Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid unclear words or phrases (e.g. “daffodil version”, “MO”) and incorrect grammar. Use linking words such as “because” or “so” to connect ideas and keep sentences short (maximum 3–4).

Ví dụ: I prefer typing rather than handwriting. I find typing on my phone more comfortable and faster, especially when I need to send messages or take notes as a church officer. For example, I often type announcements and schedules on my phone because it saves time and looks neater than handwriting.

Gợi ý: Give a direct short answer followed by a specific reason and an example. Correct pronoun and article use, and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” and “when” to make the answer coherent. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't type on a laptop every day. I usually type on my phone and only use my laptop about twice a week when I need to prepare church documents or edit longer files, because the laptop is more convenient for formatting and printing.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear time reference and concise supporting details. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect tense. Begin with a topic sentence (When) then add one or two specific details about where/how you learned and difficulties you faced. Use linking words like “because” or “however”.

Ví dụ: I learned to type during my tertiary education in the Philippines. At university we had computer classes where I practised a lot, although the old technology made it difficult at first. However, with regular practice I became more comfortable and faster at typing.

Gợi ý: Answer directly: start with a concise topic sentence about your main method for improving typing, then give one or two specific actions (practice frequency, tools, exercises) and a result. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Include linking words like “so” or “therefore”.

Ví dụ: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. In school I practised during computer classes, and later my mother bought me a computer so I could practise at home every day; as a result, my speed and accuracy became much better.

× Honestly, I prefer to do typing especially in my own phone because if I'm doing my typing my phone I'll become more comfortable.

✓ Honestly, I prefer typing, especially on my phone, because when I type on my phone I feel more comfortable.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundant words ('do typing', 'my typing my phone'). Use the gerund 'typing' instead of 'do typing', use the preposition 'on' for devices, and reorder clauses for clarity. Suggestion: simplify phrases and keep consistent subject placement.

× Especially I'm using daffodil version since I'm already a church officer in my church, I'm using those typing instead of writing Co contrary to the writing that I feel MO more tiring as well As for me it's always.

✓ I use the Daffodil version because I am a church officer, so I use typing instead of writing, which I find more tiring.

The original sentence contains unclear words and repetition ('church officer in my church', 'those typing', 'Co contrary', 'MO'). Correct by removing redundancy, choosing the correct verb form 'use', and replacing unclear fragments with a clear relative clause 'which I find more tiring.' Maintain simple, concise wording.

× I don't usually type in my laptop almost every day, I normally do it twice a week since I mentioned I'm at church officer and also I'm using the dev version using my own phone but using also the laptop.

✓ I don't usually type on my laptop every day; I normally do it twice a week because I mentioned I am a church officer and I use a developer version on my phone as well as my laptop.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'type on my laptop' (preposition error) and avoid contradictory adverbs ('don't usually' vs 'almost every day'). Also fix article and word order: 'a church officer' needs the article 'a'. Clarify 'dev' to 'developer' and restructure for coherence.

× I use it only twice a week if there are some any details that I need to.

✓ I use it only twice a week if there are any details I need to handle.

Original contains redundant words ('some any') and ends abruptly. Remove redundancy and supply a clear verb ('handle') to complete the sentence.

× I will be able to remember during my tertiary education way back in the Philippines.

✓ I remember learning during my tertiary education in the Philippines.

The use of 'will be able to remember' wrongly uses future tense for a past recollection. Use simple past 'remember' or 'remember learning' to reflect a past event. Also remove 'way back' for formal clarity.

× At school also we teach how to use the computer.

✓ At school we were also taught how to use the computer.

The original uses present tense 'teach' when referring to past events. Change to passive past 'were taught' to indicate what happened to the student.

× In addition, their technology is not during those time is not really adamant.

✓ In addition, technology at that time was not very advanced.

The phrase is ungrammatical and uses 'adamant' incorrectly (wrong adjective). Use 'advanced' to describe technology and shift to past tense 'was' for past period. Remove redundancy.

× So I have a hard time typing through the computer screen, but at times go on.

✓ So I had a hard time typing on the computer, but I continued to practice.

Tense should be past ('had'), 'typing through the computer screen' is awkward—use 'typing on the computer'. 'but at times go on' is incomplete; replace with clear phrase 'continued to practice.'

× I learn to to be able to become flexible.

✓ I learned to become more flexible.

Use past tense 'learned' for past action. Remove duplicated 'to' and the unnecessary phrase 'be able to'; use 'become more flexible' for clarity.

× I remember during my school classes in the computer subject, I learned through typing a lot during those time.

✓ I remember that during my computer classes at school, I practised typing a lot at that time.

Use past tense 'practised' for past habitual action. Correct noun phrase order ('computer classes at school') and replace 'during those time' with 'at that time'.

× I also remember my mom bought me a computer so I can able to practice at home and it helped me a lot during my subject especially how to type in the computer faster and. Efficient.

✓ I also remember that my mom bought me a computer so I could practice at home, and it helped me a lot in that subject, especially with typing on the computer faster and more efficiently.

Fix pronoun and modal issues: use 'could' for past ability. Replace 'can able to' with 'could'. Use 'in that subject' for clarity. Use 'typing on the computer' (preposition) and the adverb 'more efficiently' instead of 'Efficient'. Remove trailing conjunction and correct word order.