Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent: avoid repetitions and sentence fragments. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct basic grammar (e.g., "it it", "a lots of mistake") and finish the thought.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I make mistakes I can delete or move text quickly, which keeps my work neat and saves time.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, vary vocabulary slightly and use one concise linking phrase rather than repeating reasons. Watch minor grammar (e.g., 'desktop' vs 'a desktop').

Ví dụ: I usually type on my laptop because it is far more portable than a desktop. Since I commute between home and the office, a lightweight laptop lets me work anywhere, which is essential for my job.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently and avoid vague phrases like 'everything they use they teach.' Give one or two specific details (age, course name, activities) and link them coherently.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about ten at school during our computer classes. The teacher showed us basic skills like using the keyboard and typing practice programs, which helped me build speed and accuracy.

Gợi ý: This answer is unclear and fragmented. Give a clear topic sentence stating one or two concrete methods you use to improve (e.g., practice drills, typing software, posture). Use linking words and full sentences, and avoid fillers like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing programs that track speed and accuracy. I also do short drills focusing on weak keys and maintain proper posture, which reduces mistakes and increases speed over time.

× Personally I prefer typing because it it is not time consuming as handwriting.

✓ Personally, I prefer typing because it is not as time-consuming as handwriting.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'it it' (typo) and missing comparative structure 'not as time-consuming as'. Also 'time-consuming' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: remove duplicate word, add 'as' and hyphenate 'time-consuming', and include a comma after introductory adverb 'Personally'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Because in handwriting I make a lots of mistake and and I have to correct it and things got messy.

✓ Because when I handwrite, I make a lot of mistakes and I have to correct them, so things get messy.

Errors: 'a lots of mistake' should be 'a lot of mistakes' (quantifier and plural noun), 'and and' is repeated, pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to plural 'mistakes' so should be 'them', and tense/agreement 'got messy' should be 'get messy' to match general present habit. Also 'handwriting' as a verb phrase is better as 'handwrite'. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' + plural noun, correct pronouns, avoid repeated words, and keep present tense for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:1

× So I prefer typing in which I can delete some content and.

✓ So I prefer typing because I can delete some content easily.

The original ends with 'and.' leaving an incomplete fragment. 'in which' is awkward here; use 'because' or 'since' for reason. Complete the thought by finishing the clause ('delete some content easily'). Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and complete the clause following 'and' or replace with a full reason. Grammar problem type ID:23

× I usually type on my laptop every day because it is much more convenient and portable than desktop.

✓ I usually type on my laptop every day because it is much more convenient and portable than a desktop.

Compare two devices: use the article 'a desktop' when contrasting with 'my laptop'. Without the article, 'desktop' is uncountable here. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'desktop' in comparisons unless using plural or specific noun. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Since I commute between home and the office, I need a device I can easily carry with me, so my laptop is essential for my work.

✓ Since I commute between home and the office, I need a device I can easily carry, so my laptop is essential for my work.

Original is mostly correct, but 'carry with me' is redundant; 'carry' implies 'with me'. Suggestion: streamline by removing redundant prepositional phrase. No major grammatical error; classification as preposition usage for redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I learn type on keyboard in my childhood, especially in my school where we used to have a computer lecture in which our staff teach us how to use a computer or desktop, how to use program, and everything they use they teach.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard in my childhood, especially at school, where we had computer lessons and the staff taught us how to use a computer, how to use programs, and everything they used.

Multiple errors: 'learn' should be past tense 'learned' for a past event (past tense issue ID 5), 'learn type' requires infinitive 'learned to type', 'on keyboard' -> 'on a keyboard', 'in my school' -> 'at school', 'computer lecture' -> 'computer lessons', 'our staff teach us' -> past 'taught us', 'how to use program' -> 'how to use programs' (plural), and awkward repetition 'everything they use they teach' corrected to 'everything they used'. Suggestion: use past tense for past events, correct infinitive form, choose proper prepositions and plural forms, and avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID:5

× They taught us everything.

✓ They taught us everything.

This sentence is correct as written; it is the correct past tense and pronoun usage. No change needed. Classified as correct; included for completeness. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I can improve my typing by doing task by, uh, speak my, uh, speeding technique. So it. That's it.

✓ I can improve my typing by doing typing exercises and practicing speed techniques.

Original contains disfluencies ('uh'), fragmentary structure, incorrect phrase 'doing task by' and 'speak my speeding technique' which are unclear. Corrected to a clear, grammatical sentence using noun phrases 'typing exercises' and gerund 'practicing speed techniques'. Suggestion: remove filler words, use precise verbs (practice), and form complete sentences. Grammar problem type ID:26