Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and redundancy, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting reasons using linking words. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "faster," "more efficient," "easier to edit"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient for capturing my ideas. Moreover, it’s easier to edit and reorganize text on a computer, which saves time when I revise.

Gợi ý: Be direct and avoid vague phrases. Begin with a clear topic sentence naming the device, then give specific reasons with linking words and avoid repetition. Correct minor grammar (e.g., "I prefer using my laptop rather than my phone").

Ví dụ: I use my laptop keyboard every day because I do most of my university work on it. For example, I write essays and emails on the laptop since the screen and keyboard are more comfortable than a phone.

Gợi ý: Good level of detail and story. Tighten structure: start with a concise topic sentence stating when, then use one sentence for specific details and linkers. Fix small grammar ("In Austria, it’s called the ten-finger system").

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was about 12 in middle school. My teacher taught the ten‑finger system and made us do blind-typing tests so we wouldn’t look at the keys, which really helped me improve.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and hesitations; give a clear topic sentence and one supporting explanation. You could mention a specific informal method (practice, typing tests) to make your answer more informative. Correct phrasing ("to be particular" → "to be precise").

Ví dụ: I haven’t formally studied typing; it improved naturally through frequent use. However, I occasionally try online typing exercises to speed up and reduce errors.

× I think I prefer typing umm because I think it's a faster way to write down my thoughts and the main reason I think typing is better you can easily delete or like correct mistakes.

✓ I think I prefer typing because it's a faster way to write down my thoughts, and the main reason I think typing is better is that you can easily delete or correct mistakes.

Run-on sentence and missing connector: The clause 'the main reason I think typing is better you can easily delete...' lacks the verb phrase 'is that' to connect the reason. Also remove filler 'umm' and redundant 'like'. Combine clauses with comma and conjunction for clarity.

× I type on a keyboard every day because I use my laptop for all. Kind of works, especially for uni.

✓ I type on a keyboard every day because I use my laptop for everything. It kind of works, especially for university.

Use of 'for all' is nonstandard; replace with 'for everything'. 'Uni' is informal; expand to 'university' to match register. Also sentence fragment 'Kind of works' needs a subject; add 'It'.

× But I also rather write emails on my laptops than my phone, so I think it's clear that I use the key laptop keyboard more.

✓ But I would rather write emails on my laptop than on my phone, so I think it's clear that I use the laptop keyboard more.

Incorrect modal/degree phrase: use 'would rather' to express preference. 'Laptops' should be singular 'laptop' when referring to the one used. Add preposition 'on' before 'my phone'. 'Key laptop keyboard' is redundant; 'laptop keyboard' suffices.

× I actually learned it at a very young age. It was in middle school, I was about 12 years old and my teacher was pretty strict because we had to do some tests with closed eyes so we wouldn't peek on the keyboard.

✓ I actually learned it at a very young age. It was in middle school; I was about 12 years old, and my teacher was pretty strict because we had to do some tests with our eyes closed so we wouldn't peek at the keyboard.

Idiomatic phrasing: use 'our eyes closed' or 'with our eyes closed' rather than 'with closed eyes'. Use preposition 'at' with 'peek' ('peek at the keyboard'). Add commas/semicolon for clause separation.

× And Austria, it's called the 10 finger system and it is very important to learn.

✓ In Austria it's called the ten-finger system, and it is very important to learn.

Use 'In Austria' for location. Hyphenate or write 'ten-finger' and spell out numbers under standard writing. Also combine clauses with comma.

× I don't study it. I think it comes with the time because I use it so often my brain brain has memorized the where the letters are on the keyboard.

✓ I don't study it. I think it comes with time because I use it so often that my brain has memorized where the letters are on the keyboard.

Remove duplicate word 'brain'. Use 'with time' not 'with the time'. Insert 'that' to introduce result clause. Remove extra 'the' before 'where'.

× So I don't really do anything to improve it, to be particular.

✓ So I don't really do anything to improve it, to be precise.

Phrase 'to be particular' is incorrect; use 'to be precise' or 'to be specific'. The original is awkward and non-idiomatic.