Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 대체로 이해되지만, 길고 중복된 표현을 줄이고 주제문과 이유를 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 예를 들어 ‘prefer typing more’ 대신 ‘prefer typing’을 사용하고, 연결어(for/because)로 이유를 하나로 명확히 제시하세요. 또한 한 문장으로 깔끔히 정리하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it’s more convenient and makes correcting mistakes much easier.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류와 불분명한 표현(예: 'We've called', 'everywhere I can type')을 고치고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 연결어와 간결한 문장 구조를 사용해 자연스럽게 말하세요.

Ví dụ: I usually use my laptop keyboard because it’s portable, so I can type wherever I need to — at home, in cafes, or at university.

Gợi ý: 시제와 전치사 오류('when I was elementary school' → 'when I was in elementary school'), 문장 연결, 그리고 더 자연스러운 표현으로 고치세요. 배운 시기와 방법을 간단히 연결해 설명하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in elementary school as part of a computer class, and I’ve practiced regularly since then.

Gợi ý: 문장이 미완성되어 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 완전한 문장으로 정리하고, 구체적 방법(예: 타자 연습 프로그램, 속도와 정확도 향상)을 제시하세요. 연결어를 사용해 이유와 결과를 명확히 하세요.

Ví dụ: I improved my typing by using a computer program that turned practice into a game, so I enjoyed it and gradually increased both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing more because it is more convenient and it is easy to correct.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and easier to correct.

Use parallel structure and correct adjective form: 'prefer' already expresses degree so 'more' is unnecessary. Use comparative 'easier' to modify 'to correct' and maintain parallel adjectives ('more convenient and easier').

× I type using my laptop keyboard. We've called. It is portable and everywhere I can type.

✓ I type using my laptop keyboard because it is portable and I can type anywhere.

'We've called' is incorrect and irrelevant here. Replace with a clause showing reason: 'because it is portable'. 'Everywhere I can type' should be 'I can type anywhere' (correct word order).

× I learned it when I was elementary school.

✓ I learned it when I was in elementary school.

When referring to being a student at a level, include the preposition 'in'. The past tense 'learned' is fine, but missing 'in' makes the phrase ungrammatical.

× There was a subject how to learn type.

✓ There was a subject about how to learn to type.

Use the preposition 'about' before a noun clause and the infinitive 'to type' after 'learn'. 'How to learn type' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'how to learn to type' or 'a subject about typing'. Note: this also involves preposition and verb form corrections.

× I practice typing every day.

✓ I practiced typing every day.

If the context is past (describing when at school), use past tense 'practiced'. If describing current habit, keep 'practice'. Based on preceding sentence about school, past tense is appropriate.

× At the time there was a computer program which practiced typing like game computer game, so I enjoyed it.

✓ At that time there was a computer program that practiced typing like a computer game, so I enjoyed it.

Use 'that' for defining relative clauses in speech, and include the article 'a' before 'computer game'. 'At the time' -> 'At that time' is more natural. Also correct word order to 'like a computer game'.

× And in improving my.

✓ And it helped me improve my typing.

The original fragment is incomplete and lacks an object. Provide a full clause: 'it helped me improve my typing'. This fixes sentence structure and clarifies the intended meaning.