Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
MMM actually I don't like taking pictures because I know my hobby and but I think taking pictures is very meaningful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
As for me, I prefer they'll see in rural areas because everything in various are natural and is in the secret really beautiful, but in urban areas, everything was built by the people that the things they the urbanization.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in my own country. I love my country because my country made me feel really relaxed. Yeah, but in other countries I was and I always really nervous.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并避免赘词,开头用清晰的主题句表明喜好,然后给出一到两个具体理由。注意语法和连词,使句子更流畅。比如不要说“I know my hobby and but”,改为“I don’t usually take photos, but I think it can be meaningful because...”。
Ví dụ: I don't usually take many photos, but I think photography can be meaningful because it helps me remember special moments and notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, when I travel I sometimes take a few pictures to capture the light and colours of a place.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要先给出直接答案(urban或rural),然后用1–2个连贯的具体理由支持。注意词汇准确(如 "rural areas", "natural", "urban areas", "man-made"),并使用连接词如 "because" 或 "while" 来衔接句子,句子不要过长。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because the countryside feels more natural and peaceful, with beautiful landscapes and fresh air. In contrast, urban areas are busy and largely man-made, which can feel noisy and crowded.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 直接回答并给出具体原因,同时修正语法和时态(用一般现在时表达习惯性的感觉)。可以补充一两个细节说明为何在外国会紧张(语言或文化差异)。句子应简洁连贯,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because they make me feel relaxed and familiar with the culture and language. When I'm abroad I sometimes feel nervous because of the language barrier and unfamiliar customs.
× MMM actually I don't like taking pictures because I know my hobby and but I think taking pictures is very meaningful.
✓ MMM actually I don't like taking pictures because I know my hobby, but I think taking pictures is very meaningful.
问题类型:句子结构错误(26)。原句中“because I know my hobby and but”包含多余连接词“and”和“but”一同出现,导致句子结构混乱。建议去掉多余的连接词,使句子在语义上连贯:使用“because ... , but ...”来表达前后相反的观点。
× As for me, I prefer they'll see in rural areas because everything in various are natural and is in the secret really beautiful, but in urban areas, everything was built by the people that the things they the urbanization.
✓ As for me, I prefer rural areas because everything there is natural and really beautiful, but in urban areas everything was built by people due to urbanization.
问题类型:代词和句子结构错误(12, 26)。原句使用“they'll see”、“in various”、“is in the secret”等短语不符合英语表达,代词和指示词使用错误且句子结构混乱。建议: - 用 there 指代地点(everything there is natural)。 - 用 simple adjective order(natural and really beautiful)。 - 用 due to urbanization 或 because of urbanization 表示原因,去掉多余的代词和不完整的短语。以上改正使句子语法和意思更清晰。
× I prefer views in my own country. I love my country because my country made me feel really relaxed. Yeah, but in other countries I was and I always really nervous.
✓ I prefer views in my own country. I love my country because it makes me feel really relaxed. Yeah, but in other countries I am always really nervous.
问题类型:现在时态问题(6)。原句中“I love my country because my country made me feel really relaxed.”使用了过去式“made”,与上下文(现在喜好)不一致,应使用一般现在时“makes”。另外“in other countries I was and I always really nervous.” 中使用了过去式“was”且句子不完整,应改为现在时“I am always really nervous”。建议:在表达习惯性或持续的感受时使用一般现在时(make/makes, am/is/are)。