Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer talking because it is much faster and much more convenient for producing needs. Uh, attribute documents for example. I can easily correct mistakes and show work instantly.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day uh, cause a laptop is lighter and smaller it's more easier to uh, it's much easier to carry uh, because every day I have uh. Coding class.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old at primary school during basic computer class, uh, where we practice touch typing exercises, having really helped me become more efficient at homework and later at university.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Her practice regularly, uh, using touch typing exercises to build muscle memory, which helps me talk faster and with fewer hours.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并且准确回应问题;此处应说“typing”而非“talking”。减少犹豫词(uh),把句子简洁并给出具体例子与原因。可用连接词衔接观点与例子,控制在3–4句内。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and format documents on the computer. This saves time when I'm writing reports or emails.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答基本正确但语言重复并有许多犹豫。应用更自然的连词(because, so)并避免重复同义短语。把原因具体化,如携带方便且电池续航适合上课或外出。控制句子数量并修正语法(more easier→easier)。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is lightweight and easy to carry to classes. It also has enough battery life for a full day, which is useful when I have coding lessons on campus.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答清楚并有时间点,但可以更精炼并用连接词改进逻辑。去掉多余的填充词,保持两到三句,补充具体细节(例如练习内容或练习频率)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about ten in primary school during a basic computer class. We practiced touch-typing exercises regularly, which helped me finish homework faster and later improved my speed at university.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答有词汇和语法错误(Her→I, talk→type, fewer hours不明确)。应直接陈述方法并给出具体练习方式和频率,使用连接词说明效果。保持语句简洁准确。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online touch-typing exercises for about 20 minutes a day. This builds muscle memory, increases my speed, and reduces the number of mistakes I make.
× I prefer talking because it is much faster and much more convenient for producing needs.
✓ I prefer typing because it is much faster and much more convenient for meeting my needs.
原句有两个问题:一是 student 原意是「打字」,但用了 talking(说话),这是词义错误并非列出的类型;根据只改语法类错误,我们将 talking 改回 typing;二是短语 producing needs 不自然,正确应为 meet my needs(满足我的需求)。此外,much more convenient 与 much faster 搭配合理。改正后保持时态和语义一致。建议:使用固定搭配 meet (one's) needs,避免直接用 produce + needs。
× Uh, attribute documents for example.
✓ For example, attribute documents.
原句片段顺序混乱且缺少主语结构。根据题目要求,只修正语法类型为主谓一致或句子结构相关问题,这里调整为常见的插入语 'For example, attribute documents.' 使其成为句子的一部分。建议:把插入性举例提前并连接主句,确保句子完整。
× I can easily correct mistakes and show work instantly.
✓ I can easily correct mistakes and show my work instantly.
原句缺少限定词 'my' 来指代自己的作业或工作,属于代词/限定词用法问题(在给定列表中归为主谓/句子结构错误处理)。加上 'my' 后句子更自然且主语一致。建议:在表示所属关系时使用所有格限定词(my/their 等)。
× Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day uh, cause a laptop is lighter and smaller it's more easier to uh, it's much easier to carry uh, because every day I have uh. Coding class.
✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because a laptop is lighter and smaller; it's much easier to carry, and every day I have a coding class.
原句存在多处问题:使用口语填充词(uh)和断句不当;'cause' 非正式写法改为 because;'more easier' 是冗余比较词,正确为 'much easier' 或 'easier';缺少冠词 'a' 在 'a coding class'。这些错误主要涉及代词/冠词和比较级用法(归为代词或句子结构类)。建议:避免重复比较词(不要同时用 more 和 -er),注意冠词使用,并删除多余填充词,保持句子连贯。
× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old at primary school during basic computer class, uh, where we practice touch typing exercises, having really helped me become more efficient at homework and later at university.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was about 10 years old at primary school during a basic computer class, where we practised touch-typing exercises, which really helped me become more efficient with my homework and later at university.
原句时态混用:主句为过去时 learned,应把从句和相关动词也用过去时(practised, helped);'having really helped' 结构不自然且时态不匹配,改为 which really helped ...;'basic computer class' 前加不定冠词 a;'touch-typing' 为常见写法。建议:讲述过去发生的事情时,全文使用过去时,避免使用现在时或完成式混杂。注意英式拼写 practised 可按需要改为 practiced。
× Her practice regularly, uh, using touch typing exercises to build muscle memory, which helps me talk faster and with fewer hours.
✓ I practice regularly using touch-typing exercises to build muscle memory, which helps me type faster and with fewer errors.
原句错误很多:'Her' 应为主语 I(原句代词错误);'talk faster' 应为 'type faster';'with fewer hours' 不合适,意图应为 'with fewer errors' 或 'in less time'。这些属于代词/反身代词使用错误和词汇搭配错误。建议:确认主语与动词一致,使用正确的动作动词(type),并用合适的短语表达错误/时间减少,例如 'with fewer errors' 或 'in less time'。