Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap net ama düzensiz ve birkaç dilbilgisi hatası var. İlk olarak konuyu doğrudan belirten kısa bir konu cümlesi kur, sonra 1–2 destekleyici neden ver. Gereksiz tekrarlar ve eksik bağlaçları düzelt. Örneğin “I prefer typing.” ile başla, sonra “because” ile iki açık neden ekle. Kelime seçiminde basit ve doğru ifadeler kullan; örneğin “I don't like using a pen for long texts” gibi.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing. It is faster and neater than my handwriting, which is often messy. Also, typing makes it easier to edit and organize long texts like essays or novels.

Gợi ý: Cümleler düzensiz ve tekrarlamalar mevcut; ayrıca dilbilgisi hataları var. Net bir başlangıç yap, ardından kısa bir açıklama ver. Uzun tırnaklı tırnaklar hakkında konuşurken doğru fiil formlarını kullan (I use / it is hard because I have long nails). Bağlaçlarla akışı sağla.

Ví dụ: Yes, I use my laptop every day. It can be difficult because I have long nails, so typing accurately is sometimes hard. For that reason I try to use shorter nails or a softer touch when I type.

Gợi ý: Cevap belirsiz ve tekrarlar içeriyor; zaman ifadesi net değil. Bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp kesin bir zaman veya tahmin ver, sonra kısa bir sebeple destekle. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu sözcüklerini (uh, I saw he, I saw him) çıkart.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child because my father was very interested in computers. I watched him use the keyboard and practiced with him, so I picked it up quite early.

Gợi ý: Cevap açık değil ve anlatım bozuk; ne yaptığınız tam anlaşılmıyor. Önce yöntemi netçe söyle (practise with typing exercises / use apps), sonra bir veya iki ayrıntı ver (hangi materyalleri veya uygulamaları kullandığınız, ne sıklıkta çalıştığınız). Bağlaçlarla mantıklı sıra kur.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises and apps. I also use printed sheets with letter drills and spend about 15 minutes a day focusing on accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because my handwriting is so ugly and I don't like use my hands when I'm reading some paragraphs or. Novels and I think typing is more useful, better.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is very ugly and I don't like to use my hands when I'm reading paragraphs or novels, and I think typing is more useful and better.

Errors: missing infinitive 'to' after 'like' (Verb + -ing form vs infinitive), sentence fragments and punctuation, awkward adjective 'so' with 'ugly' (stylistic). Suggestion: Use 'to use' after 'like', combine fragments into one sentence, use 'very' instead of 'so' for formality, and connect ideas with 'and'. Turkish: 'like' fiilinden sonra 'to' kullanılması gerekir; cümlenin parçalanmış olması ve noktalama hataları var; 'so ugly' yerine daha düzgün 'very ugly' kullanılabilir; cümleler 'and' ile bağlanmalı.

× Yes, I'm using my laptop every day and this is a little a little bit hard for me because I have nails long nails on my hands and when I writing keyboard on keyboards it's.

✓ Yes, I use my laptop every day, and this is a little bit hard for me because I have long nails on my hands and when I write on keyboards it's difficult.

Errors: unnecessary present continuous 'I'm using' for habitual action (use simple present 'I use'), word order 'have long nails' and duplicate words, missing infinitive/ -ing form after 'when I' should be 'when I write', sentence unfinished. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits, correct word order 'long nails', remove duplicates, and finish the clause with a clear adjective like 'difficult'. Turkish: Alışkanlıklar için present simple kullanılmalı ('I use'), 'long nails' şeklinde kelime sırası düzeltilmeli, tekrar eden kelimeler kaldırılmalı ve 'when I write' gibi tam bir fiil yapısı kullanılmalı.

× I think it's when I little child, uh, because my dad is very curious about computers and technology and I saw he, I saw him and I was curious about.

✓ I think it was when I was a little child, because my dad was very curious about computers and technology and I saw him using them and I became curious too.

Errors: incorrect tense and missing auxiliary 'was' for past ('I was a little child'), incorrect word order 'I saw he' should be 'I saw him', incomplete clause 'I was curious about' needs an object. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for past events, use correct object pronoun 'him', and provide a complete clause describing what caused curiosity. Turkish: Geçmiş olaylar için geçmiş zaman kullanılmalı ('I was'), nesne zamiri 'him' kullanılmalı ('I saw him'), ve 'curious about' ifadesi nesneyle tamamlanmalı.

× I bring some handworks like paper but on papers says has some alphabetical words like ABCDEF.

✓ I bring some handwriting practice sheets like paper that have some alphabetical letters such as A, B, C, D, E, F.

Errors: 'handworks' is not a correct noun, article/use of plural 'papers' unclear, incorrect verb 'says has'. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'handwriting practice sheets' or 'papers', use relative clause 'that have' to show possession, and list letters clearly. Use 'such as' before examples. Turkish: 'handworks' yanlış kelime; doğru ifade 'handwriting practice sheets' veya 'papers' olmalı; 'that have' ile sahiplik belirtilmeli ve 'such as' gibi ifadelerle örnekleme yapılmalı.