Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: まず、文法と語順の誤りを修正し、簡潔に答える癖をつけましょう。主張（handwritingが好き）を最初に述べ、その後で理由を2つ程度の具体例で支えます。冗長な表現や繰り返しを避け、自然な語彙（e.g. prefer, comfortable, practice）を使ってください。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting. I find it more comfortable and it helps me remember information better, because I rarely use a computer and typing on my smartphone is slow.

Gợi ý: 質問に直接答えるために最初に明確な主文を置き、その後に理由を付け加えてください。重複した語や不自然な語順を直し、'desktop' と 'laptop' の違いを明瞭に述べます。仕事環境について言うときは簡潔な理由（e.g. company provides desktops）を示しましょう。

Ví dụ: I use a desktop keyboard every day because my company provides desktop computers, so I am very familiar with them.

Gợi ý: 最初に時期を明確に述べ（When I was in high school）、続けて理由や背景を短く説明してください。不要な繰り返しを避け、文をつなぐときは接続詞（because, so, therefore）を正しく使いましょう。具体的な情報（which year, what class）を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in high school because we had mandatory computer classes that taught basic skills, which seemed important for future studies and jobs.

Gợi ý: 改善方法はシンプルに述べ、具体的な方法や頻度、ツール名を添えてください。繰り返し表現を避け、文を整理して論理的に述べること。例えば、daily practice, typing exercises, or using specific appsを挙げると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day. I often type essays and notes on my phone's Notes app and sometimes use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I really keen on handwriting because I'm not good at typing because I don't have computer and even my smartphone typing is right.

✓ I am really keen on handwriting because I'm not good at typing; I don't have a computer and even typing on my smartphone is difficult for me.

The sentence has missing auxiliary verb 'am' for the adjective 'keen' and incorrect pronoun/article use 'a computer'. Also 'right' is incorrect word choice; context needs 'difficult'. Use a semicolon to connect related clauses for clarity. Japanese: 'be動詞が抜けている（I am）、冠詞の誤用（a computer）、語彙の誤り（right→difficult）と句の接続の問題があります。'

× My type is desktop. Or is my my company users only desktop computer and it is very familiar for me?

✓ I use a desktop. At my company, users only have desktop computers, so I am very familiar with them.

Original has awkward phrasing and repeated words. 'My type is desktop' is unnatural; use 'I use a desktop'. The sentence about company needs proper subject and verb agreement and plural 'computers'. Japanese: '表現が不自然で語の重複がある（my my）。主語と動詞の一致、複数形（computers）が必要です。'

× When I was a high school student, because how to use computer, we have have to use computer class and it is very important in the future too, that's why.

✓ When I was a high school student, we had to take computer classes to learn how to use computers because they would be important in the future.

Use past tense 'had to take' for obligation in the past and plural 'computer classes' and 'computers'. Remove redundant 'because' and reorder for clarity. Japanese: '過去の話なので過去形（had to）を使う必要があります。複数形や語順の誤りもあります（computer class→computer classes、whyの冗長）。'

× Just practice everyday practice and I usually write my essays my essay on the my Note application.

✓ I just practice every day, and I usually write my essays on the Notes application.

Use 'every day' as two words for the adverbial phrase and avoid repeating 'practice'. 'My essays' is fine; remove extra 'my' and use correct app name 'Notes' or 'Note' consistently. Japanese: '頻度を表すevery dayは2語、不要な語の重複（practice、my）があるため修正が必要です。アプリ名の冠詞の位置も修正しました。'