Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
How do is invite because I am a customer of it to writing with the law pencil, but this one is I I'm hating it's very on the screen which always was tired of me.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
How old are you left of edited off on us to receive or send emails today are very important for my job and also you know the laptop tool. There's some online courses.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I'll start the principal out there, but when I was a special in my university us on the thing, it was a very interesting. Useful function.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Samsung authorities were writing in my spare time, I also learned some city of my teachers or my classmates.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和词汇使用有较多错误,表达含糊。建议:1) 先用一两句直接回答问题(例如:I prefer typing 或 I prefer handwriting)。2) 用一到两句具体说明原因并使用连词(because / so / although)。3) 避免不必要的重复和不正确的短语,注意主谓一致和时态。4) 用更准确的词汇(e.g. pencil, pen, keyboard, tiring)。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient for me. For example, I can edit my text easily on a computer, and I don’t have to worry about running out of ink or messy handwriting.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答结构混乱且包含许多无关或错误的词句。建议:1) 直接回答是否每天在台式机或笔记本上打字。2) 用一到两句具体说明用途(e.g. emails, work, online courses),并用连接词(because / so)衔接。3) 简化句子,避免额外不相关的问题或信息。4) 注意词序和常用短语(send/receive emails)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I use it for work and to send emails. I also take online courses on my laptop, so I spend several hours typing each day.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 答案含义不明确且语法不正确。建议:1) 给出明确的时间点(e.g. at school / in university / when I was a child)。2) 说明学会打字的经历或感受,使用连接词(when / because)。3) 使用正确的词汇(learn to type, in university, useful skill)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was at university. It was a useful skill because I had to write many essays and assignments, and becoming faster made my work much easier.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清且包含错误词汇。建议:1) 直接说明具体提高方法(e.g. practice regularly, use typing software, take lessons)。2) 给出频率或实例(in my spare time / every day)。3) 使用连词说明多种方法的关系(for example, and, also)。4) 注意使用正确的名词(teachers, classmates, typing practice)。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising every day in my spare time and using online typing programs. I also learned tips from my teachers and classmates, which helped me reduce mistakes and increase speed.
× How do is invite because I am a customer of it to writing with the law pencil, but this one is I I'm hating it's very on the screen which always was tired of me.
✓ I prefer handwriting because I am used to writing with a pencil, but I dislike writing on the screen because it always makes my eyes tired.
句子结构混乱,多处短语拼接不当。原句有不必要的助动词("do is")、错误词汇("invite"、"law pencil")、代词和从句结构不清。改写为两个并列的句子,先说明偏好,再解释原因,语序清晰,词汇准确。建议:先理清要表达的两个意思(偏好 + 原因),分别成句,使用常见搭配(prefer handwriting, used to, makes my eyes tired)。
× How do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
✓ Do you type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day?
原句语序错误。作为一般疑问句应以助动词(do)开头,后接主语和动词。建议:形成疑问句时把助动词置于句首,注意冠词使用(a desktop/a laptop)。
× How old are you left of edited off on us to receive or send emails today are very important for my job and also you know the laptop tool.
✓ I use email to receive and send messages; emails are very important for my job, and I also use my laptop for online courses.
原句严重混乱,包含无意义短语("How old are you left of edited off on us")和句子碎片。根据上下文,应表达:使用电子邮件及笔记本用于工作和在线课程。建议:分两句说明用途,使用连词(and)连接相关信息,保证主谓清晰。
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
✓ When did you learn to type on a keyboard?
原句可接受,但更自然的搭配是 learn to do sth 而不是 learn how to do sth(两者都可,但考试口语中更常用 learn to type)。此处不属于严重错误,仅做习惯搭配调整以更自然。建议:使用常见固定搭配 learn to + 动词。
× I'll start the principal out there, but when I was a special in my university us on the thing, it was a very interesting. Useful function.
✓ I started learning at university; it was very interesting and a useful skill.
原句时态、词汇和结构混乱("I'll start the principal out there"、"special in my university us on the thing" 等)。根据语境应为过去开始学习,强调有趣且有用。建议:使用简单过去时表述过去发生的动作,合并短句以避免碎片句。
× How do you improve your typing?
✓ How do you improve your typing?
该句本身语法正确,无需修改。它是一般现在时的疑问句,形式正确,适用于询问现在的改善方法。
× Samsung authorities were writing in my spare time, I also learned some city of my teachers or my classmates.
✓ In my spare time I practiced typing; I also learned some techniques from my teachers and classmates.
原句包含错误词汇("Samsung authorities"、"city")和不正确的时态搭配,导致意思不明。根据语境应表达:在空余时间练习,并向老师和同学学习技巧。建议:去掉无关词汇,使用 appropriate verb(practiced, learned),并用分号或连接词连接两部分内容以保证句子通顺。