Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
I think I'm old school person. I prefer handwriting at all. I like to record it, my highlights and my daily life through handwriting.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
I usually type on laptop because I don't have a serious PC at all.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Very young like primary school, so in China when kids nine years old school and information psychology class which IT class so you children can learn how to use computer how to use their keyboard on the class.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
I don't particularly learn how to improve my typing skill. I type in every day, so I think all because my daily exercise I don't know.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需更直接、流畅并减少语法错误。可先用一句话明确回答(I prefer handwriting),然后用一两句具体说明原因和例子,句子不要过多重复。注意冠词和固定搭配,如“old‑school”要加连字符,避免用“All”错误表达“at all”。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better and feels more personal. For example, I write daily highlights and notes in a notebook, which makes reviewing easier than reading typed text.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并修正用词。先直接回答(I usually use a laptop),然后给出简短理由。避免不自然的表达如“serious PC”或“at all”。可用“a proper desktop computer”替代。
Ví dụ: I usually use a laptop because I don't have a proper desktop computer. My laptop is portable so I can work from different rooms.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 需要更有条理并使用正确句法。先给出时间点(When I was about nine),然后简要说明在什么课程学到的并使用连接词使句子流畅。避免直译式表达如“information psychology”。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about nine in primary school. We had an IT class where the teacher taught us basic computer skills and how to use the keyboard.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更明确并给出具体方法或计划。可以承认主要靠练习,然后补充一两个具体做法,如使用在线练习网站或练习指法。句子要简洁,避免含糊不清的表达。
Ví dụ: I mainly improve my typing by daily practice; I type for emails and assignments every day. Lately I've also used an online typing tutor to work on my accuracy and speed for 15 minutes each day.
× I think I'm old school person.
✓ I think I'm an old-school person.
句子缺少不定冠词“an”,并且“old-school”作为复合形容词需要连字符。正确写法为“an old-school person”。建议:在以元音音素开头的名词前使用“an”,并注意复合形容词的连字符用法。
× I prefer handwriting at all.
✓ I prefer handwriting.
“at all”通常用于否定句或疑问句的强调,在肯定句中不合适。这里直接省略“at all”即可。建议:如果想表达“完全更喜欢”,可用“I much prefer handwriting”或“I prefer handwriting a lot”。
× I like to record it, my highlights and my daily life through handwriting.
✓ I like to record my highlights and my daily life through handwriting.
原句中“it”位置不明确且多余,导致句子结构混乱。把“it”去掉并将要记录的内容并列为宾语可以使句子更清晰。建议:避免使用不明确的代词,直接列出想表达的对象。
× I usually type on laptop because I don't have a serious PC at all.
✓ I usually type on a laptop because I don't have a proper PC.
在“laptop”前应使用不定冠词“a”。“serious PC”用词不自然,改为“proper PC”更合适;同时将“at all”从肯定句中移除。建议:名词单数前加冠词,选择合适的形容词表达“合适/合格”的意思。
× Very young like primary school, so in China when kids nine years old school and information psychology class which IT class so you children can learn how to use computer how to use their keyboard on the class.
✓ I learned when I was very young, in primary school. In China, when children are nine years old they have information technology classes where they learn how to use computers and keyboards.
原句时态、人称和句子结构混乱:应使用过去时描述“我学会了”,并用现在时或泛指现在时描述通常情况。句子过长且缺少连词,代词使用不当。建议:分成几句表达,过去学到的事用过去时(I learned),描述普遍事实用一般现在时(children are / they have)。同时简化并规范表达“information technology class”。
× I don't particularly learn how to improve my typing skill.
✓ I haven't specifically learned how to improve my typing skills.
表达过去至今未专门学习应使用现在完成时而非一般现在时;“typing skill”通常用复数“typing skills”。建议:如果想强调至今未进行过此类学习,用现在完成时;若指当前并不学习,可用“I don't actively learn...”。
× I type in every day, so I think all because my daily exercise I don't know.
✓ I type every day, so I think it's just because of my daily practice.
原句中“type in every day”用法错误,应为“type every day”。“daily exercise”在此语境下应为“daily practice”。最后的“I don't know”位置和用法不当,应删除或改为“I guess”。建议:简化句子,使用自然搭配(type every day, daily practice),用“I think it's because...”或“I guess...”表达不确定。