Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I prefer like typing because with the with the rapid development of the society, more and more electronic equipment in my life, I think typing is very convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I type on laptop keyboard everyday because I need go outside walking or study. I I often borrowing my laptop. It's convenient. It's unless I stay at home I use the desktop.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I think when I was child I learn how to type on a keyboard because this time I just play games with my friend. We need a chat chat so I I need I I learned how to tape on keyboard.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I think is need proacting because, uh, if not, uh, always to do it, uh, maybe it's very slow. You uh, use the typing on keyboard. Uh, I, I, I often use the keyboard so.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并减少重复,用一两句清晰表达观点,然后给出具体原因或例子。注意语法时态和冠词,用更地道的短语(例如 "due to" 或 "because of")。可把句子控制在5句内,避免冗余填充词如“uh”“like”。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is more convenient in my daily life. For example, I can edit and share documents quickly on my phone or laptop, which handwriting does not allow.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要组织成一两句完整且连贯的句子,使用连接词改善逻辑(例如 "because", "unless"), 修正语法错误(动词形式和冠词),去掉重复。提供具体频率或场景会更好。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because I often go out to study or walk around campus. I only use a desktop when I am at home.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 应该先直接回答时间点,然后用一两句具体细节说明原因或情境。注意过去时态和单词拼写(learned, child, type),避免重复词汇和口头语。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child because I played computer games with friends and we needed to chat online, so I practiced typing to communicate faster.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理,先给出方法(例如练习、使用练习软件、纠正姿势),然后给出具体例子或频率。避免重复词与语气词,多用完整句表达。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing daily and using online typing tutors to increase speed and accuracy. For instance, I spend 15 minutes each day on a typing website to focus on accuracy and gradually increase my words-per-minute.
× I prefer like typing because with the with the rapid development of the society, more and more electronic equipment in my life, I think typing is very convenient.
✓ I prefer typing because, with the rapid development of society, more and more electronic equipment is in my life. I think typing is very convenient.
句中“prefer like typing”中既有 prefer 又有 like,二者重复,应只用 prefer。“the society”应为泛指社会用 society,前面不需定冠词。短语“more and more electronic equipment in my life”缺谓语,应加动词“is”或改为“are appearing in my life”注意 equipment 作不可数名词,谓语用单数。建议去掉多余词、补全谓语并注意可数/不可数形式。
× I type on laptop keyboard everyday because I need go outside walking or study.
✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I need to go outside to walk or to study.
缺少冠词“a”应为“a laptop keyboard”。everyday(形容词)应分开为副词短语“every day”。动词不定式前需“to”:"need to go",并且并列动词要加不定式标记“to walk or to study”。此外“walking”在此句作动词应用不定式。
× I I often borrowing my laptop.
✓ I often borrow my laptop.
原句使用现在分词“borrowing”错误,且多余重复“I”。此处陈述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时“borrow”。去掉多余“I”并改为动词原形。
× It's convenient. It's unless I stay at home I use the desktop.
✓ It's convenient. Unless I stay at home, I use the desktop.
原句中“It’s unless”结构不正确,连词“unless”前不应有“It’s”。应把“Unless I stay at home”作为条件状语从句并在后面加逗号;“desktop”前可视语境保留定冠词“the”如果特指家里那台台式机。建议调整从句位置与标点。
× I think when I was child I learn how to type on a keyboard because this time I just play games with my friend.
✓ I think when I was a child I learned how to type on a keyboard because at that time I just played games with my friends.
“when I was child”缺冠词,应为“a child”。叙述过去发生的事情应使用一般过去时:learn → learned;play → played。同时“this time”指过去应改为“at that time”。“friend”若指多个朋友用复数“friends”。
× We need a chat chat so I I need I I learned how to tape on keyboard.
✓ We needed to chat, so I learned how to type on a keyboard.
原句多次重复词语(a chat chat、I I need I I)且结构混乱。过去情境应使用过去式“needed”。“tape”拼写错误,应为“type”。补全冠词“a keyboard”或“the keyboard”。建议删去重复并按主句+从句清晰表达。
× I think is need proacting because, uh, if not, uh, always to do it, uh, maybe it's very slow.
✓ I think you need practicing, because if you don't always do it, your typing may be very slow.
原句语序与词形错误。“is need”不正确,应为“you need”或“It needs”。“proacting”拼写错误且词形不当,应为“practicing”或“practice”。“if not”应展开为完整条件“if you don't always do it”。“it's very slow”指代不清,改为“your typing may be very slow”更明确。建议使用主语+动词并注意动名词形式。
× You uh, use the typing on keyboard. Uh, I, I, I often use the keyboard so.
✓ You should use typing on the keyboard. I often use the keyboard.
原句“use the typing on keyboard”搭配不当,可改为“You should use the keyboard for typing”或更自然的“I often use the keyboard”。删除多余填充词“uh”和重复“I”。若要用动名词“typing”需与介词搭配(for typing)。