Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing uh, sometimes I use typing with my uh girlfriends to chat and usually I use typing to finish my homework and it can have more convenient to share my homework and so.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
No, I every day I'm most to use my mobile phone is enough, but sometimes I need to write a long report, so this time I can lead to the laptop, but sometimes.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I think it's my primary school when I 20 years ago and I have a computer class and to teach us how to use the keyboard to type in.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Umm, uh, it uh, uh, usually it's my homework at University School in sometimes some projects to use the typing and with the long report, so I need to fast the.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 56.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、流畅并减少填充词。先给出主题句(我更喜欢打字),然后用1-2个具体理由支持(如速度、更易分享),并用连词连接,同时避免重复。注意冠词和词序,如“more convenient to share”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing. It's faster than handwriting, and it's more convenient for sharing work with classmates. For example, I usually type my homework and send it to my friends, which saves time and is easier to edit.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要结构清晰,先直接回应(通常用手机),再解释何时用笔记本。避免语法错误和冗余,使用连接词(but, however, when)使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually type on my mobile phone because it's convenient for daily messages and short tasks. However, when I need to write a long report or do serious editing, I use my laptop because the keyboard is more comfortable and efficient.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要准确表述时间并用正确的时态。先给出时间点或年龄,然后说明学习方式(在电脑课上学的)。避免数字表达混乱,改用清晰短句。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school about twenty years ago. We had computer classes where the teacher showed us how to use the keyboard and practice typing exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要具体说明练习方法和频率,例如通过练习、在线练习网站或大量写作来提高速度与准确性。减少犹豫词并用连接词组织信息。结尾可提供结果或例子。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, especially when I have long assignments at university. I also use online typing practice websites to increase my speed and accuracy, and over time this has helped me type reports much faster.
× I prefer typing uh, sometimes I use typing with my uh girlfriends to chat and usually I use typing to finish my homework and it can have more convenient to share my homework and so.
✓ I prefer typing. Sometimes I use it to chat with my girlfriends, and usually I type to finish my homework because it's more convenient for sharing my work.
句中多次重复“typing”且使用代词不当。应使用代词“it”指代“typing”,并调整词序使句子更自然。建议:用代词替代重复名词,分成更短的句子,保持主谓一致。
× No, I every day I'm most to use my mobile phone is enough, but sometimes I need to write a long report, so this time I can lead to the laptop, but sometimes.
✓ No, I usually use my mobile phone every day because it's enough, but sometimes I need to write a long report, so I use my laptop then.
原句中副词和主语顺序混乱,且有冗余和不自然表达("is enough"、"lead to the laptop")。需将频率副词放在动词前或句中合适位置,并用自然短语(use my laptop)。建议:把频率副词放在适当位置,删除多余片段,使用常见搭配。
× I think it's my primary school when I 20 years ago and I have a computer class and to teach us how to use the keyboard to type in.
✓ I think it was in primary school, about 20 years ago, when I had a computer class and they taught us how to use the keyboard to type.
该句涉及过去时间(20 years ago),因此谓语应使用过去时(was, had, taught)。原句时态混用且不通顺。建议:遇到明确的过去时间状语时将相关动词改为过去式,并按英语习惯重组句子。
× Umm, uh, it uh, uh, usually it's my homework at University School in sometimes some projects to use the typing and with the long report, so I need to fast the.
✓ Usually at university I type my homework and sometimes type long project reports, so I need to type quickly.
原句时态和词序混乱,“it's my homework at University School in sometimes some projects”不符合英语习惯。应使用一般现在时描述习惯性动作(I type, I need to type quickly)。另外“fast the”是不正确表达,应改为“type quickly”。建议:用简洁句子表达习惯性行为,动词使用一般现在时,使用正确的副词短语(type quickly)。