Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is expressive and personal, which is good, but it is a bit long and somewhat repetitive. Make the main point in one clear topic sentence, then give one concise reason with a specific example. Avoid poetic phrases that may sound vague (e.g., “piece of your soul”) and replace them with concrete language.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal. For example, when I write birthday cards or thank-you notes, I choose pen and paper because the handwriting shows effort and emotion that a text or email usually lacks.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains many hesitations and repeating filler words. Reduce hesitation by practicing a concise structure: state which device, give one or two clear reasons, and include a brief example. Use linking words (for example, because) smoothly to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because I use it for both work and study. For example, I write emails and prepare documents on it, which is convenient and faster than using a phone.

Gợi ý: Your response gives an approximate time, which is fine, but the phrasing is uncertain and includes filler words. Be more direct: give the age and a clear reason or context. Replace vague expressions like “center of technologies” with specific descriptions.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about ten years old after my parents bought me my first laptop. At school and at home everyone was using computers, so I practiced regularly for school work.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest and gives a reason, but it is slightly repetitive and contains hesitations. Instead, state the method you used to improve (practice, exercises, typing software) and give a short result. Be precise and avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: I improved my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises. I focused on touch-typing drills and timed tests, which helped me learn to type without looking at the keyboard and increase my speed.

× I definitely prefer handwriting because you can add a piece of your soul in your message, and especially I prefer handwriting when we speak about wishes because it goes from your heart, not from your brain.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because you can put a piece of your soul into your message, and especially I prefer handwriting when we talk about wishes because it comes from your heart, not your brain.

Pronoun and verb choice issues: 'add a piece of your soul in your message' is awkward; use 'put ... into' for correct preposition and collocation (11: incorrect use of prepositions). 'When we speak about wishes' is grammatically acceptable but 'when we talk about wishes' is more natural (12: incorrect use of pronouns/word choice). 'It goes from your heart' should be 'it comes from your heart' because 'come from' is the correct verb for origin; 'goes from' is incorrect (6: present tense/verb choice). Suggestion: use natural collocations 'put into', 'talk about', and 'comes from'.

× Yes, I type uh, on the laptop keyboard every day because I work and study, umm, and uh, For instance, I can prepare emails and uh, documents online.

✓ Yes, I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I work and study. For instance, I can prepare emails and documents online.

Sentence-level issues: remove filler words and correct capitalization. There is no third-person subject here, but the original 'For instance, I can prepare...' started with a capitalized 'For' after a comma and contained unnecessary fillers. Correction improves sentence structure and clarity (26: sentence structure errors). Suggestion: remove fillers 'uh', 'umm' and split into two clear sentences.

× It's more preferable and convenient for me because, uh, it's faster at least.

✓ It is more convenient for me because it is at least faster.

'More preferable' is redundant and ungrammatical; preferable already implies comparison. Use 'more convenient' or 'preferable', not both (13: incorrect use of adjectives). Also streamline fillers and place 'at least' appropriately. Suggestion: choose one comparative adjective and position adverbs correctly.

× I presume that I got my first laptop when I was a child, maybe 10 years old, and I started studying with my computer because, uh, it was a center of technologies and uh, all my classmates also used computers.

✓ I think I got my first laptop when I was a child, maybe when I was ten years old, and I started learning with my computer because it was a center of technology, and all my classmates also used computers.

Tense/word choice and noun form: 'presume' is awkward for recollection; use 'think' (6: present tense issue). 'Studying with my computer' is acceptable but 'learning with my computer' is clearer. 'A center of technologies' is ungrammatical; use 'center of technology' or 'a hub of technology' (11: incorrect use of prepositions/nouns). Spell out numbers under twelve in formal speech: 'ten'. Suggestion: use 'think', 'learning', and 'center of technology'.

× To be honest, I can't exactly remember how I started touch typing, but I do remember that I used to practice a lot when I was a teenager because my goal was to, uh, type without looking at the keyboard and I got the skills skill very quickly.

✓ To be honest, I can't exactly remember how I started touch typing, but I do remember that I used to practice a lot when I was a teenager because my goal was to type without looking at the keyboard, and I acquired the skill very quickly.

Multiple issues: 'I got the skills skill' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'I acquired the skill' or 'I gained the skill' (9: past participle/word choice). 'Type without looking' is correct (8: verb + -ing form appears earlier but not needed here). Use of 'acquired' matches past context (5: past tense issue). Suggestion: replace 'got the skills skill' with 'acquired the skill' and add a comma before 'and' for clarity.