Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition, correct small grammar errors, and make your points more coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two concise supporting reasons with linking words. Fix mistakes like “less less” and unclear phrases (“you iron it a pen or paper”, “I have an access my work on multiple”).

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and takes less physical effort. In addition, it’s easier to edit and store notes digitally, so I can organize and search my files quickly. Moreover, I can access my work on multiple devices, which makes studying and working much more flexible.

Gợi ý: Remove filler words (uh), use a clear topic sentence, and combine reasons concisely. Correct small grammar: say “use a laptop keyboard” and “I need to type every day” or “I need to type them every day” if referring to reports.

Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard almost every day because I work and study on my laptop. For example, I often send emails and prepare analytical reports, so I regularly need to type to complete these tasks.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a direct answer about timing, then add one specific supporting detail. Correct grammar (e.g., “a short texts” → “short texts” or “a short text”).

Ví dụ: I learned to type at school when we had computer lessons. For example, we were often given tasks to type short texts, and having a personal computer at home also helped me practice regularly.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary and be specific about the technique. Avoid vague phrases like “relies on your member” and incomplete sentence endings. Give one clear method and describe how you practice it with linking words.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing touch-typing, which means learning the positions of the letters so I can type without looking at the keys. For instance, I practice daily with online typing exercises for 15 minutes and focus on speed and accuracy until the finger movements become automatic.

× Personally I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is more convenient and requires less less physical effort.

✓ Personally, I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is more convenient and requires less physical effort.

Duplicate word 'less' is an error; remove the extra 'less'. Also add a comma after 'Personally' for natural flow. Use 'less physical effort' to compare effort appropriately.

× Also it is easier to edit and store notes digitally and you iron it a pen or paper.

✓ Also, it is easier to edit and store notes digitally than with a pen or paper.

The original sentence uses 'you iron it a pen or paper', which is incorrect pronoun use and wrong words. Replace with comparative structure 'than with a pen or paper' to compare methods. Add comma after 'Also' for clarity.

× And I have an access my work on multiple.

✓ And I can access my work on multiple devices.

'have an access my work on multiple' is ungrammatical. Use the verb 'access' with subject 'I' and indicate the object 'devices'. 'Can' expresses ability and 'multiple devices' completes the idea.

× Uh, for my personal use, I have a laptop, so mostly I use laptop keyboard almost every day because I need to e-mail or, uh, prepare some analytical reports, so I need to uh, type it every day.

✓ Uh, for my personal use I have a laptop, so I mostly use the laptop keyboard almost every day because I need to e-mail or prepare some analytical reports, so I need to type every day.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard' is incorrect; include it. Remove unnecessary commas and filler words 'uh'. 'Type it' is vague; 'type' alone is sufficient. Keep tense present simple for habitual action.

× As far as I remember, I learned to type on a keyboard at school.

✓ As far as I remember, I learned to type on a keyboard at school.

Sentence is grammatical; retained past tense 'learned' appropriate for a past event. No change needed.

× Uh, we were given a task to type a short texts on a keyboard.

✓ Uh, we were given a task to type short texts on a keyboard.

Use plural 'texts' without article when preceded by 'short'. Remove extra 'a' which conflicts with plural noun. Keep past passive 'were given' correct.

× So, uh, in addition, we had a personal computer at home, which was really helpful to learn how to type on a keyboard.

✓ So, in addition, we had a personal computer at home, which was really helpful for learning how to type on a keyboard.

Use 'helpful for learning' or 'helpful in learning' rather than 'helpful to learn'. Gerund 'learning' is preferred after 'helpful for' to express usefulness.

× As far as I know there are a lot of techniques of typing on the keyboard, so I prefer trying one of them which relies on your member.

✓ As far as I know, there are lots of techniques for typing on the keyboard, so I prefer trying one of them which relies on your memory.

'A lot of' is acceptable but 'lots of' or 'many' is more natural; add comma after introductory phrase. Use 'techniques for typing' not 'of typing'. 'Member' is incorrect word choice; intended word is 'memory'.

× So all you need is to remember all the letters on the keyboard and try to type them without looking at the.

✓ So all you need is to remember the letters on the keyboard and try to type them without looking at it.

Remove redundant 'all' before 'the letters'; use 'the letters' or 'all the letters' but avoid double 'all'. 'Without looking at the' is incomplete; finish with 'it' (the keyboard). Ensure pronoun 'it' refers clearly to 'the keyboard'.