Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer the handwriting because when I was younger my mother teach me handwriting at the first time she hold my hand 123 slowly to writing in that moment I feel is very good.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I always laptop keyboard everyday because I really like the laptop key top. The voice is just like feel professional on the on the work.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
While I study elementary school of four grades, our school have computer class at that moment and teachers teach me how to use the keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
When I try to typing at my first time, it's very slowly and I just tell me oh I need patience and spend more time to learn. So I remember I used the 13 minutes every day practice.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且語法正確。先直接表態(topic sentence),然後用一到兩句具體細節支持,避免冗長且注意時態與句子順序。可改正母語干擾(teach → taught;hold → held;to writing → to write),並使用連接詞如“because”或“when”使語意清楚。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I find it more personal and memorable. When I was a child, my mother taught me how to write by guiding my hand slowly, which made learning feel warm and meaningful.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需先直接說明每天使用哪種鍵盤,然後用簡潔而具體的原因支持。注意語法(I always use a laptop keyboard every day),避免重複詞彙(everyday vs every day),並使用合適形容詞描述感受(sound → sounds/feels)。可用連接詞如“because”或“so”。
Ví dụ: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I like its compact design and tactile keys. The keys feel responsive and the slight clicking sound makes typing feel more professional.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答應以清晰的時態和簡潔句子表達時間點(Past simple)。先給出直接答案(e.g. In fourth grade),然後補充細節。注意動詞形式(study → studied;have → had;teach → taught)並使用連接詞如“when”或“because”使語意流暢。
Ví dụ: I learned to type in fourth grade. My school had a computer class then, and the teacher showed us how to use the keyboard and practice typing.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然並具體說明方法。先簡短回答現在如何練習,再提供具體練習策略(時間、練習內容、工具)。修正語法(try to typing → tried typing;it's very slowly → it was very slow;I just tell me → I told myself),並使用連接詞如“so”或“therefore”。
Ví dụ: I improved my typing by practicing for about 15 minutes every day. I started slowly, told myself to be patient, and used online typing exercises to focus on accuracy before speed.
× I prefer the handwriting because when I was younger my mother teach me handwriting at the first time she hold my hand 123 slowly to writing in that moment I feel is very good.
✓ I prefer handwriting because when I was younger my mother taught me handwriting for the first time; she held my hand and slowly showed me how to write. At that moment I felt very happy.
此句有多处主谓不一致和时态错误(Grammar Problem Type 27与5)。原句中“teach”应为过去式“taught”,与过去时间状语“when I was younger”一致;“hold”应为过去式“held”;“to writing”结构错误,需改为动词不定式或从句,如“showed me how to write”;“I feel is very good”时态和表达不当,应为过去时“I felt very happy”。建议:把整句按过去时间统一使用过去式,简化并重组句子,使用清晰的从句或不定式表达动作。
× I always laptop keyboard everyday because I really like the laptop key top. The voice is just like feel professional on the on the work.
✓ I always use my laptop keyboard every day because I really like the laptop keys. The sound feels professional at work.
主要为主谓结构和动词缺失问题(Grammar Problem Type 27)及词形/用法错误。原句缺少动词,应为“I always use my laptop keyboard”;“everyday”作副词应写作“every day”;“laptop key top”用词不当,应为“laptop keys”;第二句语法和词序混乱,“The voice is just like feel professional on the on the work”应改为“The sound feels professional at work”。建议:在每个句子包含明确主语和谓语,使用正确名词形式及常用短语(at work, every day)。
× While I study elementary school of four grades, our school have computer class at that moment and teachers teach me how to use the keyboard.
✓ When I was in fourth grade at elementary school, our school had computer classes and the teachers taught me how to use the keyboard.
这是时态和主谓一致问题(Grammar Problem Type 6与27)。句中“While I study”应使用过去时“When I was in fourth grade”表过去经历;“our school have”需改为过去式“had”;“teachers teach me”应为过去式“taught me”。建议:谈过去经历时统一使用过去时,并按习惯表达年级顺序(fourth grade)。
× When I try to typing at my first time, it's very slowly and I just tell me oh I need patience and spend more time to learn. So I remember I used the 13 minutes every day practice.
✓ When I tried typing for the first time, it was very slow and I told myself, 'Oh, I need patience and must spend more time learning.' So I remember practicing for 13 minutes every day.
此句存在时态错误与动词形式问题(Grammar Problem Type 6 与8/27)。“When I try to typing”中“try to typing”应为“tried typing”或“tried to type”且用过去时;“it's very slowly”副词/形容词用错,应为“it was very slow”;“I just tell me”应为“I told myself”;“spend more time to learn”常用“spend more time learning”;最后一句“used the 13 minutes every day practice”词序和时态错误,应为“practicing for 13 minutes every day”。建议:统一使用过去时,注意动词不定式与动名词的区别,及正确的副词/形容词形式。