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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

I prefer handwriting, uh, I, I think my writing is very beautiful and tidy and, and, uh, I believe, uh, handwriting can help me remember some, uh, important knowledge, yes.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Well, I usually tap on laptop keyboard every day because I don't have, I don't have, I don't have desktop and and I think a laptop is very convenient.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

Uh, I learn, I learn how to tap on keyboard about, uh, about my 5 grades, umm, my car, my school have uh, uh, IT class about uh, once.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Uh, well, I'm not on pupils to, uh, to improve my topic. Uh, maybe I daily life. I use my phone. Uh, so I, so my typing, uh, have improved.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并避免填充词(如 uh, I, I)。先给出直接观点,然后用1–2个具体原因支持,并使用连接词(例如 because, so)。尽量控制在3–4句话内,语言更地道。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because my notes look neater and are easier to review. Also, writing by hand helps me remember information better, so I tend to take handwritten notes for important lessons.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并减少重复(如 "I don't have" 三次)。用一到两句话说明设备和原因,加入连接词(because, so)并使用更准确的动词(use rather than tap)。

Ví dụ: I usually use a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop computer. A laptop is more convenient for me since I can carry it to class and work in different places.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱且有很多填充音。先直接回答时间点,然后补充具体情景或细节。注意时态一致(use past tense for past events)并用清晰的连词。避免不相关或错误的词汇(如 car)。

Ví dụ: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in fifth grade. My school offered an IT class then, where we practiced basic typing skills.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 内容模糊且语法错误。先明确你是否有刻意练习(yes or no),然后给出具体方法或例子,比如 daily practice, online typing exercises, or using phone/keyboard regularly。用完整句并注意动词形式。

Ví dụ: I haven't taken formal lessons to improve my typing, but I practice a lot in daily life by texting on my phone and writing essays on my laptop. Recently I also used an online typing tutor to increase my speed and accuracy.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of articles

× I prefer handwriting, uh, I, I think my writing is very beautiful and tidy and, and, uh, I believe, uh, handwriting can help me remember some, uh, important knowledge, yes.

I prefer handwriting. I think my handwriting is very neat, and I believe handwriting can help me remember important information.

错误类型:冠词与用词不当。解释:原句中使用了“my writing is very beautiful and tidy”表达冗长,且“beautiful”用于书写不够自然,常用“neat”或“tidy”。“important knowledge”不如“important information”自然。建议将句子拆分为两句以提高连贯性,使用更常见的搭配如“handwriting”“neat”“important information”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, I usually tap on laptop keyboard every day because I don't have, I don't have, I don't have desktop and and I think a laptop is very convenient.

Well, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop, and I think a laptop is very convenient.

错误类型:介词和冠词使用不当。解释:动词应为“type”或“tap”中的“type”更合适;习惯搭配是“type on a laptop keyboard”。需要在“desktop”前添加不定冠词“a”。删除多余重复词以使句子通顺。

Past tense issue

× Uh, I learn, I learn how to tap on keyboard about, uh, about my 5 grades, umm, my car, my school have uh, uh, IT class about uh, once.

I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in fifth grade. My school had an IT class about once (a week/month).

错误类型:过去时使用错误与介词搭配不正确。解释:描述过去发生的动作应使用过去时“learned”而不是现在时“learn”。“about my 5 grades”应为“when I was in fifth grade”。“my car”明显是误说,应为“my school”。“have ... IT class about once”应用过去时“had”并补全频率单位(如每周/每月一次)。

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, well, I'm not on pupils to, uh, to improve my topic. Uh, maybe I daily life. I use my phone. Uh, so I, so my typing, uh, have improved.

Well, I'm not a pupil who practices to improve my typing. In daily life, I use my phone a lot, so my typing has improved.

错误类型:句子结构错误与主谓一致。解释:原句“I'm not on pupils to improve my topic”结构混乱,应表述为“I'm not a pupil who practices to improve my typing”或更简洁“I'm not someone who practices typing regularly”。“I use my phone”需要与前句连接,且“typing”是不可数名词,谓语应为“has improved”以符合现在完成时说明已发生的进步。建议理清主句与从句关系,使用正确的时态及主谓一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
TidyNeat; Put in order
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