Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 간단하고 이해는 되지만 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 더 자연스러운 문장을 사용하고 이유를 구체적으로 하나나 두 개로 확장하세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하고, 중복 표현(very easy, very easy)을 피하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit my ideas. For example, I can quickly delete or rearrange sentences when writing on a computer or phone, which helps me organize my thoughts better.

Gợi ý: 응답이 이해되지만 문장 구조가 어색하고 부정 표현이 반복됩니다. 짧고 명확한 주제문을 사용하고 이유를 하나로 정리하세요. 연결어(so, because)를 자연스럽게 사용하고 문법 오류(a little bit heavy -> a bit heavy)를 고치세요.

Ví dụ: I don't usually use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. Instead, I use my smartphone because it's much lighter and more convenient to carry around.

Gợi ý: 내용은 명확하지만 시제와 문법(know -> learned)이 틀렸습니다. 추가로 간단한 배경 정보를 붙여 문장을 풍성하게 만드세요. 연결어(when, so)를 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 하세요.

Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was eight, after I got my first smartphone. At first I practised by sending messages to my family, so I became comfortable typing quickly.

Gợi ý: 응답이 장황하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 핵심 방법을 두세 개로 요약하고 각각을 간단한 이유나 예로 뒷받침하세요. 불필요한 반복과 어색한 표현(call to or text message)을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by texting and chatting on my smartphone every day. I also practice by writing short messages and replying quickly, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it is more easy than handwriting and I can rewrite my opinion very easy.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easier than handwriting and I can rewrite my opinion very easily.

Use of comparative and adverb forms: 'more easy' is incorrect because 'easy' is a one-syllable adjective that forms the comparative by adding -er (easier). 'Very easy' used to modify the verb 'rewrite' is incorrect; an adverb is required, so use 'very easily' or simply 'easily'. Also keep parallel structure: 'easier than handwriting' and 'rewrite my opinion easily'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× No, actually I use my cell phone every day but laptop or desktop keyboard No, because it is little bit heavy and I don't bring it every day.

✓ No. Actually, I use my cell phone every day. I do not use a laptop or desktop keyboard because they are a little heavy and I don't bring them every day.

This sentence has multiple issues: sentence fragmentation and incorrect pronoun/number agreement. 'No' and 'but' are misplaced; sentences should be separated. 'Laptop or desktop keyboard No' is ungrammatical. Use 'do not use' to answer the question and plural pronoun 'them' to refer to laptops/desktops. 'Little bit heavy' should be 'a little heavy' or 'a bit heavy'. Ensure subject-verb clarity and proper sentence boundaries. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 8. At that time I received my first smartphone and then I naturally know how to type on a keyboard.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was eight. At that time I received my first smartphone, and then I naturally learned how to type on a keyboard.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence starts in the past ('learned', 'received') but then uses present 'know'. Maintain past tense to describe past events: use 'learned' or 'came to know'. Also write numbers in words for small numbers in formal speech: 'eight'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I use my smartphone and chatting with my friend through a call to or text message very many times, so I naturally receive the message to typing a keyboard.

✓ I use my smartphone and chat with my friends by calls or text messages very often, so I naturally learned to type on a keyboard.

Mixed verb forms and prepositions: 'use my smartphone and chatting' mixes base form and -ing; make them parallel: 'use... and chat'. 'Through a call to or text message' is incorrect; use 'by calls or text messages'. 'Very many times' is awkward; use 'very often' or 'many times'. 'Receive the message to typing a keyboard' is ungrammatical — likely meant 'learned to type on a keyboard' or 'became comfortable typing on a keyboard.' Use 'learned to type' (infinitive) for result. Also correct pluralization 'friend' -> 'friends' as appropriate. Grammar problem type ID:8