Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and compares typing and handwriting, but it is long-winded, occasionally unclear, and contains repetition. Aim for a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and fewer redundant phrases. Use linking words (however, although, because) to organize the comparison and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "convenient", "personal"). Keep under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for communicating on social media and work platforms. However, handwriting feels more personal and enjoyable for notes or letters, because it helps me reflect and slows my thoughts down.

Gợi ý: You answer the question but your response is repetitive and sometimes unclear. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Remove vague phrases like "I remember that" and avoid filler. Use precise verbs and maintain coherence.

Ví dụ: Not every day — it depends on how busy I am. For example, on hectic days I use my laptop keyboard to send fast messages at work, but on quieter days I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more natural.

Gợi ý: You give a personal story which is good, but the answer is overly long and some phrases are awkward. Begin with a clear time reference (e.g., "When I was a child"), then give one or two specific details about how you learned. Avoid redundant adjectives like "talented, gifted" used together and simplify sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was a child. At a family gathering I tried a PC for the first time and relatives showed me basic typing; my parents liked my interest and bought me a computer, which helped me improve quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer explains a method, but the tense usage and phrasing are confusing. Start with a clear present statement about current practice, then describe a specific past method with linking words (for example, "Previously, I practiced by..."). Give a concrete routine or tool you used to make it more convincing.

Ví dụ: Nowadays my typing has improved naturally, but earlier I practised every day. For example, I would read sentences aloud and type them on the keyboard for 20 minutes each evening, which helped me take faster notes at university.

× I prefer typing because it's the fastest way to interact with people and it is at the same time at all when needed to use in our social media world.

✓ I prefer typing because it's the fastest way to interact with people and it is also useful when we need to use social media.

The original sentence uses awkward and redundant conjunctions and phrases ('and it is at the same time at all when needed to use in our social media world'). This is a sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type ID 16). The correction simplifies the conjunction use and removes redundant words, producing a clear coordinated clause: 'and it is also useful when we need to use social media.' Suggestion: link ideas with simple conjunctions (and, but, also) and avoid redundant phrases like 'at the same time at all.'

× But at the same time, handwriting is a quite fascinating activity that you can do just to fill in the distant world because it's a bit old fashioned but fascinating at the same time.

✓ But handwriting is quite a fascinating activity that can connect you to a different world because it's a bit old-fashioned yet charming.

The original uses awkward adverb/adjective order and redundant phrases ('a quite fascinating', 'fill in the distant world', 'fascinating at the same time'). This matches Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13) and sentence structure issues (ID 26). Correction fixes article/adverb order ('quite fascinating' rather than 'a quite fascinating'), replaces unclear 'fill in the distant world' with 'connect you to a different world', and avoids repetition. Suggestion: place adverbs like 'quite' before adjectives, avoid repeating the same idea, and choose precise verbs and nouns.

× No, it mainly depends on the day.

✓ No, it mainly depends on the day.

This sentence is acceptable and correctly uses the present tense to express habitual variation, so no grammatical correction is needed. It matches Present tense issue (ID 6) but does not require change. Explanation: 'depends' is correct for third-person singular subject implied (my preference depends on the day). Suggestion: keep present simple for habitual facts.

× On busy days I tend to type on keyboard just to interact with my colleagues and to convey messages more rapidly.

✓ On busy days I tend to type on the keyboard just to interact with my colleagues and convey messages more rapidly.

The phrase 'type on keyboard' misses the article 'the' and repeats the infinitive 'to' unnecessarily before 'convey'. This is an issue with verb form and article use (IDs 8 and 22). The correction adds the article 'the' and removes the redundant 'to' to maintain parallelism in the verb phrase. Suggestion: use parallel structures for coordinated verbs and include necessary articles ('the keyboard').

× But on general days I prefer to talk face to face to people and avoiding using tools because I don't prefer it much.

✓ But on ordinary days I prefer to talk to people face to face and avoid using tools because I don't like them much.

Original mixes infinitive 'to talk' with gerund 'avoiding' causing a parallelism error (ID 8) and uses awkward phrasing 'on general days' and 'I don't prefer it much' (pronoun/reference issue ID 12). Correction uses parallel verbs ('prefer to talk... and avoid') and clearer wording ('ordinary days', 'I don't like them much') to refer to tools. Suggestion: keep coordinated verbs in the same form and ensure pronouns clearly refer to their nouns.

× Otherwise I remember that it's important to use.

✓ Otherwise, I remember that it's important to use them.

The original sentence lacks a clear object for 'use' causing a sentence structure error (ID 26) and pronoun ambiguity (ID 12). The correction adds the pronoun 'them' to clarify that 'tools/technology' are the intended object. Suggestion: always include necessary objects after verbs like 'use' and ensure pronouns have clear antecedents.

× And to take advantage of technology as much as we can to make the most of it generally.

✓ And we should take advantage of technology as much as we can to make the most of it.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause (no finite verb for the subject) which is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and present tense/auxiliary misuse (ID 6). The correction supplies the subject and modal 'we should' to make a complete sentence and removes 'generally' which is redundant. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and a finite verb; use modals like 'should' to express recommendation.

× When I was a child, it was in my parents and we went on a special occasion with some relatives of ours where there was a PC standing in front of me and I started using it and they taught me I was quite talented, gifted for it and that's the reason why my parents decided to buy me one and it was my first entering into the PC World.

✓ When I was a child, my parents took me to a special occasion with some relatives where there was a PC in front of me. I started using it, and they told me I was quite talented at it. That's why my parents decided to buy me one; it was my first introduction to the PC world.

The original contains multiple tense and sentence structure problems: 'it was in my parents' is ungrammatical, run-on sentences lack proper clauses, and awkward phrase 'first entering into the PC World' misuses gerund/nominalization. These are Past tense issue (ID 5), sentence structure errors (ID 26), and incorrect use of prepositions/articles (IDs 11 and 22). The correction breaks the long run-on into clear past-tense sentences, uses appropriate verbs ('took me', 'told me', 'decided to buy'), and corrects noun phrase to 'introduction to the PC world.' Suggestion: use simple past consistently for past events, avoid overly long run-on sentences, and use standard collocations like 'introduction to.'

× It did quite automatically nowadays, but in the previous years I used to exercise regularly every day just by pronouncing some words and at the same time typing them on the keyboard, which was quite useful, especially to take notes at university with my technological tools.

✓ It happens quite automatically nowadays, but in previous years I used to practice regularly every day by saying words aloud and typing them on the keyboard, which was quite useful, especially for taking notes at university with my devices.

The original mixes past and present incorrectly ('did quite automatically nowadays') causing Present tense issue (ID 6) and Past tense issue (ID 5). It also uses awkward verb choices ('exercise' for practice typing) and prepositions ('to take notes'). The correction uses present simple 'happens' for current habitual action, 'used to' for past habitual practice, replaces 'exercise' with 'practice', and uses 'for taking notes' and 'devices' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'nowadays' with present tense and 'used to' for past habits; choose verbs that match the activity (practice, say, type).