Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer handwriting, uh, because with handwriting I can feel satisfied which I wrote a lot of words.
Giám khảo
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Thí sinh
Of course, laptop more often, uh, because it's easy to carry everywhere and when I uh, need to take notes at class, I can use laptop to, uh, type the notes or do the Pvt.
Giám khảo
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Thí sinh
Uh, well, uh, the time I learn, uh, typing keyboard must be in the primary school, we have computer, computer classes, uh, our teacher teach us to compute and teach us how to make beauty. But at that time I can't type very well.
Giám khảo
How do you improve your typing?
Thí sinh
Oh, will I change my, uh, change handwriting on phone to the virtual keyboard that I need to uh, chat online? So every time I need to use the virtual keyboard, so I typing very often and I make it very well.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、凝练,并给出具体原因或例子。避免过多停顿(uh)和语法错误,例如“which I wrote a lot of words”应改为更地道的表达。可以用1个主题句+1–2个具体支持细节,并使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better and gives me a sense of accomplishment when I finish a page. For example, when I take notes by hand, I can easily annotate and highlight key points, which makes revision more effective.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更完整且语法正确。先给出直接答案,再用具体原因和例子支持。避免不必要的停顿和含糊词(如“Pvt”不明确)。用连接词(because, so, for example)保持连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient for classes. For example, I can quickly open my laptop to take notes, work on assignments, or check reference materials during lectures.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰、语法正确并提供具体时间点或年龄。避免重复词和不相关描述(如“teach us how to make beauty”非常不明)。先说具体时间,然后说明学习过程或进步。使用连接词使逻辑清楚。
Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer classes, around the age of eight. At first I typed slowly, but with regular practice and exercises taught by my teacher, I gradually became faster and more accurate.
How do you improve your typing?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并用正确时态和表达说明改进方法。明确列出具体练习方法(例如练习软件、盲打练习、定时练习)并说明效果。减少语气词和重复,保持1–2个支持句并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I improved my typing mainly by practicing on my phone and laptop every day. For instance, I used online typing exercises and chat frequently on my phone, which helped increase my speed and accuracy over time.
× Well, I prefer handwriting, uh, because with handwriting I can feel satisfied which I wrote a lot of words.
✓ Well, I prefer handwriting because with handwriting I feel satisfied when I write many words.
错误类型:连词和从句连接不当。原句中使用 which 引导定语从句修饰“satisfied”,但实际需要表示“当……时我感到满足”,应使用时间状语从句 when 或连接词 that。并且时态与主句一致,write 用一般现在时,many words 比 wrote a lot of words 更自然。建议:用 when 引导时间状语从句,保持现在时态。
× Of course, laptop more often, uh, because it's easy to carry everywhere and when I uh, need to take notes at class, I can use laptop to, uh, type the notes or do the Pvt.
✓ Of course, I use my laptop more often, because it's easy to carry everywhere and when I need to take notes in class, I can use my laptop to type notes or do the PPT.
错误类型:主谓一致与句子结构问题。原句缺少主语和谓语(laptop more often),导致不完整。还使用不当的介词 at class 应为 in class;名词 laptop 前缺所有格 my;Pvt 应为 PPT(演示文稿)。建议:补全主语和动词,使用正确介词和名词形式。
× Uh, well, uh, the time I learn, uh, typing keyboard must be in the primary school, we have computer, computer classes, uh, our teacher teach us to compute and teach us how to make beauty.
✓ Well, I learned to type on the keyboard in primary school. We had computer classes, and our teacher taught us to use computers and how to format nicely.
错误类型:过去时使用错误。原句中 learn/teach/use 时态应为过去式 learned/ taught/used,因为动作发生在过去(primary school)。另外,expressions like "how to make beauty" 不自然,改为 "how to format nicely" 更贴切。建议:把描述过去的动作全部用过去时,使用更准确的短语。
× But at that time I can't type very well.
✓ But at that time I couldn't type very well.
错误类型:过去时使用错误。句子描述过去情境,应使用过去时 couldn't 而不是现在时 can't。建议:把情态动词和动词改为过去式以与过去时间状语一致。
× Oh, will I change my, uh, change handwriting on phone to the virtual keyboard that I need to uh, chat online?
✓ Oh, I switched from handwriting on my phone to the virtual keyboard when I needed to chat online.
错误类型:情态/助动词使用错误与时态混乱。原句使用 will 不合适,且句子结构不清晰。应描述过去或习惯性行为,用过去式或一般现在时。这里改为过去式 switched 或一般现在时 if describing habit。建议:根据时间选择正确的时态并使用明确的动词。
× So every time I need to use the virtual keyboard, so I typing very often and I make it very well.
✓ So every time I need to use the virtual keyboard, I type very often and I do it very well.
错误类型:动词加 -ing 形式使用不当。原句中的 "I typing" 应为 I type(一般现在时)或 I have been typing(现在完成进行时);此外重复使用 so 导致冗余。"I make it very well" 不自然,改为 I do it very well 或 I type well。建议:用正确的动词形式(主语+动词),避免冗余连词,选择自然表达如 "type well"。