Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views when I was go to journey with my friends I usually taking the pictures oh because it will help me to remember the views I ever met and uh also I will put it in my Instagram.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in rural areas because it was more natural and I enjoy to. I enjoy the fresh air in the rural areas and the beautiful natural views.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in other countries because for me, it's very fresh for me and I like to, uh, take the pictures of different places. I would be excited.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更符合語法,避免時態和語序錯誤;控制在最多五句,開頭直接回答問題,然後用一到兩句具體原因或例子支持。說話時減少填充詞(如 uh, oh),並使用連接詞使句子更連貫。舉例說明何時、怎麼拍攝以及拍照的目的會更具體。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel with friends. I usually take pictures to remember the places I visit and to share highlights on Instagram. For example, I often photograph landscapes at sunset because the light makes the scene more memorable.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要注意時態一致與語法完整,避免短句片段和語法錯誤。開頭先表達偏好(主題句),接著用一到兩個具體原因並用連接詞(例如 because, and, for example)連接。可以加入對比或具體場景來豐富內容。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel more natural and peaceful. The fresh air and rolling hills are relaxing, and I especially like photographing small farms and rivers when the light is soft in the morning.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需避免重複和口頭禪,表達要更具體說明“新鮮感”具體指什麼(如文化、建築或自然景觀不同)。控制句子長度在五句以內,使用連接詞給出具體例子或感受來支持觀點。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new scenery and cultural elements I haven't seen before. For instance, I enjoy photographing unique architecture and local markets, which feel exciting and different from what I see at home.
× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views when I was go to journey with my friends I usually taking the pictures oh because it will help me to remember the views I ever met and uh also I will put it in my Instagram.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views. When I go on trips with my friends, I usually take pictures because they help me remember the places I've seen, and I also post them on my Instagram.
错误类型:句子结构混乱、动词时态与形式不正确、动词搭配错误。 解释与建议:原句包含多个子句但缺少适当的连接和标点,导致结构混乱。‘when I was go to journey’ 中时态和搭配错误,应为一般现在时或现在完成时的适当表达:‘when I go on trips’ 或 ‘when I went on a trip’;‘I usually taking the pictures’ 中动词形式错误,应使用动词原形 take(在助动词或情态之外直接用一般现在时)。‘it will help me to remember the views I ever met’ 不自然,‘ever met’ 用法错误,建议改为 ‘help me remember the places I’ve seen’(使用现在完成时短语表示曾经看过)。最后,口语填充词 (oh, uh)和冗余语句应省略或分成短句以提高清晰度。练习方法:将长句拆成几个短句,注意主语和动词的一致,练习常用动词短语(go on a trip, take pictures, post on Instagram)。
× I prefer views in rural areas because it was more natural and I enjoy to.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they are more natural, and I enjoy them.
错误类型:时态与代词搭配错误、动词后缺对象。 解释与建议:句首使用一般现在时 ‘I prefer’,所以描述原因的从句也应使用一般现在时而不是过去时,‘it was more natural’ 应改为 ‘they are more natural’(views 为复数,用复数代词 they)。‘I enjoy to’ 是不完整的表达,动词 enjoy 后应直接跟名词或动名词,如 ‘enjoy them’ 或 ‘enjoy the fresh air’。练习方法:注意时态一致性(所有一般事实使用一般现在时),复数名词用复数代词,记忆 enjoy 的用法(enjoy + 名词/动名词)。
× I enjoy the fresh air in the rural areas and the beautiful natural views.
✓ I enjoy the fresh air in rural areas and the beautiful natural scenery.
错误类型:动名词/名词搭配与词汇选择。 解释与建议:句子总体正确,但 ‘in the rural areas’ 中冠词可省略为更自然的 ‘in rural areas’。此外 ‘beautiful natural views’ 可更地道地表达为 ‘beautiful natural scenery’。练习方法:多听地道表达,注意可数/不可数名词用法及搭配(scenery 通常不可数,且更符合 ‘natural’ 修饰)。
× I prefer views in other countries because for me, it's very fresh for me and I like to, uh, take the pictures of different places. I would be excited.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because they feel refreshing to me and I like to take pictures of different places. I would be excited.
错误类型:时态/表达重复与动词短语搭配问题。 解释与建议:原句中 ‘for me, it's very fresh for me’ 有重复,应删去一个 ‘for me’ 并改用更自然的表达如 ‘they feel refreshing to me’。‘I like to, uh, take the pictures of different places’ 中 ‘the pictures’ 冠词不必要,改为 ‘take pictures of different places’。最后一句 ‘I would be excited’ 可以保留,表示一种假设或将来的情绪,但在口语中更自然的是 ‘I would be excited to go’ 或 ‘I get excited’ 根据语境选择。练习方法:避免重复短语,注意 feel/feelings 的正确搭配,练习去掉口语填充词并用更简洁的表达。