Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は要点を押さえていますが、文法ミス、冗長表現、不自然な語順が目立ちます。より自然で効果的にするために、トピック文を明確にし、支持情報を論理的に繋げ、不要な繰り返しを避けて具体例を一つ加えてください。例えば「because」以下で理由を2点（効率性と共有のしやすさ）に分け、適切な接続語（so, and, for example）を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient for business tasks. For example, I can quickly edit documents and share them with colleagues, which makes teamwork much smoother.

Gợi ý: 答えは情報を伝えていますが、文法（時制・主語と動詞の一致）や繰り返し、口語のフィラーが多く、表現が不自然です。まず短い明確な主文を作り、その後でキーボードの利点を2点までに絞って述べ、接続語（for example, which）で説明を滑らかにしてください。また“make my business quick”は不自然なので“make my work faster”など正しい表現に直しましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop keyboard. It has special function keys that let me use shortcuts like copy and paste, which saves time and makes my work much faster.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりにくく、文法や語彙の誤用が多いです（learned that typing → learned to type; as a internship → during an internship; The law was a web marketing specialist → I worked as a web marketing specialist）。まずは簡潔な一文で時期と状況を述べ、その後役割や理由（仕事で速く打つ必要があった）を具体的に説明してください。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at university during an internship at a computer technology company. I worked as a web marketing specialist there, so I had to type quickly for my daily tasks.

Gợi ý: 回答は方針を示していますが、フィラーが多く、文法（try to buy the online courses → I try to buy online courses または I take online courses）や語彙の重複が見られます。改良法として、現在行っている具体的な学習方法（daily practice, typing drills, timed tests）や頻度を述べ、接続語（for example, also）で情報を整理しましょう。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by taking online courses and practising regularly. For example, I do daily typing drills and timed tests on e-learning platforms to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing to writing because it is helpful for me in the business situation and it is a is easily.

✓ I prefer typing to writing because it is helpful for me in business situations and it is easy.

The phrase 'the business situation' is unnatural; use plural 'business situations' or no article. 'is a is easily' mixes article and adverb; 'easy' (adjective) correctly describes 'it'. Use 'easy' instead of 'easily' when linking with 'is'. Improve by using simple adjective to describe the noun and making noun plural for general situations. Suggested practice: replace 'the business situation' with 'business situations' or 'business contexts' and use 'easy' instead of 'easily'.

× I usually typing on the laptop laptop keyboard.

✓ I usually type on the laptop keyboard.

The verb should be in base form 'type' after the adverb 'usually', not the present participle 'typing'. Also remove duplicate 'laptop' and unnecessary article. Improve by using simple present tense for habitual actions: 'I usually type'. Suggested practice: use 'usually' + base verb for habits (usually type).

× Uh, my special keyboard has a specific function key that can save the uh, specific command such as uh copy and paste.

✓ My special keyboard has function keys that save specific commands such as copy and paste.

Redundant words 'specific' repeated and filler 'uh' removed. 'Function keys' plural fits meaning. 'Save specific commands' is clearer. Improve by removing repetition and using plural when referring to multiple keys. Suggested practice: avoid repeating adjectives and remove fillers.

× It is very helpful for me and uh, make my business quick.

✓ They are very helpful for me and make my work faster.

Pronoun 'It' unclear; refer to 'keys' as 'they'. 'Make my business quick' is unnatural; use 'make my work faster'. 'Quick' is an adjective; 'faster' compares speed. Improve by matching pronoun number to antecedent and using appropriate comparative adjective. Suggested practice: identify antecedent and choose correct pronoun number (singular/plural).

× I learned that typing when I was a university student as a internship in the computer technology companies.

✓ I learned to type when I was a university student during an internship at computer technology companies.

Use 'learned to type' (infinitive), not 'learned that typing'. 'As a internship' incorrect article and form; use 'during an internship' or 'as an intern'. 'At computer technology companies' is the correct preposition. Improve by using 'learned to' + verb and correct article usage. Suggested practice: use 'learned to' + verb for acquired skills and 'during an internship' for timing.

× The law was a web marketing specialist, and the law requires speedy typing.

✓ I was a web marketing specialist there, and the job required speedy typing.

'The law' is likely a mistranscription; replace with 'I' or 'there' and clarify subject. Use past tense 'required' to match 'was'. 'Job' fits context better than 'law'. Improve by ensuring the subject matches the intended meaning and verb tense. Suggested practice: check for transcription errors and keep subject consistent with previous clause.

× Umm, I try to uh, buy the online courses on the educational platform and nowadays, uh, a lot of contents is on the on e-learning platforms.

✓ I try to buy online courses on educational platforms, and nowadays a lot of content is on e-learning platforms.

Remove fillers. 'the online courses' and 'the educational platform' are too specific; use plural 'online courses' and 'educational platforms'. 'Contents' is uncountable here; use 'content' and match verb 'is'. Also remove duplicate 'on the on'. Improve by using correct countability and pluralization. Suggested practice: use 'content' for uncountable material and pluralize platforms/courses when speaking generally.