Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
It depends on what I am doing. If it's something about school or work, I prefer typing because it's very convenient and save a lot of my time. But if it's something for writing or to do a or A to do list, I prefer handwriting because it can enhance my memory by writing.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard in primary school. We had computer classes and the teacher show us how to use the keyboard. In addition, I also played some typing games to get better.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I try to type on keyboards everyday, like when I'm doing homework or chatting with my friends online. The more I type, the better I got in it. I think just using my computer a lot helps me improve.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I try to type on keyboard everyday, like when I'm doing homework or chatting with my friends online. The more I type the better I get in it. I think just using my computer a lot helps me improve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰,但存在语法和表达不准确(如“save a lot of my time”、“a or A to do list”)以及有重复信息。建议:1)开头用一句直接的主题句(例如“I prefer typing for work but handwriting for notes.”),避免冗长;2)修正语法和时态(例如 use 'saves'、'helps');3)提供更具体的例子或原因(比如说明什么时候手写更有帮助);4)控制在最多5句内并使用连接词(however, because, for example)。
Ví dụ: I prefer typing for school or work because it’s faster and more efficient. However, for personal notes or to-do lists I usually handwrite them because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better. For example, when I plan my day on paper I tend to stick to the schedule more.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答偏题:问题问的是每天是在台式机还是笔记本上打字,而学生讲述的是学会打字的经历。建议:1)先直接回答问题(I use a laptop/desktop/both every day);2)补充一两句原因或频率,并使用正确时态和主谓一致(e.g., 'the teacher showed us');3)用连接词衔接背景信息(for example, because)。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop every day because it’s portable and I can work anywhere. I learned touch typing at primary school when our teacher showed us the keyboard; since then I’ve practised with typing games to improve my speed.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答未直接回应“何时学会”的时间点,而是重复了练习频率。建议:1)直接给出时间点(e.g., 'I learned when I was in primary school');2)用一两句说明学习过程和后来如何保持练习;3)修正语法('everyday'应为'adaily'或'every day','got'→'got better'或'have gotten better'),并用连接词(since then, therefore)。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school during our computer lessons. Since then I’ve practised regularly—doing homework and chatting online—which has steadily improved my typing speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容相关且具体,但存在语法和拼写错误('everyday'应分开,缺少冠词和逗号),句子重复且可以更有条理。建议:1)简洁地说明方法并用连接词(for example, by doing X, and by Y);2)给出更具体的练习方式(例如定期做打字练习、使用打字软件、关注指法);3)注意语法(use 'every day', 'the more I type, the better I get')。
Ví dụ: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day—doing homework and chatting online helps. In addition, I use online typing programs and speed tests regularly to work on accuracy and finger placement.
× If it's something about school or work, I prefer typing because it's very convenient and save a lot of my time.
✓ If it's something about school or work, I prefer typing because it's very convenient and saves me a lot of time.
句中主语是第三人称单数(it),谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 “saves”;另外常用搭配是 “save someone time” 或 “save time”,因此改为 “saves me a lot of time”。改进建议:注意主语和动词的一致,遇到第三人称单数主语时,动词要加 -s/-es。
× But if it's something for writing or to do a or A to do list, I prefer handwriting because it can enhance my memory by writing.
✓ But if it's something like writing or a to-do list, I prefer handwriting because it can enhance my memory.
原句中短语冗余且顺序混乱(“something for writing or to do a or A to do list”),且大小写混用。将表达简化为 “something like writing or a to-do list”。建议:尽量使用简洁、常见的表达,注意词序和标点(如连字符“to-do”)。
× We had computer classes and the teacher show us how to use the keyboard.
✓ We had computer classes and the teacher showed us how to use the keyboard.
句子描述过去发生的动作,主句采用过去时(had),从句也应使用过去时,因此将动词 “show” 改为过去式 “showed”。建议:当叙述过去经历时,句中所有与该经历相关的动词通常都应使用过去时。
× Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard in primary school. We had computer classes and the teacher show us how to use the keyboard. In addition, I also played some typing games to get better.
✓ Well, I learned how to type on a keyboard in primary school. We had computer classes and the teacher showed us how to use the keyboard. In addition, I also played some typing games to get better.
与上一句相同,句子在描述过去经历时需要统一使用过去时态,将 “show” 改为 “showed”。建议:讲过去经历时检查所有动词时态是否一致。
× I try to type on keyboards everyday, like when I'm doing homework or chatting with my friends online.
✓ I try to type on keyboards every day, like when I'm doing homework or chatting with my friends online.
主要问题是 “everyday” 与 “every day” 的混淆。“Everyday” 是形容词,意为“日常的”,而此处要表示频率应使用副词短语 “every day”。建议:区分 “everyday” (形容词) 与 “every day” (副词短语)。
× The more I type, the better I got in it.
✓ The more I type, the better I get at it.
比较结构 “The more..., the better...” 描述一般习惯或现在情况,主句应使用一般现在时 “get”,而非过去式 “got”;另外固定搭配是 “get better at something”,故改为 “get at it” 改为 “get at it”。建议:在表示习惯或普遍真理的比较句中使用现在时,并记住固定短语 “get better at”。
× I think just using my computer a lot helps me improve.
✓ I think just using my computer a lot helps me improve.
此句语法正确,但确保时态与上下文一致。说明:句子为一般现在时,适用于习惯性动作或普遍事实,无需修改。