Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
MMM for the real I love to handwriting as a a student. I thought when I was studying I prefer to handwriting the knowledges. It helps me to remember more standing, more stare stand.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
MMM, yes, but most of the time I. Tap on the Dexter top because in China it is a tradition. I mean starting means.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Umm, I thought that was when I in the middle school that I have my own phone and I have the, uh, I know the ways to how to use the computer and I like to explore the, umm, fresh things.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Just to normally by practicing, I thought when you learn something new, you haven't, you haven't do you haven't to know it and act it. You just need to practice more.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer handwriting' not 'I love to handwriting') and avoid filler sounds (MMM). Aim for 2–3 sentences total and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I was a student I took lecture notes by hand, and I found that writing slowed me down enough to process ideas and recall them later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer (desktop or laptop) and one brief reason or context. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary ('desktop' not 'Dexter top') and a linking word like 'because' or 'usually' to connect ideas. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.
Ví dụ: I usually type on a desktop computer because I prefer a larger screen and a comfortable full-size keyboard at home. Sometimes I use a laptop when I need to work outside.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear time reference (e.g., 'in middle school') as your topic sentence, then add one concise supporting detail about how you learned (self-taught, classes, practice). Remove hesitations and use simple past tense for past events.
Ví dụ: I learned to type in middle school when I got my first phone and began using a computer regularly. I taught myself by exploring typing apps and practicing online games.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Answer directly with a short topic sentence explaining your method (e.g., 'I improve by practicing regularly'), then give one or two specific techniques or tools (typing apps, exercises, timed tests). Use clear grammar and avoid repetitions and confusing negatives.
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day with online typing lessons and timed tests. For instance, I use a typing app for 15 minutes daily to increase my speed and accuracy.
× MMM for the real I love to handwriting as a a student.
✓ MMM, to be honest, I loved handwriting as a student.
The original uses 'handwriting' incorrectly as a noun after 'love to' and has tense/word order issues. Use 'love to' + verb base form (love to handwrite) or use 'loved handwriting' to match past context. Also remove duplicate 'a'. Suggestion: 'I loved handwriting as a student' or 'I loved to handwrite when I was a student.' Grammar problem type ID:8
× I thought when I was studying I prefer to handwriting the knowledges.
✓ I think when I was studying I preferred handwriting the material.
Mixes tenses and incorrect noun form 'knowledges' (uncountable: 'knowledge' or 'material'). 'Prefer' should match past context: 'preferred'. Use 'handwriting' as a gerund acting as object or 'handwrite the material.' Suggestion: 'I preferred handwriting the material because it helped me remember.' Grammar problem type ID:1
× It helps me to remember more standing, more stare stand.
✓ It helped me remember more and retain information better.
The original contains nonstandard phrases 'standing, more stare stand' which are incorrect. Use 'remember' or 'retain information' to express memory improvement. Match past tense if referring to student time. Suggestion: 'It helped me remember more and retain information better.' Grammar problem type ID:26
× MMM, yes, but most of the time I. Tap on the Dexter top because in China it is a tradition.
✓ MMM, yes, but most of the time I type on the desktop because in China it is a tradition.
'I. Tap on the Dexter top' is garbled. Correct verb is 'type' and 'desktop' is one word. Remove errant period. Use present simple for habitual action: 'I type on the desktop.' Grammar problem type ID:26
× I mean starting means.
✓ I mean it is a common practice.
The phrase 'starting means' is unclear and incorrect. Replace with a clear expression like 'it is a common practice' or 'it's customary.' Grammar problem type ID:26
× Umm, I thought that was when I in the middle school that I have my own phone and I have the, uh, I know the ways to how to use the computer and I like to explore the, umm, fresh things.
✓ Umm, I think it was when I was in middle school that I got my own phone and learned how to use a computer, and I liked exploring new things.
Tense inconsistency: use past 'was' for past time, 'was in middle school', 'got my own phone' instead of 'have'. 'I know the ways to how to use' is incorrect — use 'learned how to use'. 'Fresh things' should be 'new things'. Ensure consistent past tense and clearer structure. Grammar problem type ID:5
× Just to normally by practicing, I thought when you learn something new, you haven't, you haven't do you haven't to know it and act it.
✓ Normally, by practicing. I think when you learn something new, you don't need to know it perfectly; you just need to practice and act on it.
Original has incorrect auxiliaries 'haven't' and malformed phrases 'do you haven't to know it and act it.' Use 'don't need to' + verb and 'practice' as noun/verb. Clarify meaning: practicing helps even if you don't fully understand. Use present simple for general truth. Grammar problem type ID:4
× You just need to practice more.
✓ You just need to practice more.
This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It uses modal 'need to' correctly with base verb 'practice'. Grammar problem type ID:4