Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I more prefer handwriting because when I have had the writing I had more logical logic umm if when I type in umm I don't know what should I see next sentence or what should I do like you know.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I often type on laptop keyboard every day and not every day, because in the school we have many presentation. I need make the PPT on my keyboard. Yeah, it's very convenient.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Actually in my primary school teacher were teach us how to use the keyboard and uh, let us practice umm, when I grow up, umm, I use it for very friendly.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think it improve my typing is practicing, umm, like, uh, use my phone or the keyboard and, and to record my daily life and, uh, to record my think about, uh, in the bedtime or the.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 首先,回答要更直接并且句子更简洁;避免重复和语法错误。可以用一到两句给出主旨(比如更喜欢手写),然后用一到两句具体说明原因并举例。注意时态和搭配(如 say "I prefer handwriting" 而不是 "I more prefer handwriting"),避免填充词如 "umm"。使用连接词(because, so, for example)使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me organize my thoughts more clearly. For example, when I write by hand I can easily draw arrows and make quick notes, which makes planning essays or presentations much easier.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要避免自相矛盾并用更准确的表达。先直接回答是否每天用键盘,然后说明具体是哪种设备和原因。用正确的短语("type on a laptop" 或 "use a laptop keyboard"),并用连接词(but, because)组织句子。可以给出具体频率和场景。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually type on a laptop keyboard. I use it almost every day at school because I often prepare PowerPoint presentations and find a laptop much more convenient than a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接说明时间点并用正确句式(过去式)。避免语法错误和含糊表达。先说具体时间(e.g. in primary school),再说明学习方式和后续使用情况,举例说明如何练习。去掉不必要的填充词,保持一到三句。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in primary school when our teacher taught us basic typing skills and gave us practice exercises. Since then I have used the keyboard regularly and improved through daily practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答应更有条理,先给出方法总述("I improve by practicing"),然后列出具体方法并说明频率或效果。避免含糊的表达(如 "record my think"),用准确词汇("record my thoughts" 或 "write a diary")。使用连接词(for example, such as)并给出具体例子。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I write a short diary on my phone every night and type notes for my classes, which helps increase my speed and accuracy over time.
× I more prefer handwriting because when I have had the writing I had more logical logic umm if when I type in umm I don't know what should I see next sentence or what should I do like you know.
✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write, my ideas are more logical. When I type, I don't always know what sentence comes next or what I should do.
问题类型:混合了多个从句,并且使用了生硬或错误的结构(属于句子结构和连词使用问题)。说明:原句中“I more prefer”是不自然的表达,英语中通常说“I prefer”。“when I have had the writing I had more logical logic”结构重复且时态和词语选择错误(“have had the writing”“had more logical logic”都不合适)。同时用了冗余词“logic”与“logical”。建议:把句子拆成两句,使用简单现在时描述习惯(I prefer / When I write / When I type),去掉多余词并使用自然表达(my ideas are more logical;I don't always know what sentence comes next)。
× Yes, I do. I often type on laptop keyboard every day and not every day, because in the school we have many presentation. I need make the PPT on my keyboard. Yeah, it's very convenient.
✓ Yes, I do. I often type on a laptop keyboard, but not every day, because at school we have many presentations. I need to make PowerPoint slides on my laptop. It's very convenient.
问题类型:冠词和名词复数错误。说明:应使用不定冠词“a laptop keyboard”。短语“in the school”在此处应为“at school”。“presentation”应为复数“presentations”。此外,“make the PPT on my keyboard”不自然,应该说“make PowerPoint slides on my laptop”或“create PPTs on my laptop”。建议:注意冠词(a/the)使用和名词单复数;用更自然的短语表达“做PPT”。
× Actually in my primary school teacher were teach us how to use the keyboard and uh, let us practice umm, when I grow up, umm, I use it for very friendly.
✓ Actually, in primary school teachers taught us how to use the keyboard and let us practice. When I grew up, I found it very easy to use.
问题类型:过去时问题。说明:叙述过去的经历应使用过去时,原句中“teacher were teach us”时态和主谓不一致,应为“teachers taught us”。“when I grow up”应改为过去式“when I grew up”。“I use it for very friendly”语法错误且不自然,改为“I found it very easy to use”。建议:叙述过去事件时统一使用过去时,注意主谓一致,避免字面翻译式的表达。
× I think it improve my typing is practicing, umm, like, uh, use my phone or the keyboard and, and to record my daily life and, uh, to record my think about, uh, in the bedtime or the.
✓ I think improving my typing comes from practicing, for example using my phone or keyboard and recording my daily life and thoughts before bedtime.
问题类型:动词+ing形式与句子结构问题。说明:原句“I think it improve my typing is practicing”结构混乱,应使用动名词短语“improving my typing”或句子“I improve my typing by practicing”。“use”与“to record”时态与形式不一致,且“record my think about”应为“record my thoughts”。“in the bedtime”应为“before bedtime”。建议:使用动名词作为主语或介词短语(improving / by practicing),保持动词形式一致,注意固定搭配(before bedtime, record thoughts)。