Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer handwriting because I'm a student currently and I nearly use hand to write things every day, so I'm more familiar with the with writing with hands than typing on the keyboard. So I think handwriting will raise my efficiency.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Well, I tap on laptop keyboard every day because they are light and portable so I can carry them everywhere. But sometimes if I work in home I prefer to type on a desktop because it can help me to play video games or watch videos.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Actually, I learned how to type on a keyboard during the period of COVID-19 pandemic. At that time, I need to communicate with my friends. I also need to answer questions in the class. So it really raise my ability of typing on a keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I enhance my typing ability by doing simple exercise every day, such as typing a little article every day. I think that small practice will help me more familiar with the keyboard and raise my efficiency and accuracy of typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接並有一個清晰的主題句,避免重複和語法錯誤。可以提供一到兩個具體例子說明為何手寫更有效(例如記筆記記得更牢或寫作思路更清晰),並用連接詞使句子更流暢。注意冠詞和介詞用法(如“use my hand to write”或直接說“handwriting”),以及刪除多餘片語。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting. As a student I write by hand almost every day, which helps me organize my thoughts more clearly and remember notes better. For example, when I take lecture notes, handwriting lets me draw diagrams and highlight key points quickly, so I study more efficiently.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答要更精簡並使用更準確的詞彙(例如 use/type rather than tap),給出一個主因和一個具體情境作為支持。注意單複數和冠詞(a desktop computer, at home),以及用連接詞如“however”或“but”來對比。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because it is light and portable, so I can work anywhere. However, when I'm at home I prefer using a desktop computer because it has a bigger screen and is better for gaming or watching videos.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然並修正時態及語法問題(使用過去時描述學習過程)。提供具體時間點或情境細節以豐富內容,並用連接詞(for example, because)解釋原因。避免冗長或重複。
Ví dụ: I learned to type during the COVID-19 pandemic. Because most classes and meetings moved online, I had to communicate with friends and answer questions in virtual lessons, which forced me to practice typing a lot and improve my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 給出更具體的練習方法和頻率,使用更地道的表達(practise typing, exercises, short passages),並注意語法(get familiar with, improve efficiency and accuracy)。可以提到使用打字練習網站或設定具體目標來展示計劃性。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising for about 20 minutes every day. I type short articles and use online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy. Gradually I set goals, such as increasing my speed by 5 words per minute each month, which helps me stay motivated.
× I prefer handwriting because I'm a student currently and I nearly use hand to write things every day, so I'm more familiar with the with writing with hands than typing on the keyboard.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm currently a student and I almost always use my hand to write things every day, so I'm more familiar with writing by hand than typing on the keyboard.
错误类型:动词+ing形式和词序、搭配问题。说明:原句中“nearly use hand to write”用法不自然,应改为“almost always use my hand”或“almost always write by hand”;“the with writing with hands”有重复和介词多余,应改为“writing by hand”。建议:把副词和时态词放在合适位置(“I'm currently a student”),使用常见搭配“write by hand / writing by hand”。
× Well, I tap on laptop keyboard every day because they are light and portable so I can carry them everywhere.
✓ Well, I tap on a laptop keyboard every day because laptops are light and portable so I can carry them everywhere.
错误类型:代词使用不当与冠词缺失。说明:“tap on laptop keyboard”缺少冠词,应为“a laptop keyboard”;“they”指代单数earlier phrase不明确,改为复数主语“laptops”或把句子改为单数一致。建议:注意冠词使用(a/an/the)并确保代词与其先行词在人称和数上保持一致。
× But sometimes if I work in home I prefer to type on a desktop because it can help me to play video games or watch videos.
✓ But sometimes if I work at home I prefer to type on a desktop because it helps me play video games or watch videos.
错误类型:介词使用和时态一致性问题。说明:固定搭配为“work at home”而非“in home”;“it can help me to play”用一般现在时更自然,应为“it helps me play”,省略不必要的不定式“to”。建议:使用固定介词短语“work at home”,并保持句子时态一致和简洁表达。
× Actually, I learned how to type on a keyboard during the period of COVID-19 pandemic.
✓ Actually, I learned how to type on a keyboard during the COVID-19 pandemic.
错误类型:时态/表达冗余。说明:“during the period of COVID-19 pandemic”冗长且重复,“during the COVID-19 pandemic”更简洁;过去时“learned”正确,应保持过去时。建议:简化时间状语,使用自然搭配。
× At that time, I need to communicate with my friends.
✓ At that time, I needed to communicate with my friends.
错误类型:现在时/过去时错误。说明:既然发生在过去的疫情期间,动词应使用过去时“needed”而不是现在时“need”。建议:叙述过去事件时保持过去时态一致。
× I also need to answer questions in the class.
✓ I also needed to answer questions in class.
错误类型:时态和冠词问题。说明:“in the class”在此处通常用“in class”更自然;动词应使用过去时“needed”与前文一致。建议:使用“in class”并保持过去时态。
× So it really raise my ability of typing on a keyboard.
✓ So it really raised my ability to type on a keyboard.
错误类型:动词形式和动词搭配。说明:“raise”应为过去式“raised”以配合过去时间;“ability of typing”不自然,常用表达为“ability to type”。建议:过去时间使用过去式,使用固定搭配“ability to do something”。
× I enhance my typing ability by doing simple exercise every day, such as typing a little article every day.
✓ I improve my typing ability by doing simple exercises every day, such as typing a short article.
错误类型:现在分词/名词复数和搭配问题。说明:“enhance”虽可用但“improve”更自然;“exercise”应为复数“exercises”;“a little article”不地道,改为“a short article”。建议:使用更自然的动词和常见搭配,注意名词单复数。
× I think that small practice will help me more familiar with the keyboard and raise my efficiency and accuracy of typing.
✓ I think that a little practice will help me become more familiar with the keyboard and improve my typing speed and accuracy.
错误类型:冠词和形容词/副词搭配、动词搭配问题。说明:“small practice”不自然,应为“a little practice”;结构“help me more familiar”缺少不定式或被动,应为“help me become more familiar”;“raise my efficiency”改为更自然的“improve my typing speed”。建议:使用固定表达“help someone become more familiar with...”、“improve speed and accuracy”,注意冠词使用。