Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer to typing because when you are working in the company after after you graduated, you need to have a good skill set typing the words and this is the mainly skills that in the modern society.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I usually use a laptop keyboard every day because I'm working as a sales associate and I need to bring my laptop to the client's place. So that is a reason why I use laptop keyboard every day with me.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned how to type on the keyboard is when I am in the elementary school and there are uh, computer class every week and on in a Monday and that's the really nice time to let me to learn how to typewrite.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
The method that I improve my typing is that I usually use the application called line and I use the application to chat with my friend and to training for myself to learn how to type the words in the more faster.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。开头用一句主题句表明偏好,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意时态和冠词,避免重复词汇 (“after after”)。可以用连接词如“because”或“so”来使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more practical for most jobs. For example, in an office role I often need to write emails and reports, so being able to type quickly helps me finish tasks more efficiently.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答比较清晰,但句子可以更简洁自然。第一句直接给出偏好,然后用一两句具体场景说明原因,避免冗余表达(例如“两次说明每天使用”)。可用连接词如“because”或“so”保持逻辑。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because I work as a sales associate and often visit clients. Since I need to take my laptop with me, typing on a laptop is convenient for preparing presentations and taking notes on the go.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更正语法并更有条理。先用一句主题句说明时间(例如 ‘when I was in elementary school’),然后补充细节(例:上电脑课、每周一次)。避免填充词如“uh”并注意动词时态和冠词。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in elementary school. We had a computer class every Monday, which gave me regular practice and helped me build basic typing skills.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并用正确的动词形式,先给出方法(例如使用练习软件或经常打字),然后说明具体做法和效果。注意用词准确(‘Line’ 应大写,动词用不定式或现在分词),并避免语序错误与多余词汇。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on my phone app called Line and by doing daily typing exercises. Chatting with friends and completing online typing drills have helped me increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer to typing because when you are working in the company after after you graduated, you need to have a good skill set typing the words and this is the mainly skills that in the modern society.
✓ I prefer typing because when you are working in a company after you graduate, you need to have good typing skills, and this is one of the main skills in modern society.
错误类型:动词不定式与动名词混用、时态和名词表达问题。 解释与改进建议: 1) “prefer to typing”错误,应为“prefer typing”或“prefer to type”,prefer 后可接动名词或不定式,但两者不可混用。建议记住搭配:prefer + V-ing 或 prefer + to + V。 2) “after after you graduated”重复并且时态不当。句子描述一般事实或将来职场情形,应使用一般现在时“after you graduate”。建议使用单一“after”。 3) “a good skill set typing the words”表达不自然且名词复数/单数不当。可改为“good typing skills”或“a good skill set for typing”。 4) “this is the mainly skills that in the modern society”语法混乱,形容词、副词和冠词错误。应为“this is one of the main skills in modern society”。 总体建议:保持时态一致,使用正确的动词形式(V-ing或to V),简化并使用常见搭配如“typing skills”“main skills”。
× I usually use a laptop keyboard every day because I'm working as a sales associate and I need to bring my laptop to the client's place. So that is a reason why I use laptop keyboard every day with me.
✓ I usually use a laptop keyboard every day because I work as a sales associate and I need to bring my laptop to the client's place. That is why I use a laptop keyboard every day.
错误类型:冠词使用和冗余表达。 解释与改进建议: 1) “I'm working”可改为一般现在时“I work”,表示职业习惯;两种时态都可,但原句更自然用一般现在时。 2) “use laptop keyboard”缺少不定冠词,应为“use a laptop keyboard”。 3) “every day with me”冗余且不地道,改为“every day”。 4) “So that is a reason why”冗长且重复,简化为“That is why”。 总体建议:注意可数名词前加冠词(a/an/the),避免冗余表达,使句子简洁流畅。
× I learned how to type on the keyboard is when I am in the elementary school and there are uh, computer class every week and on in a Monday and that's the really nice time to let me to learn how to typewrite.
✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in elementary school. There was a computer class every week on Mondays, and that was a really good time for me to learn how to type.
错误类型:过去时态使用错误及其他句子结构问题。 解释与改进建议: 1) 主句是过去发生的事情,应使用过去时“I learned”并保持从句也用过去时“when I was in elementary school”。 2) “there are ... computer class”应改为过去时“there was a computer class”并注意单复数,“computer class”单数或复数取决于上下文;这里用单数可改为“there was a computer class every week”或更自然“we had computer class every week”。 3) “on in a Monday”多余词并且表达错误,应为“on Mondays”或“on a Monday”。 4) “let me to learn”错误,动词后一般用不定式“to learn”但“let”后应接宾语和动词原形,如“let me learn”,此处更自然表达为“a good time for me to learn”。 总体建议:保持时态一致,注意“let”的用法以及星期的表达习惯(on Mondays)。
× The method that I improve my typing is that I usually use the application called line and I use the application to chat with my friend and to training for myself to learn how to type the words in the more faster.
✓ The way I improve my typing is that I usually use an application called LINE. I use it to chat with my friends and to train myself to type words faster.
错误类型:动名词与不定式混用、冠词和比较级错误。 解释与改进建议: 1) “The method that I improve my typing is that”结构笨拙,可用“The way I improve my typing is”或“My method for improving my typing is”。 2) “the application called line”应加不定冠词并把应用名大写:“an application called LINE”。 3) “chat with my friend”应为复数“friends”或保持单数但与上下文一致。 4) “to training for myself”错误,应使用不定式“to train myself”。“training”是动名词,和to连用错用。 5) “to learn how to type the words in the more faster”表达错误,比较级“faster”前不加“more”。应为“to type words faster”。 总体建议:注意动词形式(to + 动词原形 vs. 动名词),冠词使用,一致性以及比较级的正确形式。