Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자주 끊기고 불필요한 마침표가 있어 자연스럽지 않습니다. 주제문을 분명히 말하고, 이유를 연결어(예: because, so, therefore)로 이어 구체적인 예시나 비교를 추가하세요. 문장 길이는 2~4문장으로 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and emotional than typing. For example, when I write letters or notes by hand, I can vary my handwriting and add little drawings, which makes the message feel warmer.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류(부정문 구조, 동사형태)와 어순이 문제입니다. 간단하고 명확한 주제문으로 시작한 뒤 이유를 한 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 연결어(so, because, therefore)를 사용해 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Ví dụ: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because I prefer writing by hand. So most of my notes and to-do lists are handwritten in my notebook.

Gợi ý: 답변이 매우 단절되어 있고 시제와 전치사 사용이 부정확합니다. 연도를 말할 때는 ‘when I was ten’처럼 자연스럽게 표현하고, 문장을 완성하세요. 추가로 간단한 배경(수업, 자습 등)을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I'm not exactly sure, but I think I learned to type when I was about ten years old. I learned it at school during a computer class, and I practised using online typing games to get faster.

Gợi ý: 좋은 시작입니다만, ‘mmm’ 같은 채우기 소리는 제거하세요. 앱의 이름이나 어떤 방법으로 도움이 되는지(예: 연습 유형, 빈도) 구체적으로 설명하면 더 설득력 있습니다. 또한 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어주세요.

Ví dụ: I use a typing app that offers daily exercises and real-time feedback, which helps me improve accuracy and speed. For instance, I practise for 15 minutes every morning and track my progress with the app's statistics.

× I usually prefer handwriting because.

✓ I usually prefer handwriting because it feels more personal.

The original sentence is a fragment and ends abruptly after because. Add a complete clause (it feels more personal) to explain the reason; this fixes the sentence structure error and provides a clear rationale.

× I personally think handwriting is.

✓ I personally think handwriting is more expressive than typing.

The sentence is incomplete and ends with a linking verb without a complement. Provide an adjective phrase (more expressive than typing) to complete the predication and make the sentence grammatical.

× More emotional than typing.

✓ It is more emotional than typing.

This fragment lacks a subject and auxiliary; begin with a subject and verb (It is) to form a complete comparative sentence. This corrects the adverb/adjective placement by making the adjective correctly modify the noun phrase.

× I don't. Type on a desktop or laptop every day because I prefer writing by hand so I usually writing.

✓ I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because I prefer writing by hand, so I usually write.

Errors include an incorrect period splitting ‘don't’ and the verb form 'writing' instead of the base form 'write' after 'usually'. Correct the punctuation and use the base verb after adverb 'usually'. This addresses third person singular/verb form misuse and sentence structure.

× I'm not sure, but maybe. When I was 10 years, I learned about typing on keyboard at.

✓ I'm not sure, but maybe when I was 10 years old, I learned to type on a keyboard.

Problems: unnecessary periods that break the sentence, incorrect expression '10 years' instead of '10 years old', awkward phrasing 'learned about typing on keyboard at'. Use 'learned to type on a keyboard' to express acquiring the skill and fix past tense sentence flow.

× I don't. Type on a desktop or laptop every day because I prefer writing by hand so I usually writing.

✓ I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because I prefer writing by hand, so I usually write.

Duplicate of earlier but focusing on -ing misuse: 'usually writing' is incorrect because after 'usually' the base verb 'write' should be used. Replace the -ing form with the base form to correct usage.

× When I was 10 years, I learned about typing on keyboard at.

✓ When I was 10 years old, I learned to type on a keyboard.

Fix preposition and article issues: use 'on a keyboard' with the article 'a' and prefer 'learned to type' rather than 'learned about typing'. Also include 'years old' after an age number.

× MMM, I use an app which can help me improve my typing skills.

✓ I use an app that helps me improve my typing skills.

'MMM' is filler and can be omitted in a concise answer. Use 'that helps' instead of 'which can help me' for a clearer, more natural present simple statement. This corrects sentence flow and makes it more direct.

× This app is really popular in Korea.

✓ This app is really popular in Korea.

Sentence is already correct; no article change needed. Included here to indicate that this sentence does not require correction.