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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

Well, I prefer typing. It is due to umm, compared to the handwriting, typing is more convenient and effective ways for me to study. You know, when I'm typing, I can, uh, record 100 to 112 words each.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Well, I prefer type on key laptop keyboard every day. Umm, it is my hobby that I form when I went to university. Yes, and I believe it is umm an effective way for me to study and improve my grade in my examination.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

Well, at this point I was a little kid about, uh, four or five years old. Umm, my parents told me how to use the keyboard to type and I believe it is really convenient and a useful habit for me when I'm grow up and when I enter the school.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Well, I I believe practice is the most important things to improve it. With more and more practice, you will know which letters on the keyboard, you can just close your eyes and easily to type on the correct letter quickly. Yeah.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并注意语法。减少填充词(如"umm", "uh"),使用明确的主题句并用一到两个具体细节支持。注意单复数和搭配("effective ways"应为"an effective way"或"more effective")。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient for studying. For example, I can type continuously without worrying about legibility, and I can easily edit or organize my notes on a laptop.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 句子要更符合英语习惯并注意时态和表达准确性。避免重复。用简单清晰的句子说明偏好,并给出一两个具体原因或例子。

Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I started using laptops at university. Typing on a laptop is convenient for studying and helped me keep my notes organized, which improved my exam preparation.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 时间表达要更自然,注意语法(例如"when I'm grow up"应为"when I grew up"或"as I grew up")。可以用更具体的短语说明谁教的以及如何学会。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about four or five years old. My parents showed me the basics, and as I grew up I practiced regularly, so typing became a useful habit for school.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 表达要更简洁并注意语法和搭配(例如"most important things"应为"the most important thing")。说明具体练习方法(如练习软件、盲打练习或每天定时练习),并使用连接词使条理清楚。

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I use online typing lessons for 20 minutes a day and practise touch-typing exercises so I can type quickly without looking at the keys.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Well, I prefer typing. It is due to umm, compared to the handwriting, typing is more convenient and effective ways for me to study.

Well, I prefer typing. Compared to handwriting, typing is a more convenient and effective way for me to study.

句子中“the handwriting”不需要定冠词,且“ways”与前面的单数概念不一致。应使用复合比较结构“Compared to handwriting”并把“ways”改为单数“way”以与“a”搭配,表明一种总体方法。建议:去掉不必要的定冠词,注意可数名词单复数一致。

Present tense issue

× You know, when I'm typing, I can, uh, record 100 to 112 words each.

You know, when I'm typing, I can type 100 to 112 words each time.

原句中用“record”不够准确,且“each”需与名词搭配成“each time”。时态本身可以保留现在进行时“I'm typing”。建议:用更准确的动词并补全频率短语,如“each time”。

Verb in the present participle form

× Well, I prefer type on key laptop keyboard every day.

Well, I prefer to type on a laptop keyboard every day.

动词“prefer”后若接动词需用不定式“to + 动词”或动名词,两者含义相近但此处更自然用不定式。此外“key laptop keyboard”词序和重复不正确,应为“a laptop keyboard”。建议:使用固定结构“prefer to do”并调整词序。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Umm, it is my hobby that I form when I went to university.

Umm, it became my hobby when I went to university.

原句中的“it is my hobby that I form”结构不自然且时态混用。应使用过去时“became”表达在上大学时形成的习惯,且不需要定冠词“the”。建议:用简单的过去时短语“became my hobby when I went to university”。

Present tense issue

× Yes, and I believe it is umm an effective way for me to study and improve my grade in my examination.

Yes, and I believe it is an effective way for me to study and improve my grades in my exams.

“grade”通常用复数“grades”或更自然的“my exam results”,且“examination”复数或改为“exams”更常见。时态无误,但名词形式需调整。建议:使用常见搭配“improve my grades”或“improve my exam results”。

Past tense issue

× Well, at this point I was a little kid about, uh, four or five years old.

Well, at that time I was a little kid, about four or five years old.

“at this point”用于现在时或当前语境,不适合回忆过去,应改为“at that time”。此外标点和词序需调整使句子更自然。建议:回忆过去用“at that time”或“when I was”。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Umm, my parents told me how to use the keyboard to type and I believe it is really convenient and a useful habit for me when I'm grow up and when I enter the school.

Umm, my parents taught me how to use the keyboard to type, and I believe it is really convenient and a useful habit for me as I grow up and when I enter school.

多处错误:1)“told me how to use”更自然为“taught me how to use”;2)“when I'm grow up”时态和人称错,应为“as I grow up”;3)“enter the school”中定冠词不必要,可用“enter school”。建议:使用“teach”表示教技能,注意时态和固定表达。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, I I believe practice is the most important things to improve it.

Well, I believe practice is the most important thing to improve it.

原句有重复“I I”,并且“practice”作为不可数名词时应与“thing”单数搭配而非复数“things”。建议:去掉重复词,名词与数量词保持一致。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× With more and more practice, you will know which letters on the keyboard, you can just close your eyes and easily to type on the correct letter quickly.

With more and more practice, you'll know where the letters are on the keyboard; you can just close your eyes and easily type the correct letters quickly.

句子问题包括:1)“which letters on the keyboard”不完整,应补为“where the letters are on the keyboard”;2)不定式“to type”在“easily to type”中多余,应为“easily type”;3)单复数不一致,应用复数“letters”。建议:重构句子,清晰表达位置与能力,注意动词不定式用法和名词单复数一致。

Sentence structure errors

× Yeah.

(No correction needed)

单词“Yeah”作为回应感叹词没有语法错误,无需更改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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