Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I much rather prefer to write instead of typing. This is because of writing give us a better experience in terms of understanding, having the control of what you're writing up and also memorizing what you are actually practical. So it's it's usually what I used to do when I when I.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I work as a I'm a lawyer, therefore I work I have several documents to deliver to clients and also I, I usually have several experience with them. Therefore I use my personal computer quite often, I would say 6 or 7 hours during the day and.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Let's say from day one, actually, since I I started using my the desktop PC of my on my father when I was more elastic or seven. And from there on I always used the the computer for writing up all the documents needed research and it was let's.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I'm not sure if I need to. I need to basically because I'm quite fast and it's my capacity of typing and use my PC for writing is more or less what I need for for the job that I do. And now so with the artificial intelligence, the amount of typing that I do every day is the increasing everyday more and more.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Migliora chiarezza e grammatica: usa frasi più corte e corrette, includi un topic sentence diretto, poi 1–2 dettagli specifici collegati con connettivi (per esempio "because" o "so"). Evita ripetizioni e frasi interrotte. Ad esempio correggi tempi verbali e accordi ("I much rather" → "I much prefer"; "writing give" → "writing gives").
Ví dụ: I much prefer handwriting to typing because writing helps me understand and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas more clearly, which makes revision easier. So I usually choose handwriting for studying and planning.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Rendi la risposta più diretta e coerente: comincia con una frase tematica chiara (es. "Yes, I use a laptop daily") e supportala con dettagli specifici e numerici. Evita ripetizioni e inserisci un connettivo per collegare le idee ("therefore", "because").
Ví dụ: Yes. I use my laptop every day because I work as a lawyer and prepare many documents for clients. I usually work on it about six or seven hours a day, so typing is an essential part of my job.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Correggi lessico e strutture temporali: usa espressioni chiare per indicare l'età e la sequenza ("when I was seven"; "since then"). Evita parole inappropriate o confuse ("more elastic"). Fornisci una breve spiegazione su come hai imparato o praticato la digitazione e collega con connettivi come "since" o "after".
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about seven, using my father's desktop computer. Since then I have used computers regularly for writing documents and doing research, which helped me improve my typing skills.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Sii più specifico sui metodi di miglioramento: descrivi attività concrete (es. esercizi di dattilografia, applicazioni, pratica regolare) e usa connettivi per chiarezza. Evita frasi confuse e ripetizioni; correggi grammatica e collocazioni ("the amount of typing is increasing").
Ví dụ: I don't practice formal typing courses because I already type fairly fast, but I try to improve by doing short daily typing exercises and using online lessons when I have time. Also, because AI tools have increased my workload, I now type more each day, which naturally improves my speed and accuracy.
× I much rather prefer to write instead of typing.
✓ I much prefer writing to typing.
Use 'much prefer' or 'would much rather'; 'prefer to write instead of typing' mixes forms. Also use gerund 'writing' after prefer when contrasting with another activity. Suggestion: say 'I much prefer writing to typing.'
× This is because of writing give us a better experience in terms of understanding, having the control of what you're writing up and also memorizing what you are actually practical.
✓ This is because writing gives us a better experience in terms of understanding, having control over what you write, and memorizing what you have actually practiced.
Subject-verb agreement: 'writing' (singular noun/gerund) requires 'gives' (3rd person singular). Incorrect pronouns and word forms: 'having the control of' -> 'having control over'; 'what you're writing up' -> 'what you write'; 'memorizing what you are actually practical' is incorrect form and likely intended 'what you have actually practiced'. Suggest clearer phrasing and correct verb forms.
× So it's it's usually what I used to do when I when I.
✓ So it's what I usually used to do.
Redundant words and incomplete clause. Remove repetition and finish the sentence. 'Used to' indicates habitual past; keep order 'what I usually used to do.'
× Yeah, I work as a I'm a lawyer, therefore I work I have several documents to deliver to clients and also I, I usually have several experience with them.
✓ Yeah, I'm a lawyer; I have several documents to deliver to clients and I usually have a lot of experience working with them.
Remove redundant 'work as a I'm a lawyer' to 'I'm a lawyer'. 'Several experience' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of experience' or 'several experiences' depending on meaning. Clean up repetitions.
× Therefore I use my personal computer quite often, I would say 6 or 7 hours during the day and.
✓ Therefore I use my personal computer quite often; I would say six or seven hours a day.
Run-on sentence and trailing 'and'. Replace comma with semicolon or period, write numbers in words for speech, and use 'a day' for frequency.
× Let's say from day one, actually, since I I started using my the desktop PC of my on my father when I was more elastic or seven.
✓ Let's say from day one; actually, I started using my father's desktop PC when I was around six or seven.
Preposition and possessive errors: use 'my father's desktop PC' not 'desktop PC of my on my father'. 'Around six or seven' expresses approximate age. 'More elastic' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'around'.
× And from there on I always used the the computer for writing up all the documents needed research and it was let's.
✓ From then on I always used the computer for writing all the necessary documents and for research.
Duplicate 'the the' remove repetition; 'writing up' can be 'writing'; reorder 'needed research' to 'necessary documents and for research'. Complete the sentence; avoid trailing fragments.
× I'm not sure if I need to.
✓ I'm not sure if I need to improve it.
Incomplete idea: 'need to' requires an object or verb. Add 'improve it' to clarify intention.
× I need to basically because I'm quite fast and it's my capacity of typing and use my PC for writing is more or less what I need for for the job that I do.
✓ I basically don't need to because I'm quite fast, and my typing ability and use of the PC for writing are more or less what I need for my job.
Awkward word order and incorrect noun phrases. 'Capacity of typing' -> 'typing ability'. Subject-verb agreement: compound subject requires plural verb 'are'. Remove duplicate 'for'. Clarify negation 'don't need to' to match context.
× And now so with the artificial intelligence, the amount of typing that I do every day is the increasing everyday more and more.
✓ And now, with artificial intelligence, the amount of typing I do every day is increasing more and more.
Article and adverb placement: remove 'the' before 'increasing'; use 'increasing' (present progressive) without 'is the'. Remove redundant 'everyday' when 'every day' or 'more and more' suffices. Use correct adverb placement: 'increasing more and more.'