Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing than handwriting because I think typing is more convenient and faster than handwriting and also typing is more easier and but handwriting may be more tired.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
No, because I seldom use laptop and other computers. By contrast, I often use phone or iPad to type.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I have learned how to type on the keyboard when I was a primary school student because in our primary school we have computer classes and teacher would teach me how to type and help us to do exercise.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I didn't improve my typing through extra exercises, instead I just in exercise by my daily typing on my phone or iPad. I think that is what practice made perfect said.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 你回答能表达观点但有语法与用词错误,句子冗长且重复。改进要点:1) 使用正确的比较结构(prefer A to B / prefer doing A to doing B);2) 避免重复与多余词(e.g. "more easier");3) 用一到两句清晰支持理由,不超过五句话;4) 使用连接词使句子更流畅(because, so, while)。举例练习时可先给主题句再补充一两条具体理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text easily and type on different devices. While handwriting can be tiring and slower for long notes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答方向正确且比较清楚,但句式可更自然、连贯。改进要点:1) 直接回应问题并用一句话给出主要事实;2) 使用衔接词(however / instead / rather)自然对比;3) 提供一两个具体场景或频率词丰富内容(e.g. every day / mostly / mainly)。
Ví dụ: I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop. Instead, I mainly type on my phone or iPad for messages and schoolwork, especially when I'm on the go.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 答复包含时间和原因,但时态与语法不够准确,表达有重复。改进要点:1) 使用正确时态(learned / learned to type when I was...);2) 精简句子,先说时间点,再说具体情境或方法;3) 用连词连接原因并给出一两个细节(e.g. computer class, practice exercises)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where the teacher showed us typing techniques and gave exercises to practise.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但语法和表达不自然。改进要点:1) 用简单清晰的句子说明方法(I improve by...);2) 避免错误的短语("in exercise"),改用"practising"或"practice";3) 可以提供具体例子或频率来支持(e.g. typing messages, notes every day);4) 避免不地道的成语用法,改用常见表达("practice makes perfect")。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by practising on my phone and iPad every day. For instance, I type messages and notes frequently, and over time my speed and accuracy have improved because practice makes perfect.
× I prefer typing than handwriting because I think typing is more convenient and faster than handwriting and also typing is more easier and but handwriting may be more tired.
✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is more convenient and faster than handwriting, and typing is easier, but handwriting can be more tiring.
错误类型:介词使用错误(比较结构)。在表达“更喜欢……而不是……”时,正确搭配是“prefer A to B”,而不是“prefer A than B”。此外,原句中有重复比较词(“more easier”)错误,应使用“easier”。最后句子部分连接混乱,改为“but handwriting can be more tiring”更自然。建议:记住固定搭配“prefer A to B”;比较级不要和“more”同时使用(e.g. easier, more convenient);用逗号或连接词使句子更清晰。
× No, because I seldom use laptop and other computers. By contrast, I often use phone or iPad to type.
✓ No, because I seldom use a laptop or other computers. By contrast, I often use my phone or iPad to type.
错误类型:代词和冠词使用不当。名词前缺少不定冠词“a”,且“phone”前应加所有格“my”表示自己的设备;并列时用“or”可,但保持冠词或所有格一致更自然。建议:单数可数名词前须有冠词或限定词;提到自己的设备常用“my”。
× I have learned how to type on the keyboard when I was a primary school student because in our primary school we have computer classes and teacher would teach me how to type and help us to do exercise.
✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school because we had computer classes there and the teacher taught us how to type and helped us do exercises.
错误类型:时态错误(现在完成与一般过去混用)和动词形式问题。句中有明确的过去时间状语“when I was a primary school student”,所以应使用一般过去时“learned”,而不是现在完成时“have learned”。此外,“teacher would teach me”与上下文不符,应改为过去时“the teacher taught us”;“do exercise”应为复数或复数名词短语“do exercises”或“practice”。建议:带有明确过去时间点的句子用过去时;主谓及宾语复数形式要一致。
× I didn't improve my typing through extra exercises, instead I just in exercise by my daily typing on my phone or iPad. I think that is what practice made perfect said.
✓ I didn't improve my typing through extra exercises; instead, I practiced by typing daily on my phone or iPad. I think that's what the saying “practice makes perfect” means.
错误类型:过去时和句子结构错误。原句“I just in exercise by my daily typing”结构错误,应改为过去时动词“practiced”或“improved by typing daily”。另外“what practice made perfect said”语序和短语用法不对,正确表达是引用谚语“practice makes perfect”并说明其含义。建议:把意思用正确的动词短语表达(e.g. practiced by doing X);引用俗语时用固定说法并注意语序。