Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer typing because website is a common way for people to communicate nowadays, so typing can save much time.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a plat. I have a key.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned to type on keyboard when I was six years old because I have to do. I had to do slides for presentations. So I started typing and develop it as a habit.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I improve my typing by. By memorizing array numbers and letters on the keyboard and just practicing some essays that I have to hand in to my teachers.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并用更自然的表达,避免不必要的词语和语法错误。可以先给出主题句,再用一两句说明理由并举例。注意用连词(because, so, therefore)使逻辑更清楚。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly send emails and edit documents on my laptop, which saves time compared with rewriting by hand.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清楚且有词汇和发音错误(可能想说 'laptop' 或 'a part' 等),要确保句子完整并提供简短理由。可以说清设备和使用原因。
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I usually work and study on my laptop. It's portable and convenient for taking notes and completing assignments.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子需要更连贯,时态和语法需正确。先给出明确时间点,然后用一两句具体原因或情况来支持。使用连接词(when, because, so)但保证句子完整。
Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was six years old because my school required us to make slides for presentations. Practicing those slides regularly helped me develop typing as a habit.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答有重复和不自然的短语(如 'array numbers'),需要更准确地描述方法並避免句子断裂。给出具体练习方式和频率会更好。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by memorizing the keyboard layout and practising regularly. For example, I do online typing exercises for 15–20 minutes every day and type essays for school to build speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing because website is a common way for people to communicate nowadays, so typing can save much time.
✓ I prefer typing because the website is a common way for people to communicate nowadays, so typing can save a lot of time.
句中缺少定冠词“the”。在英语中,特指的名词前需用定冠词。这里说的是“(人们常用的)网站”,应使用“the website”。另外“much time”在肯定句中通常用“a lot of time”。建议注意定冠词用法以及不可数名词量词搭配。
× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a plat.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a plan.
原句单词“plat”拼写错误且不符合语境,应为“plan”。若指具体事物需注意单复数,但此处用单数“a plan”正确。建议注意拼写并根据语境选择单数或复数。
× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a key.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a keyboard.
原句说“I have a key”与前句“I type on a laptop keyboard”不一致,语义上应为“keyboard”。这是名词使用错误,属代词/名词选择不当。建议检查代词或名词是否与上下文一致。
× I learned to type on keyboard when I was six years old because I have to do.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was six years old because I had work to do.
句中时态和表达不一致。主句为过去时“learned”,原因状语应使用过去时“had to do”或更自然的“had work to do”。另外缺少冠词“a keyboard”。建议保持时态一致并使用正确冠词。
× I had to do slides for presentations.
✓ I had to make slides for presentations.
原句动词搭配不自然,英语中更常用“make slides”或“create slides”。此句过去时使用正确,但用词需调整以符合母语者习惯。建议学习常用动词短语搭配。
× So I started typing and develop it as a habit.
✓ So I started typing and developed it into a habit.
句子中两个动词时态不一致,前半为过去时“started”,后半应与之保持过去时“developed”。此外短语应为“develop into a habit”。建议注意句内时态一致和固定搭配。
× I improve my typing by. By memorizing array numbers and letters on the keyboard and just practicing some essays that I have to hand in to my teachers.
✓ I improve my typing by memorizing the positions of the numbers and letters on the keyboard and by practicing essays that I have to hand in to my teachers.
原句有断句问题“by.”多余且不完整;“memorizing array numbers”表达不自然,应该说“memorizing the positions of the numbers and letters”或“memorizing the keyboard layout”;并且并列结构中要求两项都用“by”或保持一致。建议避免句子中断,使用自然搭配并保持并列结构一致。