Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer typing because I usually use WeChat app to check with my friends. I think TAPI is a good tool to communicate my friends effectively, so I think I prefer typing.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes I do because I have some homework assignment to finish by the laptop. The other time I use the desktop to finish some homework such as dominance so laptop so typing is a good way to finish it.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I Start learning learning to talk when I went to the university because I have many assignments and wanted to work effectively. So I pray test topping on my laptop such as dominance. I think the top improve my skills.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think I have many ways, such as if I go to the subway I can use my phone to practice and if I went to the university I can use my laptop online to play test, to practice. So I think we should use leisure time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持简洁;注意语法和词汇的准确性(例如 WeChat 拼写、不要重复表达);用一到两句具体理由支持观点并使用连接词增强连贯性。可以提到何种场合更喜欢打字或手写来增加细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing. I use WeChat and other apps to message friends and complete quick tasks, so typing is faster and more convenient for me, especially when I’m on the go.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理,先明确说明常用哪种设备,然后用一两句举例说明原因。避免含糊和重复,并注意单词选择与语法(例如 desktop/laptop 的用法,avoid unclear words like “dominance”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop every day for most assignments because I study away from home. Occasionally I use a desktop at the university for heavier tasks like programming or video editing.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答要准确说明时间点并简洁描述学习过程。避免拼写和语法错误,句子不超过三到四句。可以提到具体年份或学习方式(自学、课程、练习软件)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type properly when I started university because I had many assignments. I practiced with online typing tests and gradually improved my speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 给出具体的方法并使用连接词组织信息。说明具体练习工具或频率(例如每天练习15分钟、使用哪些练习网站/应用)。避免模糊表达并修正时态与搭配错误。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing on apps like TypingClub for 15 minutes each day. I also use short breaks on the subway to do quick drills on my phone and take online tests weekly to track my progress.
× I prefer typing because I usually use WeChat app to check with my friends.
✓ I prefer typing because I usually use the WeChat app to check with my friends.
“WeChat app”前要加定冠词“the”,表示特指的应用程序;另外不是介词错误类型里严格,但按题要求将冠词列为介词/冠词相关修正。建议在类似情形使用“the + 应用名 + app”。
× I think TAPI is a good tool to communicate my friends effectively, so I think I prefer typing.
✓ I think TAPI is a good tool to communicate with my friends effectively, so I prefer typing.
缺少介词“with”来连接动词“communicate”和宾语“my friends”。中文建议:与人交流要用“communicate with”;此外后半句去掉冗余的“I think”。
× Yes I do because I have some homework assignment to finish by the laptop.
✓ Yes, I do because I have some homework assignments to finish on the laptop.
动词与主语一致无误,但存在复数与介词使用问题。应把“homework assignment”改为复数“homework assignments”(因为有“some”),并用介词“on”表示在笔记本上完成工作。中文建议:用“some”时名词通常用复数;表达在设备上用“on”。
× The other time I use the desktop to finish some homework such as dominance so laptop so typing is a good way to finish it.
✓ Other times I use the desktop to finish some homework, and for some tasks I use the laptop, so typing is a good way to finish them.
句子中有多处介词和代词不当,“The other time”改为常用的“Other times”;“such as dominance”不合适,推测为“some tasks”;连接词用“and”并用复数代词“them”指代多项作业。中文建议:用“other times/for some tasks”,并保持代词和名词数一致。
× I Start learning learning to talk when I went to the university because I have many assignments and wanted to work effectively.
✓ I started learning to type when I went to university because I had many assignments and wanted to work more effectively.
时态搭配错误:动作发生在过去,应使用过去时“started”与“went”,并且“have many assignments”在过去背景下应为“had”。“learning to talk”应为“learning to type”。中文建议:描述过去经历时主句和从句都用过去时,注意动词拼写。
× So I pray test topping on my laptop such as dominance.
✓ So I practice typing tests on my laptop, such as typing exercises.
原句中动词和词汇拼写错误(pray → practice,topping → typing),且词序与搭配不对。应使用“practice typing tests/exercises”。中文建议:多练习时用“practice + 动名词”;注意单词拼写。
× I think the top improve my skills.
✓ I think that practice improved my skills.
形容词/动词形式使用错误。“the top”无意义,应为“practice”,并且在讲过去学习经验时用过去时“improved”。中文建议:用名词“practice”表示练习,用过去时表达过去效果。
× I think I have many ways, such as if I go to the subway I can use my phone to practice and if I went to the university I can use my laptop online to play test, to practice.
✓ I think I have many ways: for example, if I go on the subway I can use my phone to practice, and if I go to university I can use my laptop online to play tests and practice.
时态和介词使用混乱:“if I went to the university”应与前半句一致使用一般现在时“if I go to university”;“go on the subway”比“go to the subway”更常用来表示乘地铁。中文建议:陈述习惯性动作用一般现在时,注意介词搭配及复数形式“tests”。
× So I think we should use leisure time.
✓ So I think we should use our leisure time.
缺少所有格修饰“leisure time”,导致结构不完整。中文建议:谈论“我们的空闲时间”时要用“our leisure time”。