Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Maybe typing because typing is uh, faster and uh, easier. Uh, when I am in, when I in a class, I uh, typing my, uh, lecture, uh, with my laptop. It's very convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
That's hope every day uh, because laptop is uh portable and convenient. I can take it to my class and uh uh re arrange my uh, rearrange my uh record, uh.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned a harsh hiking, uh, when my high school because, uh, our teacher emphasized the importance of typing for uh, uh, uh, for our, our university student And, uh, at that time we have, uh, lecture to learn.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I improve my typing by uh, Online practicing has to uh uh, increase my speed and accuracy. Umm, also, I also use uh. I also uh, improve it by uh.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案需要更直接和流利,避免填充词(uh, um)并注意语法。开头用一到两句给出明确观点,然后用一到两句具体说明原因或举例,句子不超过5句。可以改进时态和动词形式,例如用“I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient”而不是“typing is uh, faster”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I attend lectures I take notes on my laptop, which lets me organize and search them later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更精确并去掉不确定或不连贯的表达(例如“That's hope”)。直接说明你每天用哪种设备,并给出具体原因和例子。使用连接词(so, therefore, because)来增强连贯性。注意复数和动词形式:’records’而不是‘record’。
Ví dụ: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is portable and convenient. Therefore I can take it to class and reorganize my notes easily.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 这条答案语句混乱且含有无关词(‘a harsh hiking’)。应先给出时间点(e.g. in high school),然后简洁说明原因(老师强调重要性)并补充具体情境。避免重复和停顿,注意时态和连贯性。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in high school because our teacher emphasized its importance for university studies, and we had special lessons to practice typing.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且重复。应具体说明你用哪些方法(在线练习、打字软件、练习材料)以及每种方法如何帮助提高速度和准确性。使用连词(for example, also, by)来组织信息,句子保持简洁。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by using online typing platforms to increase my speed and accuracy. For example, I practice daily with timed drills and focus on correcting common mistakes.
× Maybe typing because typing is uh, faster and uh, easier.
✓ Maybe typing because typing is faster and easier.
删除多余的“uh”填充词,使句子更流畅;语法上原句无动词错误,但填充词干扰表达。建议说话时尽量避免重复的语气词。
× Uh, when I am in, when I in a class, I uh, typing my, uh, lecture, uh, with my laptop.
✓ When I am in class, I type my lecture notes with my laptop.
主谓一致和时态问题:原句中缺少动词形式并用非谓语“typing”错误地作为主句谓语,应使用一般现在时的动词“type”与主语“I”一致。建议使用正确的动词形式并去掉多余的逗号和填充词。
× That's hope every day uh, because laptop is uh portable and convenient.
✓ I use it every day because my laptop is portable and convenient.
单复数及代词使用问题:原句“That's hope every day”语义不通,且缺少所有格;应明确主语并使用所有格“my laptop”。建议把句子改为完整陈述并使用正确的代词和时态。
× I can take it to my class and uh uh re arrange my uh, rearrange my uh record, uh.
✓ I can take it to my classes and rearrange my records.
介词/名词搭配及复数使用:常说“take it to my classes”(复数更自然或根据语境改为“class”),并用动词“rearrange”直接搭配“records/notes”。去掉重复单词和填充词。建议说清楚要整理的对象(notes/records)。
× I learned a harsh hiking, uh, when my high school because, uh, our teacher emphasized the importance of typing for uh, uh, uh, for our, our university student And, uh, at that time we have, uh, lecture to learn.
✓ I learned (how to type) in high school because our teacher emphasized the importance of typing for university students, and at that time we had lectures to practice.
过去时与句子结构错误:需使用过去时“learned”和“had”,并修正不通顺的短语“a harsh hiking”和“when my high school”。去掉多余填充词并补充缺失的信息(how to type)。建议使用清晰的时间状语和正确的过去时形式。
× I improve my typing by uh, Online practicing has to uh uh, increase my speed and accuracy.
✓ I improve my typing by practicing online to increase my speed and accuracy.
现在时与非谓语结构:应使用动名词“practicing”与介词“by”连用,表示改进方式;去掉无意义的“has to”。建议把目的结构用不定式或从句清楚表达。
× Umm, also, I also use uh. I also uh, improve it by uh.
✓ I also use typing exercises and practice regularly to improve it.
句子结构不完整:原句缺少宾语和具体行为,存在重复“also”。需补全内容并形成完整句子。建议明确列出工具或方法(typing exercises, apps, games)并去掉重复词。