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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Thí sinh

Actually, although I live in electronic age, I really prefer handwriting instead of typing because I think handwriting can deliver the writer's emotions.

Giám khảo

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Thí sinh

Yes, because I need to use iPad or computer to study every day and keep rules is a convenient tool to type on the screen.

Giám khảo

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Thí sinh

It happens when I was in primary school. We have computer lessons and our teachers touch our to practice type on a keyboard and we need to pass an examination.

Giám khảo

How do you improve your typing?

Thí sinh

Actually I didn't spend any specific time on it because I always use my phones to chat with my friends, so that I use the keyboard every day and gradually I am practically.

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Part 1

Do you prefer typing or handwriting?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 表达较有想法但语法和用词不够自然,句子略冗长且有错误。建议用更简洁的主题句开头,修正语法(例如冠词和时态),并补充一两个具体原因或例子来支持观点。练习时注意把句子控制在不超过五句内并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, when I write by hand I can vary my strokes and add little notes that convey my mood. Also, handwriting helps me remember things better, so I use it for journaling and planning.

Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接和清晰,含有语法错误与不相关短语(例如“keep rules”不明)。建议先直接回答(desktop or laptop or both),然后用一到两句说明原因并给出具体场景。避免不必要的词语并使用正确名词如 “tablet” 或 “laptop”。

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop and sometimes on a tablet. I use them every day for studying, taking notes and writing assignments, which makes typing a convenient way to work quickly.

When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 时间表达和时态使用不准确,句子结构混乱(例如“happens when”应为过去时,且“teachers touch our to practice”不通)。建议先用清晰的时间短语(e.g. "when I was in primary school"),然后说明学习方式并举例,如上课练习或考试。注意语法和连贯的连接词。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had weekly computer lessons where the teacher taught us typing skills, and we practised using exercises to prepare for a typing test.

How do you improve your typing?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 回答含混且存在语法错误(时态混用和结尾不完整)。应该直接说明是否有刻意练习,然后给出具体方法或习惯(例如频繁打字、使用练习软件或做速度练习)。使用连接词(so, therefore, because)并注意句子完整。

Ví dụ: I haven't done formal practice; instead, I improve my typing by using my phone and computer daily. Because I type messages and notes every day, my speed and accuracy have improved gradually, and I sometimes use online typing games to practise further.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Actually, although I live in electronic age, I really prefer handwriting instead of typing because I think handwriting can deliver the writer's emotions.

Actually, although I live in the electronic age, I really prefer handwriting to typing because I think handwriting can convey the writer's emotions.

问题类别:现在时/一般表达与固定搭配错误。 解释:原句中“live in electronic age”缺少冠词“the”;另外英语中常用“prefer A to B”而不是“prefer A instead of B”;“deliver the writer's emotions”用词不自然,通常用“convey”。建议:在类似表达中注意定冠词和固定搭配,使用更地道的动词。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, because I need to use iPad or computer to study every day and keep rules is a convenient tool to type on the screen.

Yes, because I need to use an iPad or computer to study every day, and the keyboard is a convenient tool for typing on the screen.

问题类别:句子结构错误与冠词/名词使用错误。 解释:原句“keep rules is a convenient tool”不通顺,显然是想说“keyboard”;“iPad”前需不定冠词“an”;“type on the screen”应使用动名词短语“for typing on the screen”。建议:检查每个名词是否需要冠词,确保主语和谓语搭配正确,使用常见短语“keyboard”与“for typing”。

Past tense issue

× It happens when I was in primary school.

It happened when I was in primary school.

问题类别:过去时错误。 解释:句子描述过去发生的事情,应使用过去时“happened”而不是现在时“happens”。建议:叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时态。

Sentence structure errors

× We have computer lessons and our teachers touch our to practice type on a keyboard and we need to pass an examination.

We had computer lessons, and our teachers taught us to practice typing on a keyboard, and we had to pass an examination.

问题类别:句子结构错误、动词形式与代词错误。 解释:原句中“touch our to practice type”完全错误,应该是“taught us to practice typing”;时态需改为过去时“had”;“practice type”应为动名词“practice typing”;“need to pass”描述过去要求应为“had to pass”。建议:整理句子为并列结构,注意动词正确形式和代词(us)。

Present tense issue

× Actually I didn't spend any specific time on it because I always use my phones to chat with my friends, so that I use the keyboard every day and gradually I am practically.

Actually, I didn't spend any specific time on it because I always used my phone to chat with my friends, so I used the keyboard every day and gradually became more proficient.

问题类别:时态混用与词汇错误(现在/过去时和词语选择)。 解释:描述过去习惯性行为应使用过去时:"didn't spend" 后面相关动作也要用过去时“used”;“phones”应为单数“phone”或“phones”根据上下文选择,这里改为“phone”;“gradually I am practically”语义与词形错误,意图为“逐渐变得更熟练”,应为“gradually became more proficient”。建议:保持时态一致,选用合适的形容词(proficient)表达“熟练”。

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