Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: give a clear topic sentence, correct sentence structure, and avoid repetition. Also expand briefly with a concrete reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal. For example, when I write a letter by hand I can express my emotions through my choice of words and the way I form the letters, which makes the message feel warmer and more sincere.

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise and correct grammar; use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use linking words to show contrast or reason.

Ví dụ: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because my job involves face-to-face communication. Therefore, I spend most of my time in meetings and talking with clients rather than typing documents.

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and improve sentence flow: give a concise time reference and a specific brief description of how you learned. Use linking words to sequence events.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. My mother bought our first home computer, and while I watched videos online I gradually taught myself to type by practicing words in the search box.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and specific activities you do to improve typing; avoid repetition and correct grammar. Mention frequency or examples of practice and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I don't often practice typing formally, but recently I've improved by typing English essays and emails several times a week. For instance, I write short journal entries and edit them on the computer, which has helped increase both my speed and accuracy.

× Is the way that you can transfer your emotional feeling in handwriting.

✓ It is a way in which you can transfer your emotional feelings in handwriting.

The original sentence begins with a question form 'Is' but the speaker intended a statement. This is a 'there be' / sentence structure issue because the clause was inverted incorrectly. Also 'feeling' should be plural as 'emotional feelings' to match the idea of multiple emotions. Suggestion: use a declarative structure 'It is a way in which...' or 'It's a way to...'.

× I don't type on desktop or laptop everyday because my job doesn't require it.

✓ I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because my job doesn't require it.

Missing indefinite articles before 'desktop' and 'laptop' and 'everyday' was used instead of the adverbial phrase 'every day'. This falls under article errors and adverb form. Use 'a desktop or a laptop' and separate 'every day' as two words for frequency.

× My job mainly is to talk to people come face to face so I spend most more time on communication or meetings.

✓ My job is mainly to talk to people face to face, so I spend most of my time in communications and meetings.

Multiple problems: word order ('mainly is' should be 'is mainly'), unnecessary 'come', incorrect quantifier phrase 'most more time', and awkward noun use. This is primarily present tense/structure and sentence structure issues. Correct by reordering, removing 'come', changing 'most more time' to 'most of my time', and using 'communications and meetings' for clarity.

× I remember when I was a child, about 8 years old and my my mom bought me a computer and then I used the computer to watch the video online and then I learned how to type a word on the search.

✓ I remember that when I was a child, about eight years old, my mom bought me a computer. I used it to watch videos online, and then I learned how to type words into the search box.

Run-on sentence with tense and plurality errors: 'the video' should be plural 'videos', 'my my' doubled word, and 'type a word on the search' is incorrect preposition and noun choice. This is mainly past tense and preposition errors. Break into two sentences, correct plurality, and use 'type words into the search box' for natural phrasing.

× I don't really spend much time to practice my typing skills, but recently I use my keyboard to practice my writing English writing.

✓ I don't really spend much time practicing my typing skills, but recently I have used my keyboard to practice my English writing.

Incorrect verb form after 'spend time' (should use -ing), awkward phrase 'my writing English writing' (repetition), and tense mismatch for 'recently' (present perfect is more natural). This falls under present tense and verb + -ing form errors. Use 'practicing' and 'my English writing' and present perfect 'have used'.

× So in terms of writing I kind of improve my skills.

✓ So in terms of writing, I have kind of improved my skills.

'Improve' should be in present perfect 'have improved' to indicate development up to now; 'kind of' modifies the certainty but placement is fine. This is a verb + -ing/present tense issue; using present perfect makes the meaning clear.