Typing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、表現がやや冗長で文法的ミスと語順の不自然さがあります。まずトピックセンテンスを簡潔に表し（例：I prefer typing.）、その後に理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べてください。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って文のつながりを明確にし、“recently I've used handwriting” のような矛盾する表現は避けるか時制を整えてください。具体的には“recently I’ve been writing by hand less”などの言い方に直しましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because it's faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, typing allows me to edit and search my notes quickly, so I can study more efficiently for exams.

Gợi ý: 答えは簡潔ですが情報が曖昧で語法ミス（use computer → use a computer/use computers、while I had to use → when I have to use）があります。まず質問に直接答え（desktop or laptop）を明確に示し、その後に頻度や理由を短く付け加えてください。視力への影響を述べる場合は具体的なフレーズを使い、接続詞で論理をつなげましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient for studying. However, I worry about my eyesight since I spend long hours in front of the screen, so I try to take regular breaks.

Gợi ý: 内容は適切ですが、時制と語順に混乱があります（I enjoy I enjoyed）。まず時点を明確に述べ（When I was in junior high school）、その後学んだ理由や結果を1文で述べてください。接続詞（so, because）を使い、具体例（what skills you learned）を付け加えると良いです。語彙は“computer skills”や“basic typing”などを使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I learned to type when I was in junior high school in a computer class. Because the lessons taught basic typing and computer skills, I still use those techniques in my daily life for tasks like emailing and writing reports.

Gợi ý: 回答は率直ですが構造と具体性が欠けています。まず直接に方法を述べ（I improve my typing by...）、次に具体的な手段を1〜2つ示してください（typing practice websites, exercises, timed tests）。接続詞を使い、文法（I'm not good at typing, it's crucial to use the computer every day）を正しくしましょう。また、練習の頻度や成果を述べると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at typing, so I improve by practicing on online typing websites for 20 minutes a day. I also do timed typing tests and focus on accuracy first, which has helped me gradually increase my speed.

× I definitely prefer typing as it is convenient compared with handwriting and recently I've used handwriting.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because it is more convenient than handwriting, and I recently used handwriting.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses awkward comparative phrasing. Use present simple for general preference ('prefer') and compare with 'more... than'. 'Recently I've used handwriting' is present perfect but context suits simple past 'I recently used handwriting' or present perfect with consistent meaning; here simple past is clearer. Use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity.

× I've used typing a lot because of this exam.

✓ I've been typing a lot because of this exam.

'Used typing' is incorrect: the verb 'use' with 'typing' needs continuous aspect here to show ongoing activity. 'I've been typing' (present perfect continuous) correctly shows activity that started in the past and continues to now.

× Yes, I tend to use computer to practice this exam.

✓ Yes, I tend to use the computer to practice for this exam.

Missing definite article before 'computer' and incorrect preposition 'to practice this exam'. Use 'the computer' when referring to a specific device and 'practice for this exam' is the correct collocation.

× However, I know it is harmful for my eyesight while I had to use computer every day.

✓ However, I know it is harmful for my eyesight since I have to use the computer every day.

Mixed tenses: 'know' is present but 'had to' is past. Use present 'have to' to match 'I know' and habitual action. Also add 'the' before 'computer' and use 'since' or 'because' instead of 'while' for reason.

× I used to take a class for technology and computer when I was a junior high school student.

✓ I used to take a technology and computer class when I was a junior high school student.

Word order: 'a class for technology and computer' is unnatural. Use 'technology and computer class' or 'computer and technology class'. Tense 'used to' is correct for past habit.

× I enjoy I enjoyed learning about computer as it is useful for my daily life.

✓ I enjoyed learning about computers because it was useful for my daily life.

The sentence repeats verbs and mixes present and past. Choose past 'enjoyed' to match 'used to'. Use plural 'computers' or 'computer science' and 'because' for reason. Adjust tense consistently.

× That's difficult question as I've not good at typing.

✓ That's a difficult question because I'm not good at typing.

Missing article 'a' before 'difficult question' and incorrect negation 'I've not good'—the correct form is 'I'm not good at'. Use 'because' for reason and contract 'I'm' for natural speech.

× However, it is so crucial to use everyday, use computer everyday while it is boring.

✓ However, it is crucial to use the computer every day, although it is boring.

Redundant 'so' and repetition 'use everyday, use computer everyday' should be simplified. Add 'the' before 'computer' and 'every day' should be two words. Use 'although' to contrast being boring with necessity.