Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, for me, I prefer handwriting more 'cause I think in Hong Kong so many children's only use typing and they don't know how to write the Cantonese word or English word. So I think if they use handwriting they will know how to write it more.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I only use desktop and laptop keyboard like once a week because it only need to help me to finish the ICT homework. So I don't think desktop or laptop keyboard is important for me.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a children because in primary school my computer lesson need us to do the PowerPoint. In this time I can only learn how to use keyboard to write the vocab and then share my PowerPoint.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
About how do I improve my typing, I think the Matthew is always use desktop or laptop to type in. For example like I can use typing to chat with friends in Instagram or Facebook and I can use typing to finish my homework.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接且语法更准确,并用连词使表达更连贯。建议先用一句主题句直接回答(例如:I prefer handwriting),然后用一到两句具体原因和例子支持,注意时态和单复数。可删除冗余表达,句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing. I think handwriting helps children remember how to write Cantonese and English words, because the physical act of writing reinforces memory. For example, when I write vocabulary by hand, I find it easier to recall the characters later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 提高回答的自然度和准确性,先直接回答频率,然后用一到两句具体原因。注意使用正确的时态和主谓一致,避免口语填充词。
Ví dụ: I use a desktop or laptop keyboard about once a week. I mainly use it for ICT homework, so typing is not very important in my daily life. If I need to type more, I would practise to become faster.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要注意时态和数的一致,句子更简洁明确。先给出时间(例如:when I was in primary school),然后说明学习原因和过程,提供具体细节或例子。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. In computer class we often made PowerPoint presentations, so I practised typing vocabulary and sentences to prepare slides and share my work with classmates.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并使用正确词汇。先直接回答方法(例如:I improve my typing by practising regularly),然后列举具体方式并用连词连接,避免不明所以的名词或错误人名。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising regularly on my phone and computer. For example, I chat with friends on Instagram and Facebook and type my homework on a laptop. I also try to type longer messages and use online typing exercises to increase my speed.
× Well, for me, I prefer handwriting more 'cause I think in Hong Kong so many children's only use typing and they don't know how to write the Cantonese word or English word.
✓ Well, for me, I prefer handwriting more 'cause I think in Hong Kong so many children only use typing and they don't know how to write Cantonese words or English words.
错误类型:可数名词单复数错误。原句中 children's(儿童的)用作“许多儿童”时不应加所有格,且“Cantonese word”与“English word”指多类词汇时应使用复数。建议:当表示“许多孩子”用plural名词children;表示多种词或单词时在名词后加s。
× So I think if they use handwriting they will know how to write it more.
✓ So I think if they use handwriting they will know how to write better.
错误类型:现在分词/副词使用不当。原句用“more”比较笼统且位置不当,表达“写得更好”应使用副词better而不是more。建议:用better修饰动词短语“write”。
× I only use desktop and laptop keyboard like once a week because it only need to help me to finish the ICT homework.
✓ I only use desktop and laptop keyboards like once a week because they only need to help me finish the ICT homework.
错误类型:单复数与代词一致问题。原句keyboard应为复数keyboards(指桌面和笔记本的键盘),且代词it不与复数主语一致,应使用they。建议:注意集合或列举时使用复数,并保持代词一致。
× So I don't think desktop or laptop keyboard is important for me.
✓ So I don't think desktop or laptop keyboards are important to me.
错误类型:现在分词/动词形式与主谓一致问题(也属单复数)。原句keyboard应为keyboards,谓语is应改为are;介词搭配更自然为important to me。建议:列举多项名词用复数,检查主谓一致和固定搭配。
× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a children because in primary school my computer lesson need us to do the PowerPoint.
✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a child because in primary school my computer lessons needed us to make PowerPoint presentations.
错误类型:单复数与时态混合问题。children应为child(单数),computer lesson应为复数lessons更符合上下文,动词need需与过去时一致改为needed,且通常说“make PowerPoint presentations”。建议:表示过去经历时主语和名词单复数要匹配,动词使用过去式,常用搭配用固定短语。
× In this time I can only learn how to use keyboard to write the vocab and then share my PowerPoint.
✓ At that time I could only learn how to use the keyboard to type vocabulary and then share my PowerPoint.
错误类型:现在分词/时态与措辞错误。时间短语应为at that time,表示过去能力用could而非can,keyboard需要定冠词the,write the vocab更常见为type vocabulary或write vocabulary,vocab为缩写不正式。建议:用恰当的时间短语、过去时态和更自然的动词搭配。
× About how do I improve my typing, I think the Matthew is always use desktop or laptop to type in.
✓ About how I improve my typing, I think Matthew always uses a desktop or laptop to type.
错误类型:代词/人名用法及主谓一致错误。不能在人名前加定冠词the;句子结构“the Matthew is always use”不正确,动词要加-s与第三人称单数一致并用正确词序。建议:人名直接使用,注意第三人称单数动词变化并使用正确语序。
× For example like I can use typing to chat with friends in Instagram or Facebook and I can use typing to finish my homework.
✓ For example, I can use typing to chat with friends on Instagram or Facebook, and I can use typing to finish my homework.
错误类型:动名词/介词搭配及介词使用错误。应使用介词on表示在社交平台上(on Instagram/Facebook),短语前不需要like和for example一起使用。建议:用“For example,”引出例子,注意社交媒体常用介词on,避免重复的口语填充词like。