Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I like both and writing and typing because I use WhatsApp and other apps to send quick messages to my friends. But I usually write notes and ideas by hand. But I am starting a brain brainstorming and writing helps me remember things better while typing is faster for daily communication.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I use a laptop keyboard everyday because I haven't owned a desktop for about 10 years and it's much more convenient when I travel or work remotely. Most of my daily tasks like writing emails or editing documents are done on my laptop, so I usually prefer to type on it.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
I learned the time when I was a teenager at school. Our teachers gave us typing lessons and we practiced lots of lots of computers. Now I use a keyboard everyday, so my typing has become quite fast and it creates.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
When I was a teenager, our teachers gave gave us lots of time and listen so and today I are practicing every day in my daily life. So this is how I improve my typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın, kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kullanın ve ek destekleyici cümlelerde bağlantı ifadeleri (ör. "however", "because", "for example") ekleyin. Ayrıca "brainstorming" ifadesini doğru bağlamda ve doğru şekilde kullanın. Önerilen yapı: 1 kısa ana fikir cümlesi + 1-2 destekleyici cümle.
Ví dụ: I prefer both typing and handwriting. For quick messages and daily communication I usually type because it’s faster, but for brainstorming and taking notes I write by hand because it helps me remember ideas more easily.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Cevabınız açık ve mantıklı, ancak birkaç kez daha doğal bağlaç kullanarak ve aynı fikri tekrarlamaktan kaçınarak daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca "everyday" yerine bağlamına göre "every day" yazımını düzeltin. Tek cümlede çok fazla bilgi varsa iki cümleye bölün.
Ví dụ: I type on a laptop every day because I find it much more convenient for travel and remote work. Most of my tasks, such as writing emails and editing documents, are done on my laptop, so I prefer it to a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda netlik, doğru dilbilgisi ve özgün detay eksik. Zaman ifadesini düzgün kullanın (ör. "when I was a teenager"), gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve son cümledeki anlamsız ifadeyi düzeltin. Destekleyici detay olarak kaç yaşında başladığınız, ne kadar pratik yaptığınız veya hangi yöntemlerin yardımcı olduğu belirtilmeli.
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a teenager at school. We had formal typing lessons and practiced on computers regularly, which helped me build speed over time. Now I type daily and can type quite quickly.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve belirsizlikler var; daha spesifik yöntemler ve şimdiki uygulamalarınızı açıklayın. Örneğin günlük pratik süresi, kullandığınız uygulamalar (typing tutor, online tests), veya odaklandığınız beceriler (hız, doğruluk) belirtin. Cümleleri basit ve doğru zamanlarda kurun.
Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing every day, usually for about 15–20 minutes. I use online typing tutors and occasional speed tests to track my progress, and I focus on accuracy first, then increasing my speed.
× I like both and writing and typing because I use WhatsApp and other apps to send quick messages to my friends.
✓ I like both writing and typing because I use WhatsApp and other apps to send quick messages to my friends.
The phrase 'both and writing and typing' incorrectly repeats 'and'. Use the correlative pair 'both ... and ...' with two coordinated elements: 'both writing and typing'. This fixes redundancy and improves sentence fluency.
× But I am starting a brain brainstorming and writing helps me remember things better while typing is faster for daily communication.
✓ But I am starting a brainstorming habit and writing helps me remember things better, while typing is faster for daily communication.
'starting a brain brainstorming' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'starting a brainstorming habit' or 'starting to brainstorm'. Also add a comma before 'while' to separate contrasting clauses. Keep present continuous 'am starting' for a current change.
× I use a laptop keyboard everyday because I haven't owned a desktop for about 10 years and it's much more convenient when I travel or work remotely.
✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because I haven't owned a desktop for about 10 years and it's much more convenient when I travel or work remotely.
Every day (two words) is the correct adverbial phrase meaning 'each day'. 'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning 'ordinary'. Use 'every day' here to indicate frequency.
× Most of my daily tasks like writing emails or editing documents are done on my laptop, so I usually prefer to type on it.
✓ Most of my daily tasks, like writing emails or editing documents, are done on my laptop, so I usually prefer to type on it.
Add commas around the example phrase 'like writing emails or editing documents' as a nonrestrictive element. The rest of the sentence is correct; punctuation clarifies meaning.
× I learned the time when I was a teenager at school.
✓ I learned how to type when I was a teenager at school.
The original 'I learned the time' is incorrect. Use 'learned how to type' to indicate acquiring the skill. Past tense 'learned' matches 'when I was a teenager'.
× Our teachers gave us typing lessons and we practiced lots of lots of computers.
✓ Our teachers gave us typing lessons and we practiced a lot on many computers.
'lots of lots of computers' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use 'a lot' (amount) and 'many computers' or 'on many computers' to indicate practice on multiple machines.
× Now I use a keyboard everyday, so my typing has become quite fast and it creates.
✓ Now I use a keyboard every day, so my typing has become quite fast and accurate.
Again use 'every day' (two words). The phrase 'and it creates' is incomplete and unclear; replace with a suitable adjective like 'accurate' to complete the thought about typing quality.
× When I was a teenager, our teachers gave gave us lots of time and listen so and today I are practicing every day in my daily life.
✓ When I was a teenager, our teachers gave us lots of time to practise and listen, and today I practise every day in my daily life.
Remove the duplicated 'gave'. Use 'gave us lots of time to practise and to listen' or 'to practise and listen'. 'Listen' needs the infinitive or parallel form. 'I are practicing' is wrong; use 'I practise' (British) or 'I practice' (American) in present simple. Also tidy conjunctions and punctuation for clarity.
× So this is how I improve my typing.
✓ So this is how I improve my typing.
Sentence is already correct. It clearly follows from the previous explanation and fits present habitual meaning; no grammatical change needed.