Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repetition; correct small grammar mistakes and tighten the structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and finish with a brief example. Use linking words (for example, because) correctly.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and it reflects my personality. For example, I still write postcards to close friends to express my feelings, which feels warmer than a text message.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and avoid redundant phrases. Combine ideas with linking words (so, then, and) and correct small article/number errors. Keep it to two or three sentences and be specific about routine.

Ví dụ: I use both desktop and laptop keyboards every day. During weekdays I type on a desktop at the office to complete my work, and in the evenings I use my laptop at home to finish personal tasks.

Gợi ý: Clarify the timeline and avoid filler words. Give a clear topic sentence stating when, then a specific method of how you learned. Remove unclear fragments and fill pauses for fluency.

Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school during computer lessons. Later, I improved my speed by chatting online with friends, which helped me practice informal typing frequently.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating the same idea; give specific strategies and a brief example. Use linking words to show sequence or reason (for example, therefore). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: I chat online and type articles or books to build speed and accuracy. For example, I practice with typing tests for 15 minutes daily and occasionally transcribe short book passages to focus on accuracy.

× I type a lot in my daily life, but I prefer handwriting.

✓ I type a lot in my daily life, but I prefer handwriting.

No change needed; this sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses pronouns and conveys preference.

× I think handwriting has more warmth to it and it also reflects our own characters.

✓ I think handwriting has more warmth to it and it also reflects our own character.

Use singular 'character' to match singular subject 'our' when speaking generally it is better to use 'one's own character' or change 'our' to 'people's' or rephrase. Here changing 'characters' to 'character' makes the sentence more natural. Alternatively use 'people's characters' if plural is intended.

× For example, I still write postcards to my friends so that I convey convey my feelings and to them in.

✓ For example, I still write postcards to my friends so that I can convey my feelings to them.

There is a duplicated word 'convey' and awkward word order 'and to them in'. Correct structure is 'convey my feelings to them'. Adding 'can' clarifies intent. Remove duplicated word and place the prepositional phrase 'to them' after 'convey my feelings'.

× So on a weekdays I go to my office and in my workstation there is a desktop, so I use that keyboard to complete my task and back home I use my laptop and use the laptop keyboard to type.

✓ So on weekdays I go to my office and at my workstation there is a desktop, so I use that keyboard to complete my tasks; back home I use my laptop and its keyboard to type.

Use 'on weekdays' (no article) rather than 'on a weekdays'. 'At my workstation' is the correct preposition. 'My task' should be plural 'my tasks' for general routine. Combine clauses with punctuation and use 'its keyboard' to avoid repetition.

× I first learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school, so I retyped.

✓ I first learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.

The word 'retyped' is unnecessary and unclear here. Remove it. The past tense 'learned' correctly matches the time reference 'when I was in primary school.'

× I learned to type on computers, lessons, and also back then, uh, we all have we.

✓ I learned to type on computers and in lessons, and back then we all typed a lot online.

Original has disordered fragments and extraneous filler 'we all have we.' Reorder phrases: 'on computers and in lessons' and fix pronoun usage. Clarify 'we all typed a lot online' to express online chatting practice.

× It was a era of online chatting, so I learned to type by chatting with my friends.

✓ It was an era of online chatting, so I learned to type by chatting with my friends.

Use the article 'an' before a noun beginning with a vowel sound ('era'). The rest of the sentence is fine and uses past tense consistently.

× I've become more and more proficient in typing over years by typing a lot, so I believe practice makes perfect and the best way to improve typing is by practicing to type a lot and try to chat.

✓ I've become more and more proficient in typing over the years by typing a lot, so I believe practice makes perfect. The best way to improve typing is to practice a lot and try chatting.

Add 'the' in 'over the years'. Use parallel structure: 'to practice a lot' rather than 'by practicing to type a lot'. Use gerund 'chatting' after 'try'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× And sometimes I also just type a book.

✓ Sometimes I also just type a book.

Starting with 'And' is informal; removing it yields a cleaner sentence. Otherwise grammatically correct; 'type a book' is acceptable to mean transcribing a book.