Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve doğrudan hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (uh, like) azaltın. Konu cümlesini net kurun (örn. "I prefer typing to handwriting") ve ardından nedenlerinizi iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle açıklayın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (because, so, however) akışı güçlendirin. Ayrıca ikinci cümlenizde “calling” konusu konuşmanın ilk kısmıyla çelişiyor; tek bir net görüş belirtin veya her iki tercihi karşılaştırın.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient on my phone. For short messages I usually type, but when I want to have a deeper conversation I prefer calling my friends because hearing their voice feels more personal.

Gợi ý: Cümleniz karışık ve bazı kelime kullanımları yanlış (ör. "ride" ve zaman ifadesi belirsiz). Net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (örn. "I usually type on my iPad with a keyboard"). Destekleyici cümlelerde nedenleri açık ve düzenli verin; bağlaçlarla mantıksal bağlantı kurun. Yazım/pronksiyon benzeri hataları telafi etmek için kısa ve doğru sözcükler kullanın.

Ví dụ: I usually type on my iPad with an external keyboard because it’s portable and convenient. I use it for taking notes at school and doing homework, so I can work anywhere.

Gợi ý: Zaman ifadelerini ve fiil kullanımını düzeltin; daha doğal bir anlatım için geçmiş zamanı tutarlı kullanın. Konu cümlesinde net olarak "I learned to type when..." deyin. Sonrasında kısa destekleyici detaylar verin (nerede, kim öğretti, nasıl pratiğe devam ettiniz). Son cümlenizdeki amaç ifadesini bağlaçla ilişkilendirin.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in middle school during computer lessons at our school laboratory. Later my dad bought me a laptop, so I practiced more at home. Now I’m still trying to improve my speed and accuracy.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda hangi yöntemleri kullandığınızı daha açık ve doğru terimlerle belirtin (ör. "online typing courses", "YouTube tutorials"). Kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun ve ardından iki somut örnek verin: hangi platformları, nasıl çalışmalar yaptığınızı ve bu çalışmanın sonucu olarak nasıl geliştiğinizi söyleyin. Gereksiz tekrar ve belirsiz ifadeleri çıkarın.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by following online courses and watching YouTube tutorials. For example, I use typing practice websites and follow video lessons that teach exercises and shortcuts, which has helped me increase my speed.

× Uh, firstly, in Gen. Z, generally prefer typing uh on their smartphones because it's more useful and practical.

✓ First, people in Gen Z generally prefer typing on their smartphones because it is more useful and practical.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and has redundant adverbs. Use a clear subject 'people in Gen Z' to show who prefers typing, and move adverbs to natural positions. Also replace 'it's' with 'it is' for formality. Improvement: Always include an explicit subject and place adverbs before the verb or after the subject. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I considerably, uh, prefer calling my friends because I want to hear their voice.

✓ I personally prefer calling my friends because I want to hear their voices.

'Considerably' is awkward here for personal preference; 'personally' is better. 'Hear their voice' should be plural 'voices' to match 'friends'. Remove filler 'uh'. Improvement: Use appropriate adverbs for opinion (personally) and ensure noun number agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I uh, both iPad with, uh, their keyboard two weeks ago and I prefer ride uh, with my iPad keyboard, uh, because I can keep it, uh, everywhere, whenever I want and I notes in my schoolwork.

✓ I bought an iPad with its keyboard two weeks ago, and I prefer using my iPad keyboard because I can take it everywhere and use it for my schoolwork.

Pronoun 'their' is incorrect for a singular iPad; use 'its'. Sentence structure is confused; replace 'both iPad' with 'bought an iPad', fix verb forms ('prefer using'), and 'notes in my schoolwork' should be 'use it for my schoolwork'. Improvement: Use correct possessive pronouns for singular nouns and simplify sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:12

× When I was middle school, I used to take computer lessons in our computer laboratory, and then my dad bought me laptop and I used to learn how to write laptop.

✓ When I was in middle school, I used to take computer lessons in our computer laboratory, and then my dad bought me a laptop, so I learned how to type on it.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'middle school'. Missing article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'Used to learn how to write laptop' is incorrect; 'learned how to type on it' is appropriate. Use past simple 'learned' after 'then'. Improvement: Include necessary prepositions and articles; use correct verbs ('type' not 'write' for keyboards). Grammar problem type ID:3

× But nowadays I. Want to develop myself.

✓ But nowadays I want to improve myself.

There is an erroneous period after 'I' and the reflexive phrase 'develop myself' is awkward in this context; 'improve myself' or 'develop my skills' is more natural. Remove extra punctuation. Improvement: Avoid unnecessary punctuation and choose natural collocations. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I take lessons from Excel in Canva systems and I generally study some YouTube videos like. Like software or excel program.

✓ I take lessons in Excel and Canva, and I usually watch YouTube videos about software or Excel programs.

Original phrases are disordered and have awkward repetition. Use 'take lessons in Excel and Canva' and 'watch YouTube videos about...' 'Generally' is replaced by 'usually' for naturalness. Remove repeated 'Like.' Improvement: Use correct collocations ('take lessons in') and avoid sentence fragments. Grammar problem type ID:6