Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho tự nhiên hơn: dùng số ít/đếm được đúng (handwriting, pen), chia động từ đúng (helps), dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp ý. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại bút, cảm giác viết) và nối ý bằng từ liên kết như “because” hoặc “so”.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing on paper, which helps me remember information better. For example, I like using a smooth gel pen because it makes writing more comfortable and neat.

Gợi ý: Rõ ràng hóa ý và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp: nói trực tiếp “desktop” hoặc “laptop”, dùng mệnh đề giải thích ngắn gọn và từ nối (because, so). Tránh cụm từ mơ hồ như “this stuff” hay “on this top”. Nên nêu lí do cụ thể (màn hình, bàn phím, thói quen).

Ví dụ: I usually type on a desktop because I don't own a laptop, and I find the full keyboard more comfortable for long work sessions. The larger screen also makes it easier to see documents.

Gợi ý: Sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc mạch lạc: dùng quá khứ đơn (“I started learning... when I was in secondary school”) và loại bỏ tiếng ừ ờ. Diễn giải rõ hơn hoạt động cụ thể (lớp học, khóa học) và dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Ví dụ: I started learning to type when I was in secondary school because we had a computer class where we practiced typing exercises. I had regular lessons and time in the computer lab to improve.

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và dùng cụm từ phù hợp: tránh nói “I'm typing very bad” (nói “My typing is poor” hoặc “I type slowly”). Nêu phương pháp cụ thể, tần suất và kết quả mong muốn. Dùng liên từ để nối nguyên nhân-kết quả.

Ví dụ: My typing used to be quite slow, so my mother suggested I use a typing app. I practice on the app almost every night for 20–30 minutes, and this has noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwritings because I enjoy feeling when I write something on paper.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feeling when I write something on paper.

'Handwriting' is an uncountable noun here, so the plural form 'handwritings' is incorrect. Also add 'the' before 'feeling' to refer to a specific sensation. Suggestion: use uncountable noun 'handwriting' and include articles when referring to a particular sensation. Note: follow-up sentence errors are handled separately.

× This help me remember a long time and I've very choose of pins so to write something on paper.

✓ This helps me remember for a long time and I have many choices of pens to write with on paper.

Subject-verb agreement: 'This' is singular so verb should be 'helps' (see ID 27 and 6). 'Remember a long time' needs preposition 'for'. 'I've very choose of pins' is incorrect: use 'I have many choices' (quantifier and noun form) and 'pens' not 'pins'. 'so to write something on paper' should be 'to write with on paper' to show instrument. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct prepositions, and correct word choice (pens/choices).

× I often type on a desktop because I don't have laptop, I just use this stuff and I think I like keyboard.

✓ I often type on a desktop because I don't have a laptop; I just use this one and I think I like the keyboard.

Missing article before 'laptop' ('a laptop'). 'This stuff' is vague; use 'this one' or 'this desktop' (pronoun/reference error). 'I like keyboard' needs the definite article 'the keyboard' or 'keyboards'. Suggestion: include articles and use clear pronouns referring to a specific object.

× On this top is shows very interesting and I think it's more convenience.

✓ On the top it looks very interesting and I think it's more convenient.

Word choice and form: 'shows very interesting' is incorrect; use 'looks very interesting' or 'it is very interesting'. 'More convenience' should be the adjective 'more convenient'. Also include definite article 'the top' if referring to a part of the keyboard. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and verbs that collocate with 'interesting' (look, seem, be).

× I started learning how to type on a keyboard since I study secondary school because during this time I uh, have to study communi computer listened in.

✓ I started learning how to type on a keyboard when I was in secondary school because at that time I had to study computer communication.

Use of 'since' is incorrect with 'started' here; use 'when' or use present perfect with 'since'. Tense consistency: 'I study' should be past 'I was' or 'I was in secondary school'. 'Have to study' should be past 'had to study'. 'communi computer listened in' is garbled; correct to 'computer communication' or 'communication and computers'. Suggestion: keep past tense when describing past events and use 'when' to indicate time of start.

× Umm, I have opportunity to use computer.

✓ I had the opportunity to use a computer.

Tense: since describing past experience, use past tense 'had'. Article use: 'opportunity' usually takes 'the' in this context. Also 'computer' needs an article 'a computer'. Suggestion: use 'had the opportunity to use a computer' when referring to a past event.

× I'm typing very bad and my mother told me you need to use a a keyboard app to practice.

✓ I type very poorly and my mother told me I need to use a keyboard app to practice.

'I'm typing very bad' is incorrect: use simple present for habitual skill 'I type very poorly' (adverb 'poorly' not adjective 'bad'). 'my mother told me you need' should be reported speech about the student: 'she told me I need' or 'she told me to'. Suggestion: use adverbs to modify verbs and keep subject consistent in reported speech: 'she told me to use' or 'she told me I needed to use'. Also remove duplicate 'a a'.

× So I in the night I often practice typing on apps in this very improve my keep.

✓ So at night I often practice typing on apps to improve my skills.

Preposition: use 'at night' not 'in the night' for habitual actions. 'practice typing on apps' is fine; 'in this very improve my keep' is ungrammatical — replace with 'to improve my skills' or 'to improve and retain my typing ability'. Suggestion: use 'to' + verb to indicate purpose and choose correct noun 'skills' for ability.