take it with me if I need to go out.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答需更有条理并用正确时态。直接给出大致时间(e.g., in high school)然后补充细节,不要含糊其词。减少填充词“uh”。改进语法(例如:I learned to type in high school because I...)。

Ví dụ: I learned to type in high school when I got my first mobile phone and started chatting with friends online, so I practised typing every day.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答应具体说明提高方法並有条理,例如练习速度、使用打字软件或刻意练习。避免重复和不清楚的表达(例如“to screw to chatting”没有意义)。用一两句说明实际做法和效果。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising every day on my phone and laptop, chatting with friends and using online typing tutors to increase speed and accuracy.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× When I chat with my friends online or use my I prefer typing.

When I chat with my friends online or use my phone, I prefer typing.

原句中有词语缺失("use my" 后缺少名词),且结构不完整。此处表示习惯性的动作,应使用动名词(typing)作宾语;同时补全名词(phone)使句子完整。建议在口语中注意不要省略必要的名词。

26: Sentence structure errors

× But if I, uh, reading some book on my leisure time, I may choose handwriting.

But if I'm reading a book in my leisure time, I may choose handwriting.

原句时态和结构混乱,"if I, uh, reading" 不符合从句结构,应使用完成/进行式或be + -ing 形式:"if I'm reading"。此外习惯表达是"in my leisure time" 而不是"on my leisure time"。中文建议:在条件从句中使用正确的动词形式及介词。

6: Present tense issue

× Actually I use the laptop every day because now I'm at home and studies and laptop is convenient to move to everywhere.

Actually I use a laptop every day because I'm at home now and the laptop is convenient to move around.

原句时态和名词搭配有问题:"studies" 放在此处不合适且多余;冠词使用需要改为"a laptop"或加定冠词"the laptop";习惯表达为"move around" 而不是"move to everywhere"。建议:使用一般现在时描述习惯动作,注意冠词和固定搭配。

5: Past tense issue

× Actually, I don't remember the actual time since I was in the high school and I have my own mobile and I always, uh, type on the keyboard with my friends online and I think at the time I was, uh, learned it.

Actually, I don't remember exactly when. Since I was in high school, I had my own mobile and I always typed on the keyboard to chat with my friends online, so I think I learned it then.

原句中时态混用且不一致:描述过去的习惯动作应使用过去时(I had, I typed, I learned)。此外"in the high school" 应为"in high school";"learned it" 需要放在过去时态位置。建议:描述过去发生的事用过去时,并保持时态一致。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Maybe I have my own mobile phone and I usually check on my friends, chat with my friends online and every single day I use my mobile to to screw to chatting to, uh, searching for something and at that time.

Maybe I have my own mobile phone. I usually check messages and chat with my friends online. Every day I use my mobile to chat and to search for things.

原句语序混乱、重复且有无意义词("to to screw to chatting to"),需要拆分成简洁句子并使用正确动词短语(check messages, chat, search for)。建议:说话时思路要清晰,避免重复和填充词,使用常见动词搭配。

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